Originally posted by: lashy
It's going very very well Stuti... keep it up 🤗
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"I haven't started yet, Mr. Singh. How can I deceive you from the experience of interrogation?
*whistle podu*😎
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Jalal smiled and sat in front of me
In front of you, Stuti? 😲Jalal sat in front of you?
>>OOPPS!! 😛 🤣
After his death Jaymal has started changing his colour.
😡 This family
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"What a question! What will a man do in his bedroom at night?
Stutiii 😲 I know it wasn't meant that way... but I really laughed out loud at this remark! 😆
>>🤣 🤣 DIII!! 🤣
"How much cash you have stolen from the fund of the farm, Mr. Bhagwant Singh? Jalal asked very gently, with a slight smile.
"Easy Bhagwant easy! Jalal suddenly laughed. "
Hai hai ACP Sahib! 😎
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After lunch, Jodha was busy with her siblings, and Jalal was getting bored alone... There was no network, no chat
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>>Poor Jalal. 😆 He will be strongly recommended to read HBAS to kill his boredom from me. 😆 😉
"Whom are you calling thief? Are you a saint? Don't I know the story behind your properties? Tauji, I am very precise about my want... I want my portion of property from you! Bhagwant was adamant.
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"Get lost! You jerk!
Bharmal ji young generations' swear words use karne se young nahi ho jaate😉
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"After that, you and your wife will not be able to survive with respect, I will take care of that. You know me very well! He stated in a very cold voice...
Kyaa respect? Khud pehle aine mein dekh lo kitni respect hai
>>You are so angry on him. 😆
"Gambling... Bhagwant's voice was low now... "But I would return that...
"Not more than 5-6 lakhs... I swear! Bhagwant told. "I don't know from where Tauji came with the deficit of 50 lakhs! I am sure Surya is behind this too! Tauji used to trust on him a bit too much!
Oooh interesting angle! Chota parivaar sukh parivaar! Tauji women trafficking, bhateeja gambling! Shabaash!
>> Hold on... or bhi bohot kuch samne aane wala hay. 🤣
"She has a problem of Parkinson disease from a long time. It worsened 1-2 years back, but now under medication she was fine enough. Bhagwant said. "From the morning she is suffering again. Doctor will come soon.
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"Do you think you will find the murderer from the crowd of these thousands of finger-prints in these cupboards and drawers?
"No sir! Then?
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More than his plate, Jalal's eyes were roaming around everyone's hands.
Is this house a gathering of all the leftie people of the world? Ridiculous! Jalal sighed. So many lefties in a single family!
I thought just the same! 😆 But Stuti needs to keep number of suspects high na... isliye!
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"Go and buy a bound notebook to record the case. I hate disorganized work!
Basically though he was yelling on Mr. Sahani, Jalal knew that he is expecting too much from these cops by expecting a little bit disciplined and organized work.
Such a disciplined understanding man!
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Jalal can understand even if he is transferred in a hell village like Madhubani, maybe he will take only 1-2 years to become Mr. Sahani!
No way!
"I understand. Jalal stopped him with a sympathetic smile."
"Or Kya! Sahani gave a sarcastic smile"
Ye kyaa donon bff ho gaye!😆 Ekdam smile smile and all...
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He again went through them to recall the serial of incidents in the day of the murder...
(Lashy secretly stealing Jalal's notes so she can remember the sequence of incidents too)
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21 December, Morning...
The hall was being decorated for the ceremony of engagement.
21 December, around 3pm...
Just after the lunch
Mr. Bharmal started shouting on Neelu.
21 December, around 5 pm...
Shivani caught Surya quarrelling with Mr. Singh.
21 December, around 5:30...
The rituals of engagement took place.
21 December, around 6:30...
Mr. Bharmal introduced me and Jodha with Someswar and Vinayak Singh.
21 December, around 7:00...
Mohini noticed Surya talking with someone excitedly on mobile.
21 December, around 11 pm...
Bharmal Singh called me and offered half of the empire along with the princess at the condition of dropping Bhiwandi's case . Nirmala Singh spotted us.
22 December, around 1 am...
Meenakshi Aunty spotted me and Jodha at the stairs.
Sukanya took an idiotic and vein attempt of ending her life...
Bharmal Singh was murdered.
(Lashy closes the notes carefully)
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The strain of melancholy with a load of anger and resentment on Jodha which was hidden somehow in the work-pressure, came forward again.
"Don't say like this... Jodha told. There was a clear tone of wet request in her voice which is rare... She composed herself at the next moment. "I think... I think we need to talk...
Still his head is burning whenever he is thinking about those poems and all and Jodha's attitude after the whole thing, and he is lashing out on her. Utterly immature and childish! Strange! Funny!
"Grow up Jalal Khan, grow up! Don't make this silly thing a big issue in the crisis period of Jodha's family! Grow up! Jalal groaned on himself.
Very understandable👏... I liked the way you've written about his emotions Stuti... his reactions are so natural... you've drawn this curve of their fight/tiff very very well... basically, it all boils down to 'ego'
He's not a saint... he's a human being and so is she..
>> 😳 Actually these things are very common. I have seen many couples around me fighting like this and then to patch up as if nothing happened. 😆
This small bump which they'll patch over soon... (will we be blessed with a sweetly-bold patch up session?☺️) will lead to a stronger, more transparent relationship between the two!
>> Yes. 😳 And you will have it at the next update. 😉
"Hello? He responded, adding extra gravity in his voice...
☺️ Strong heroes!
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Btw, I must also commend you for keeping a mystery story as just that - no unnecessary descriptions of this and that.. no long romantic scenes and eyelocks...
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Romance is only a part of ROD and 👏 for keeping it like how it must be!
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I read that you'll be updating the next after your exams.. will be waiting for it... wish you all the best for your exams!
>> Thank you so much di😳
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
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