The riddle of death... (end) - Page 22

Stuti ami na ekhono somoy koreuthte parchi na...amar mejo jethu mara gache porsu...so barite ektu chap bjhtei parchis...so ektu chap mukto hoi to porbo...konomote FB te r IF e aschi

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

Stuti ami na ekhono somoy koreuthte parchi na...amar mejo jethu mara gache porsu...so barite ektu chap bjhtei parchis...so ektu chap mukto hoi to porbo...konomote FB te r IF e aschi

Hey stuti don't lose hope yaar. I know the number of readers is less but keep going dude I'm sure one day this story will receive a wonderful response😃

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani

Hey stuti don't lose hope yaar. I know the number of readers is less but keep going dude I'm sure one day this story will receive a wonderful response😃

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Hope your words become true... I am not losing hope... But...you know...😆

Yeah I understand. 😉

Originally posted by: ParijatDeewani

Update kab de rahi ho?

The teaser was thrilling. The introduction was super- Jodha springing her fiance in a such a flamboyant fashion. Loved it. So many family members were introduced.

The first chapter- the murder has taken place. What a sloth the sub-inpector is! No wonder Jalal had to pull rank on him. Jalal's deductions point to Surya as the culprit but Jodha refutes it.

The couple managed to steal a few moments for themselves that night. Sukanya's suicide attempt was a shock to everyone. This was followed by another one which was outlined at the beginning of the chapter.

I am enjoying this murder mystery mingled with romance a lot. Carry on your wonderful writing, Stuti dear. Thank you for trying your hand at different genres - and the readers are the ones who are reaping the fruits of your labour. Thank you again, Stuti. 🤗

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

The teaser was thrilling. The introduction was super- Jodha springing her fiance in a such a flamboyant fashion. Loved it. So many family members were introduced.

The first chapter- the murder has taken place. What a sloth the sub-inpector is! No wonder Jalal had to pull rank on him. Jalal's deductions point to Surya as the culprit but Jodha refutes it.

The couple managed to steal a few moments for themselves that night. Sukanya's suicide attempt was a shock to everyone. This was followed by another one which was outlined at the beginning of the chapter.

I am enjoying this murder mystery mingled with romance a lot. Carry on your wonderful writing, Stuti dear. Thank you for trying your hand at different genres - and the readers are the ones who are reaping the fruits of your labour. Thank you again, Stuti. 🤗

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

waiting for some more responses. 😆

Oyee yaar 😆

hmmm story started nicely...
big family...caring mom,cutie pie dadi,gloomy chachi, depressed sukanya (mera hi character), vagabond and rowdy brother, chulbuli shivani, less talker maan, suspicious surya and others and a father with a person wrapping a cover of screwed businessman...

looks like cacophony...i descover something frm the story thing

1.in the story the family is somewhere like MAGNAMOINAK or BENISANGHARfamily...lots of charecter

2. the teaser itself is just as it is like the story of Kirity Roy series 'RESHMI PHASS'(if you want to read go ahead...its a great story) but the difference is there the murder weapon is a nylon thread and here the assassin stabbed him.

3. in the story jodha said, bharmal used to sleep closing the windows always but in the moment they enter the windows are open. i feel like the assassin entered through the door and open the window so the police got confused...may be he went out through it but he defenaitly not entered through the window.

andwith this the proofs are saying the the murderer is lefthanded and jodha said that surya also a lefty by hand so may be he is the murderer...but somehow i feel that the murderer is a female person not a male.
and this leftie and the open window remember me the story of KOHEN KOBI KALIDAS!!!

And now the writing...u need to forground the family more its just their intro and the incident happened...so hope to see the family more closely and more in detail...
i know jalal will catch the murderer bt being a bengali cant avoide to be a detective while reading one
i loved the charecter jodha self confident and determind and didnt care about the orthodoxy thought of her family and choose jalal going against it...bravo...
i love jalal...i always love jalal but this one is different like an ideal partner...
witty mischievous scrutineer patience ordermaker yet a polite head..a cunning leader yet a dutiful ACP...ufff soo much and ya a perfect lover and aperfect son in law to this orthodox family...

update soon...and thanks for pm...waiting fr the view of jodha abt it...and like to know the story of Sukanya...by the way is there any mirza or sharif or adham in this story????????