NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 20- Chapter 25 - 14th JANUARY - Page 18

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

I don't think I'll write much, but I can't just give it a miss either. This time just a brief conglomeration of everything I liked about this chapter. It's hard and unjust,but let's try and see...

I would begin with the Shehzaade, a pivot you just can't give a miss. One moment you loathe him for what he is , and another moment you're awed by the him, for the very same reason. All his nuances comes alives - the word play, the stunned yet amusing surprise as the reality of the Ustaad's dawns upon him, and in the end the elegantly penned, elite yet taunting and menacing version of "Ja Simran, jile apni zindagi... " in "go and save your bride if you can..." It's all bang on 😉

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Heera's was a poignant presence, just a glimpse of where she is and how she gathers herself to the journey ahead. She has got a plan, and a devoted confide! As she narrates her broken tales Gauri, her shadow partake her sufferings all along , like a faithful cane to the blind. Gauri asking Heera of Akbar's acceptance of their feelings is another poignant moment I loved.

>>>👏👏

The Ustaad is indeed the Ustaad! You have carefully picked all his attributes, pen picturing him like the Michaelangelo's muse! His throbbing veins, curling fists, smiling eyes and breakneck speed brainstorming - it's no easy way to manipulate one's mentor. Beat the teacher with the tricks he taught but the feeble yet resounding crack in the walls of unquestioned loyalty is what made it possible, me thinks ⭐️

Okay, I have managed to write a long one... and yes of course, the over boundary with his extraction of a promise with the skill of Manthara in Ramayana, and uplifting his Sahiba to the status of his family - what an impulsive display from the stoical Ustaad! What a logical solution from romantic you! This for you... 👏

So that's all for now, will see if I can come back with more later... loved this chapter, and loved you more... come on, dear lady Lashy...

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I don't think I'll write much, but I can't just give it a miss either. This time just a brief conglomeration of everything I liked about this chapter. It's hard and unjust,but let's try and see...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I would begin with the Shehzaade, a pivot you just can't give a miss. One moment you loathe him for what he is , and another moment you're awed by the him, for the very same reason. All his nuances comes alives - the word play, the stunned yet amusing surprise as the reality of the Ustaad's dawns upon him, and in the end the elegantly penned, elite yet taunting and menacing version of "Ja Simran, jile apni zindagi... " in "go and save your bride if you can..." It's all bang on😉</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Heera's was a poignant presence, just a glimpse of where she is and how she gathers herself to the journey ahead. She has got a plan, and a devoted confide! As she narrates her broken tales Gauri, her shadow partake her sufferings all along , like a faithful cane to the blind. Gauri asking Heera of Akbar's acceptance of their feelings is another poignant moment I loved.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">The Ustaad is indeed the Ustaad! You have carefully picked all his attributes, pen picturing him like the Michaelangelo's muse! His throbbing veins, curling fists, smiling eyes and breakneck speed brainstorming - it's no easy way to manipulate one's mentor. Beat the teacher with the tricks he taught but the feeble yet resounding crack in the walls of unquestioned loyalty is what made it possible, me thinks⭐️</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Okay, I have managed to write a long one... and yes of course, the over boundary with his extraction of a promise with the skill of Manthara in Ramayana, and uplifting his Sahiba to the status of his family - what an impulsive display from the stoical Ustaad! What a logical solution from romantic you! This for you...👏</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">So that's all for now, will see if I can come back with more later... loved this chapter, and loved you more... come on, dear lady Lashy...</font>

Originally posted by: lashy

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Good Morning dear Banjaras and Baisas</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I wish you all have as good a morning as the one I've been having so far... after having just skimmed through pages 15 - 22</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I am overwhelmed... I will come back... to reply one after another...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">so many things to say so many to express... but for now, just a resounding 'thank you'</font>

Now waiting for next which will be action packed ,right ?!😛

Wish Khalil and Mahendra had witnessed all this between Mansabdar AMK and shezaade... I just want to do a to them.

