Akdha FF- Jealousy (COMPLEATED)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello! I came to this forum through wattpad and have been a silent reader since first day. This is my very first os and I hope you guys enjoy! And BTW benazir in this is NOT a vishkanya she actually loves Jalal. And the humilition Jodha had is not in this one.

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Jealousy:

Benazir. He despised her but the only reason he kept her around was to make Jodha Begum jealous, he wanted to avenge his humiliation. That night 2 and a half weeks ago was still fresh in his mind, he started to love her. The Great heartless 21 year old Badshah Jalaludian Muhammad fell in love, in love with the huge powerful state of Amers shezadi now his begum, Khaas Begum Jodha Bai.
He was making his walk back to his chamber after Diwan E Khaas to discuss some important matters after taking rest from his stressful day as king. Just as he was about to make a turn that leads to his hojra he was stopped from the devil herself, Benazir.

"Adab Huzoor." Benazir greeted him with a shy ( or in the inside not so shy) smile.

" Adab." he greeted back with respect.

" Huzoor, it's been days since I've served you, do I have the permission." she asked

But Jalal was not listening to her he was looking at the Registan Ka Gulab who was walking toward the Angoori Bagh with her trail of servents behind her and a book in the hands of her beloved and favourite bandhi, Moti. She in all her glory was dressed in a golden and dark peach chaniya choli, with her mang tikka and chudiya crested with diamond. Her hair today was open into loose curls set in front of her shoulders which looked so gorgeous on her . He was lost, he was not a king at this time he was a Lover, lost in the beauty of HIS only his Jodha Begum. She brought that ever so smirk on his devilish handsome face and he ignored his surroundings.

Benazir was ever so irked with his behaviour she heard of her beauty in other kingdoms she had been to, Jodha the princess of Amer those words just those words distracted the men from benazir to their messenger or friend. And now that women in front of her irked and made her so mad. She took one last look at Shenshah Jalal who was still mesmerized in her, now she was silently reading her book and it looked like she was waiting for someone and was just reading the book to pass time, but he didn't care he just looked at her as if time had stopped.

But his gaze was interrupted when his hated brother Mirza Hakim stepped in( Mirza and Jodha were good friends even before Jalal and Jodhas marriage and unlike the show Mirza and Jalal dont have the best brotherly relationship).

Jalal clenched his jaw really really tight watching Jodha get up and greet Mirza. When Mirza and Jodha sat down, that laugh that sound was melody to his ears but he couldn't bear Mirza cracking jokes to His yes His Jodha, only HIS nobody else's just his. Without thinking anything he turned and walking into his hojra. He entered the last part where his bed and other mourning routine stuff was kept. He took coverage off the portrait that he had called Tabassuam to paint of Jodha. He started at that tasveer for God knows how long. He looked to his left of his window and saw Jodha and Mirza, who know where taking a stroll in the garden still talking and laughing. His Anger reached his peak, he couldn't bear that sight in front him he just couldn't. He took out his ever so sharp blade of his dagger and gripped it in his hand tightly. Blood started to ooze out of his hand rapidly. He held his hand in front of the picture each drop dropping slowly by slowly.

"WHY, why just why jodha begum are you doing this. Why don't you get that I love you so damn much, why don't you get it ." he screamed his heart out. Yes his heart that heart that had the name Jodha carved in it , the heart that only beated for her. By this time Ruqaiyaa had reached the scene, seeing jalal with his turban on and crying his heart out with the dagger that was forgotten, laying on the ground.

" JALAL." ruqaiyaa screamed quickly calling a hakeem.

The Hakeem quickly bandaged Jalals hand and told Ruqaiyaa the wound was not deep just a minor injury, that would get fit and fine again in 2 days she greeted both of them and left.

" Jalal, what caused you to get so angry and hurt yourself lik-." she strayed to speak.

"Enough Ruqaiyaa, go out I want some time for myself right now." Jalal ordered her while looking out side at the Jodha and Mirza scene outside.

" But Jal-." Ruqaiyaa started to speak again but was cut off by Jalal.

" Ruqaiyaa, it is not a request, it is an order." she told her again taking his eyes off them at staring at her in her eyes.

Ruqaiyaa then didn't utter a word and turned around to leave, just before she gets more humiliated. He looked towards the angoori bagh again, to see jodha telling mirza parnaam and turning to leave piliotly declining his request of staying for more time. She turned around and walked away. Jalal fell on his bed. He was he King that learned to swordfight like a pro at 9 and became king at 12 but then how is she making him go around and around in circles for his love.
He will not he will just not leave Mirza for interacting with Jodha like that he could not. He wanted to kill him at the moment but he couldn't since Mirza Hakim was his half brother.


Should I do Part 2??
First OS plz like!



Index:

Part 2- Page 3
Part 3- Page 5
Part 4- Page 7
Part 5- Page 7
Part 6- Page 10
Part 7- Page 11
Part 8- Page 12
Part 9- Page 14
Part 10- Page 16
Part 11- Page 18
Part 12- Page 19
Part 13- Page 20
Part 14- Page 22
Part 15- Page 23
Part 16- Page 24
Part 17 - Page 27
Part 18- Page 29
Part 19- Page 31
TEASER FOR PART 20- Page 34
Part 20- Page 36
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Aaradhya01234 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations buddy for your first story
Very nice os
Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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ohh god!!! adha adhoora chod dia...dear...agar tumne iski part 2 nhi Di na...I will kill u do u got it...

pls pls pls give the part 2,3,4,5...n on...this Is my one of fav track where we all know that both are madly in love with eachother...bt can't tell to the other one...pls update soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh wow ...jealous jallu ...very good start dear ...
Pls do continue ...would love to read further ...and yeah ...welcome to JA forum 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey jazzy first of all welcome to akdhaland.
congo for ur first ever os
please write more and do continue with the part 2
thats really good one
thank u for entertaining with ur os
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved the os. But pls go for more parts. Its a request.
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Awesome start dear..
Waiting for part 2...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ohkay... so here's a twist in the tale... Both sides using 'jealousy' as a weapon... 😉


Very interesting, please continue soon. 😊



Congratulations for your first OS and welcome to the forum. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey. . Wlcm here. . Happy one more member. . M really happy cz again cz of u sweety d forum has lit up. . U really rocked it. . I really wanted smthng of ds sort nd u jst read my mind. . Jo s jealousy , jalal's ego nd lv. . Dat clash . . Its jst aesm. . M really glad. . Thank god u wrote in English . . . Aee u stopped in middle . . Cliffhanger , huh? ? . . Good torture . . . Plshhh continue soonish. . . M waiting . . Nd it was awsmm. . Soo fervent. . Amazin sweety . . Nxt time plzzz pm me. . 👏
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jealous JALAl ko she man dekhne k liye main mar rahi thi,, aab show nehi to OS hi sahi grt start plzz continue

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