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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

@Kuki

How urgently you expressed your feelings for each scene. Amazing take on the chapter, dear!

You too liked it😲... Thank you di🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago
Divya di, brilliant review ⭐️. Your take on shezaade was👏 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: binduprasad41



from which angle it was stupid dear
it was wonderful

I meant it was so overwhelming, I don't even know what I have written 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
@ Harshu
Perfect pics 👏 Harshu shahiba.

@ shruti
Dea still I have to read your review but loved that heart stealling emo.😃
Edited by melovesja - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: melovesja

This one is your master stroke dearest author and I love it.😃 The great archer Akber Khan had only few arrows in his tuneer but what he had he used it with it as Amogh shastra and you used it as divyastra to hit a many target with only one arrow. His heart taken back at revelations about shahiba's go through😲 and give away some doubt to master but brilliant mind of intelligence officer came to his rescue and he turn those doubt in reality to get blessings for future ( wishel podu)and make him hand cuff in his own words to marry hindu girl. After giving opposition a all win win feeling he use that pending promise as brahmostra to get all fix.⭐️ Aah the prince was left all blank to understand👏 and Ustad hit the entire target one after another some by law and some by hitting his soft spot and best businessman Akber khan use the farmaan as a blank check to get the deal on his terms. 👏He don't feel guilt at burning scroll and the first crack on blind fall trust will be path enlighten.

Whole convo between prince and UAMK was like to give a standing ovation 👏👏scan where the thrill and deal and intelligence at best some were to feel to applause and some were city mar dialogue. 😛I feel to laugh on prince when he gave reason to AMK under spell of khalil😆. I like to read history so whenever I read about those blind promises from royals I feel irritated to extent but for the first time I was so happy to get it. I not at all like the politics khalil play but you make me falling in love with this mind game of politics. 😳 This was kate ki taker 👏(tug war) yes prince was no less and he will come back to make it more interesting. Lash🤗 tightest hug for you at reciting of Prince Mansabdar Akber Mohmmed khan. Her marriage fixing was given him an immense pain but his love for her and hidden surety of her wait as she didn't move on give him a strength to win this biggest mind game. Salute to man who got everything for her to give her a future as she deserves.

Pang of pain was at start but then threw out you stick a smile on my face. His confident to save her and Prince' sarcastic sentence to give him freedom save your bride ( I remember like ja simran ja 😆) waiting for the thrilling and facing of both.

Heera and Gauri convo was combination of pain and relief.She not only open up her to her friend but get some to share and understand and like her spirit to come back on political base to get something back from nothing for parnagrah and no step back from truth.😃 His love gives her strength and her love brought her a courage. Her reasoning was so perfect and was so touchy too 😭as she listen her hidden story aloud for first and her say to how long leave and Gauri's worry to leave lonely for life, her feeling for two sister's unfortunate love and Heera's shielding for his step and keep that rejection between two of them😳. Applause for Gauri 👏, she worried for her ,want this not happened but at the end she silently accept to be Heera's supporter. Here you hit the lost scroll target so well. ⭐️They feel someone as well wisher.

When Heera left from Aidabad she had a silent acceptance of his love as hope and surety to peace of her heart and now when AMK left from capital with her denial to move on is hope and surety to peace of his heart by her rejection to marriage.

@bold 👏👏
Excellent Mitu di⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: binduprasad41



awesome review mitu di
very well penned down everything
love the way you use shastra


Thank you Bindu😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: harshu27

wonderful review mitu as usual👏luvd d 1st part amogha shashtra comparison...⭐️


Thanks Harshu😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kuki715

@bold 👏👏

Excellent Mitu di⭐️


Thank you sona😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
I don't think I'll write much, but I can't just give it a miss either. This time just a brief conglomeration of everything I liked about this chapter. It's hard and unjust,but let's try and see...

I would begin with the Shehzaade, a pivot you just can't give a miss. One moment you loathe him for what he is , and another moment you're awed by the him, for the very same reason. All his nuances comes alives - the word play, the stunned yet amusing surprise as the reality of the Ustaad's dawns upon him, and in the end the elegantly penned, elite yet taunting and menacing version of "Ja Simran, jile apni zindagi... " in "go and save your bride if you can..." It's all bang on 😉

Heera's was a poignant presence, just a glimpse of where she is and how she gathers herself to the journey ahead. She has got a plan, and a devoted confide! As she narrates her broken tales Gauri, her shadow partake her sufferings all along , like a faithful cane to the blind. Gauri asking Heera of Akbar's acceptance of their feelings is another poignant moment I loved.


The Ustaad is indeed the Ustaad! You have carefully picked all his attributes, pen picturing him like the Michaelangelo's muse! His throbbing veins, curling fists, smiling eyes and breakneck speed brainstorming - it's no easy way to manipulate one's mentor. Beat the teacher with the tricks he taught but the feeble yet resounding crack in the walls of unquestioned loyalty is what made it possible, me thinks ⭐️

Okay, I have managed to write a long one... and yes of course, the over boundary with his extraction of a promise with the skill of Manthara in Ramayana, and uplifting his Sahiba to the status of his family - what an impulsive display from the stoical Ustaad! What a logical solution from romantic you! This for you... 👏

So that's all for now, will see if I can come back with more later... loved this chapter, and loved you more... come on, dear lady Lashy...
Edited by durgeshnandini - 8 years ago

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