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">"Festival offer</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Sweeter than the sweet Pongal</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Chapter twenty Five!'</font>

<font size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">---karkuzhali.</font>

My my wat a twist in d tale rathr sweet twist mansabdar akbar mohammad khan😎

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">-- harshu27.</font>

it was mind blowing , with lots of positive...😃

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">OMG Chellam what a mind game you're plotting. I'm so so impressed with the current plots. OMG it's so enthralling...I've fastened the belt so tightly so that I'm out of falling down or sudden jerks. Brilliant Chellam. Loved it soo soo much.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">--kalgi22.</font>

Seethi maar line & seethi maar chapter Lashy.. the plot n the ploy.. excellently woven .. Mansabdar Akbar Mahmoud Khan needs a standing ovation for his blow..

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">---hamakeerthi</font>

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Awesome chapter...

my imagination on future course of story is BLANK...BRILLIANT STORYTELLER YOU ARE...

MANSABDAR AMK...MASTERSTROKEIT WAS...I WAS NOWHERE NEAR

---<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">selvi1275</font>

Lashy - Oh My God !!! Oh My God !!!

What have you done dear ? You are in the same form as Virat Kohli these days .

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">--- jayaks02</font>

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2"></font>In your words - this is definitely a ' whistle podu'moment.

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">---roseraja1915</font>

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I literally felt my heart skip a beat..and I had this huge smile on my face. My favouritesttt line!!!

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One of the best chapter Lashy!! I was eagerly waiting to know what will be ustaad's move...n it was awesome!! Mind blowing... loved it👏. Keep it up😊

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">---deepzz</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Lashy</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I want to give you a BIG hug...🤗</font>

I read the Shehzade-AMK scene 3 times already and this with all my tiredness.

<font size="2">---</font><font size="2" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">A.Sandya.</font>^^^goosebumps ...

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Now waiting for next which will be action packed ,right ?!😛</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Wish Khalil and Mahendra had witnessed all this between Mansabdar AMK and shezaade... I just want to do a<img src="http://www.qoobee.com/wp-content/uploads/EMO_003.gif" alt="" width="100" height="100" />to them.</font>

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Lashy di.. Lashy di.. I wanna hug you tight for this fantastic Sankranthi gift!🤗🤗🤗

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">---Bindu</font>

This chapter was one of the most mind boggling rapid fire chapters, I have read so far!

So vocal and yet highly requiring mental conjectures👏

...the over boundary with his extraction of a promise with the skill of Manthara in Ramayana, and uplifting his Sahiba to the status of his family - what an impulsive display from the stoical Ustaad! What a logical solution from romantic you! This for you...👏

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">👏what a chapter Lashy! Awesome... I have no words for the flair in your writing and keeping me glued to the screen until the "see you in 10days" appears and it makes me go "10 days!😳"</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">---rs_fun2</font>

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I really like the balance when you portray a grey character like Shehzaade. He is not flat or a caricature; but he has humor, sarcasm, sadism, integrity, all rolled into one.
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">---divyavm</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">The great archer Akber Khan had only few arrows in his tuneer but what he had he used it with it as Amogh shastra and you used it as divyastra to hit a many target with only one arrow.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I like to read history so whenever I read about those blind promises from royals I feel irritated to extent but for the first time I was so happy to get it. I not at all like the politics khalil play but you make me falling in love with this mind game of politics..</font>

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">--melovesja.</font>

Oh no! It shouldn't have happened. Oh! why did the chapter end?😭.

It was amazing lashy, the chapter was amazing, superb, mindblowing etc etc etc.all the chapter till now have been amazing, but this chapter was a gem..

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Good morning Lashy dear.🤗

Good evening Periyamma , Bindup dear, Mitu dear , Adwi dear and dear BBBs. 🤗

@ Periyamma

Fabulous work, Periyamma. 👏 👏 👏

Once again Periyamma to the rescue. Lashy Sahiba, Periyamma has presented all the reviews in a nutshell - a sort of table of contents - so that none of them is overlooked.

