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Posted: 8 years ago
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lovely update
thanks for pm
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi read all the chapters in one go. Really awsm take on my most fav benazir track. Seriously jealousy does wonders in love and this story is one best proof.
That s so nice of you to portray jalal as a true emperor who knows the basic etiquette of keeping his marital issues under wraps before the public and keeping up jodha s dignity and respect as a queen intact, setting aside his hurt manly ego.

Awww so both have already realized their love for each other here. Great. If only they knew that the feeling and passion for each other is mutual.
poor jalal now must make his way into his beloved's heart amidst so many competitors- mirza, that rajput prince who lusts for jodha, sharif and let her know of his feelings.
And also good of jo to put in some efforts in expressing her love as well unlike in the show where she alwz runs away from her growing feelings for him and burns herself in jealousy.
Great going. And plz pm me when you updt next chap. Also a longer chapter plz...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome chapter
looking forward for akdha scene
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Posted: 8 years ago
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UNRES
AMAZING CHAPPY
JALAL JEALOUS
WHAT AN IDEA
BOTH SLEPT TOGETHER
UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavya_P



UNRES
AMAZING CHAPPY
JALAL JEALOUS
WHAT AN IDEA
BOTH SLEPT TOGETHER
UPDATE SOON


THANKS FOR PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76

SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLY
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ohhh my my honey. . . It was mind blowing . . . Bt ur too bad. . . U gv such lil update. . . I jst cnt gt over it. . . I mean it was sooo cute. . . Lil bit spiced up. . All thanks to our naughty emperor . . He is a cuddler to me. . . Nd hus brain wrks exceptionally well in dese things. . Nd dat couch bed fight was sooo cute. . . Nd d switching . . Dey lv each oder soo much . . Bt arghh fools none of dm utters a wrd. . Bt ds silent sweet messages of lv are evn sweeter. . . Lvd d chappy sweety . . It was astounding . . Nd awsmm. . . Nxt time a biiig update . . Plshhh . . . Thnku fr pm nd update asap . . Will be waiting . . .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
lovely update dear...need another update as soon as possible...n u again didnt PM ME
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello! I am back again with a Update. This one will be packed with mourning teasing and then the rajput prince will be interduced with Jodha, setting Jalal on Fire I hope you guys enjoy it.


For some reason Jodha felt in her sleep that she slept immensely well last night. The rays hit Jodha and Jalal's face, it caused Jodha to stir and wakeup but Jalal just slept because he enjoyed the past few hours a bit too much. Jodha groggily opened her eyes and saw a males hands around her. She paused and looked at her surroundings, she then gathered her might and tried to push Jalal off her. But Jalal didn't even move an inch.

" Shenshah." she loudly screamed in his ear which made Jalal get up with a jolt.

" What happend Jodha Begum, why are you screaming in the early mourning." Jalal irritatedly asked since he wanted to sleep more and that to with her.

" Like you said last night, we have a long day ahead of us today, we have to go to the temple and camp there tonight a few minutes away." she told him. Jalal smirked and then got up.

" It looks like you slept well last night in my arms, Jodha begum." he said teasing her.

" It's nothing of that sort Shenshah, and now stop wasting time and get ready, I don't want to be late what will people think." Jodha retorted back at him blushing a deep red.

" What people think , I really don't care Jodha Begum I just wish it was reality." Jalal teased her and walked into the Hamam leaving a speechless Jodha behind.

Jalal quickly asked a Hindu maid to tell him the colours Jodha planned on wearing today throwing a bag of gold coins at her.

" Maroon and Gold, Huzoor." the kaneez accepted the gold coins and ran off.

Jalal smirked Maroon and Gold. Jalal reached the breakfast hall early wearing a gold shahi turban and a Maroon Kings Coat with the colours mixed in his suit.
" Adab, Raja saab." Jalal greeted him.

" Parnaam, Jawai sa, please be seated and eat while the lady's get dressed and after we eat we will go to Poornima." Bharmal replied.

Jalal sat down and watched everyone coming along for the trip sit down and eat breakfast. Jodha was one of the last ones coming and like the bhandi had told him she came wearing a maroon lehnga with Jewelry and a heavy set on top of that and her makeup done to compliment her face. As soon as Jodha saw Shenshah dressed like that she gave him a ever so death glare. When everyone was done eating they got up and went outside to their reserved transportation. But before Jalal sat on his horse a hand stopped him, he smiled knowing who's hand it was. And when he turned around was when the rant started.

" Shenshah, how do you always do this. You always wear the same colours as me and where do you even get this information from." Jodha ranted to him with her hands on her hips where her belly chain was.

" You can think of it as Khuda's and your Khana's well doing." Jalal replied while smirking looking at Jodha's angered but yet cute face. He turned around and something fell out of his coats pocket, Jodha's payal. Jodha opened her mouth to question him but he stopped her.

" I carry it with me at all times to remind me of you Jodha Begum." he told her. And then he bended toward the ground where she was standing.

" And here it your payal that you are wearing right now. I return it to you before you start calling me a payal chor again." Jalal smirked and went to mount his horse tucking the payal in his kings coat again.

One person watched this whole scene burning in jealousy. Rajkumar Vikram. He thought in his head, when I was out of Rajputana you took advantage and married my dream Jalaludian. This mistake will cost you your life.

Sorry for the late update!
Akdha's love confession to happen somewhere between the next 3 or 4 updates. It's going to be damakedar. And I hanged the rajput princes name to Vikram. Hope you guys enjoy. Please reply.




Edited by jazzxxqueen - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
lovely update yaar...bt too short it is...I hope u update a long chappy [:( ]bt please make them realise their love soonish...

update ASAP 😉

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