The riddle of death... (end) - Page 21

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani

My god such a thrilling chapter stuti👏

😃Thanks for liking it Mirza. 😆

Ufff itna saara mystery 😆😆😆

Oh saachme!! 😃 😉

Loved the way you have penned down Bharmal's murder

😃

It's really a commendable job dude👏

☺️

Okay moving to the chapter

Bharmal got killed pata tha mujhe aisa hoga par itne jaldi hoga 😲

I didn't want to stretch it so... 😛

Wow Jalal ne kya investigation ki hia dude👏👏👏

You liked that part? 😃

So many evidences ]🤔

Who can be the real killer and on top of that Surya is missing😕

Very confusing dude😕

How can Jo be so sure that Surya is not the killer😕😕😕

Hmmm Kuch to gadbad hay. 🤣

Akdha ke moments ko disturb karne ke liye humesha koi rehta hi hai 😆😆

*Sigh* never mind😒

These disturbing moments are also necessary. 😆

That inspector part was a bit funny one😆

Samajh nahi aa raha kya comment du re coz I'm myself confused 😕

Chalo let me see how I can save you from confusion. 😆

But muhe toh abhi yeh sab jhuth hi laga raha hai 😆

Kya jhooth lag raha hay?

Surya is the one I feel but how can he do it😕

Why can't he? 😆

Even if he's not then why the hell did he flee away😕

Wohi to!

Arghhh stuti yaar puri confused hu mai 😡

🤣 Aab to ayega maza!

Update soon coz I'm damnnn curious to know regarding this

I will update sooner but why so less number of readers! 😭

Originally posted by: shailusri1983

That's the spirit Stuti! We all understand it is your first time experimenting with this style. The current chapter was very good. I had no issues with that. I liked it very much. A bit of reading will help a lot in your conceptualization.

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

I will update sooner but why so less number of readers! 😭

Police investigation is on to find the culprit. Sahani fellow is so typical of Indian police, irresponsible and casual. Jalal😆 like the typical CBI hero😉😆 BTW, Where is watson for Holmes?😆😆 Amidst all this Jalal and Jodha romance😆😆 (background song was missing) Surya is faltu suspect😆. What is the background story of Sukanya?

🤔 I suspect Jodha' s mother to be the killer😆😆 She is 2nd wife nah!😉 Shivani also is one suspect😆😆😆

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam

Police investigation is on to find the culprit. Sahani fellow is so typical of Indian police, irresponsible and casual. Jalal😆 like the typical CBI hero😉😆 BTW, Where is watson for Holmes?😆😆 Amidst all this Jalal and Jodha romance😆😆 (background song was missing) Surya is faltu suspect😆. What is the background story of Sukanya?

Jalal the detective does not need any Watson. 😆 Well, he has a gf like Jodha. 😉

Typical CBI hero or CID ones? 😆

Oh so you are so sure that Surya is faltu suspect? 🤣 It's obvious no, in detective stories the one who is been suspected first is surely innocent. 😆

🤔 I suspect Jodha' s mother to be the killer😆😆 She is 2nd wife nah!😉 Shivani also is one suspect 😆

Ohh so you too are on with all your detective instinct?

Thanks for pm😆

Thanks for comment DI! 😃

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

First of all

Congrats for new story stuti

Interesting concept

It's fun and interesting to read something different from other stories

You really did hard work for this story

I really appreciate your effort dear

Oho Thank you thank you thank you...☺️ ☺️ ☺️ for such a big and hearty comment!! 😳😃

Seems like you did too much of research on crime based story

No not much... The idea haunted me while reading some detective stories and watching some crime fictions one after another. 😆

So somebody killed bharmal

Description of sub inspector and his attitude is funny

Too much of proud of himself

Typical police attitude

Ekdum! 😆

I really like jalal attitude

Too sharp and intelligent

Like the way he immediately start investigate the matter

His moves are very calculatives

😉 😉

So everyone suspecting surya for this murder including jalal except jodha

Me too don't think surya killed bharmal

Something jodha hiding from jalal about surya

Something which jodha don't want to share with jalal

Both jodha and surya are childhood friends

so its obvious that both knows each other too well

I think surya like or loves jodha but jodha. . .

You're thinking like detective. 😉

Flashback

I am glad stuti you manage to add some romantic movement in between all this

Aww both are deeply and madly in love

😃 😃

Everything is change in one night

Poor jalal and jodha comes to spent their holidays but all change

Hmm poor guys. 😛

Too many characters

Everybody has different thinking and attitude towards bharmal

I don't think everyone is fond of bharmal

Some of them scared of him and some of don't like him also

So anyone in bharmal family has motive to killed him

Hmm you're going on a right track. 😉

In all this Sukanya angel also there

She is too distrub in her life

Hmm!

Let's see what happen next

Waiting eagerly for next update

Plz update soon

Yes I will... Thank you.🤗

Originally posted by: lashy

Yes dear... sorry didn't know how else to give examples... but for example, in HBAS, Chacha jaan is just that.. kakisa is just that.. Maharaj kaka (chef) is just that

There are names, but only when it would become too confusing if we didn't have them - I'm not saying HBAS is without it's faults... was only trying to give example dear.. 🤗

Yes I got it. It becomes easier to remember characters by relations... but you know, here all the characters whose names are mentioned has their own importance in the story... so I thought that it will be easier for me to give them names. 🤔

She's an author who's always been very forthcoming towards comments both good and critical - that shows her potential for growth and rising to greater heights!👏

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Stuti... you might have to make peace with the fact that this story would get lesser readers because of its theme - it's not a romantic story... it's intrigue...

Hmm! 😔

From personal experience, I tell you - politics, intrigue, social causes, comedy - all of these though very interesting unfortunately do not garner the kind of readership that romance and drama does... (which is why, you may find Destined Love and your other story New Life??? has max readership)

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So, don't worry about the number of likes. Write this as an exercise for your creative development and write for a niche set of readers who enjoy mystery!😈 Like me!

Love you!! 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: pandrangijyothi

Amazing starting stuti.⭐️ congrats for your new story👏

I love this type of murder mystery stories very much..

Like your other stories... This creative experiment also...👍🏼

update next chapter soon..m😉🤗