@ Shruthi

Thank you, 😃I thought it was stupid😆

For this Shruthi dear, you are going to get a real tongue- lashing from Lashy. 😆

@ Mitu

It is you who deserves a standing ovation for this extraordinary review, Mitu dear. 👍🏼

@ Adwi

You didn't think you would write much? What an unthinkable proposition! A phenomenal review as always - could have been longer though, dear. 🤗

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Quotable quotes...

"Festival offer

Sweeter than the sweet Pongal

Chapter twenty Five!'

---karkuzhali.

My my wat a twist in d tale rathr sweet twist mansabdar akbar mohammad khan😎

-- harshu27.

it was mind blowing , with lots of positive...😃

---cute.manasi

OMG Chellam what a mind game you're plotting. I'm so so impressed with the current plots. OMG it's so enthralling...I've fastened the belt so tightly so that I'm out of falling down or sudden jerks. Brilliant Chellam. Loved it soo soo much.

--kalgi22.

Seethi maar line & seethi maar chapter Lashy.. the plot n the ploy.. excellently woven .. Mansabdar Akbar Mahmoud Khan needs a standing ovation for his blow..

---hamakeerthi

Awesome chapter...

my imagination on future course of story is BLANK...BRILLIANT STORYTELLER YOU ARE...

MANSABDAR AMK...MASTERSTROKE IT WAS...I WAS NOWHERE NEAR

---selvi1275

Lashy - Oh My God !!! Oh My God !!!

What have you done dear ? You are in the same form as Virat Kohli these days .

--- jayaks02

In your words - this is definitely a ' whistle podu' moment.

---roseraja1915

I literally felt my heart skip a beat..and I had this huge smile on my face. My favouritesttt line!!!

---NJAPA_Addict

One of the best chapter Lashy!! I was eagerly waiting to know what will be ustaad's move...n it was awesome!! Mind blowing... loved it 👏 . Keep it up 😊

---deepzz

Lashy

I want to give you a BIG hug...🤗

I read the Shehzade-AMK scene 3 times already and this with all my tiredness.

---A.Sandya.^^^goosebumps ...

Now waiting for next which will be action packed ,right ?!😛

Wish Khalil and Mahendra had witnessed all this between Mansabdar AMK and shezaade... I just want to do a to them.

---kuki715

Lashy di.. Lashy di.. I wanna hug you tight for this fantastic Sankranthi gift! 🤗🤗🤗

---Bindu

This chapter was one of the most mind boggling rapid fire chapters, I have read so far!

So vocal and yet highly requiring mental conjectures 👏

... the over boundary with his extraction of a promise with the skill of Manthara in Ramayana, and uplifting his Sahiba to the status of his family - what an impulsive display from the stoical Ustaad! What a logical solution from romantic you! This for you... 👏

--- durgeshnandini

👏 what a chapter Lashy! Awesome... I have no words for the flair in your writing and keeping me glued to the screen until the "see you in 10days" appears and it makes me go "10 days! 😳 "

---rs_fun2

I really like the balance when you portray a grey character like Shehzaade. He is not flat or a caricature; but he has humor, sarcasm, sadism, integrity, all rolled into one.

---divyavm

The great archer Akber Khan had only few arrows in his tuneer but what he had he used it with it as Amogh shastra and you used it as divyastra to hit a many target with only one arrow.

I like to read history so whenever I read about those blind promises from royals I feel irritated to extent but for the first time I was so happy to get it. I not at all like the politics khalil play but you make me falling in love with this mind game of politics..

--melovesja.

Oh no! It shouldn't have happened. Oh! why did the chapter end?😭.

It was amazing lashy, the chapter was amazing, superb, mindblowing etc etc etc.all the chapter till now have been amazing, but this chapter was a gem..

--- divyadaya13.