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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
Hello! I am back with a short but ver good update! Adham Khan & Sharifuddin are indourduced in this one!
Adham and Sharif contained their lustful eyes away from the Shenshah. If he found out that both of them were eyeing the kohinoor and his most beautiful wife then he would give them a death sentence before either of them had the chance to kill him and achieve this beauty. Well, they thought focus on keeping your life other then eyeing her even when she is sitting in her palki.

Meanwhile in Amer the message had reached that Agra's caravan would only take 3 more hours to reach (BTW they have been travelling 5 hours non-stop). Everyone started preparing even faster than they had. Before Jodha's 3 older brothers, Bhagwant Das, Samar Singh and Bahaudar Singh started ordering the dasi's to prepare their only sisters favourite dishes. But a rebel was mourning inside mourning for Jodha. Rajkumar Shaurya was only one of Jodha just one of her crazy lovers. He was invited with his royal family for the wedding of Maharaja Bharmals neice Savitri's wedding. He was sure and he came with a plan, a plan to make Jodha his and finish him once and for all. He opened his shamsheer in the luxurious guest chamber and muttered, my shamsheer awaits to feel your blood Jalaludian.

2 1/2 hours away from Amer palace

" STOP." Jalal roared.

" We, will stop for 10 minuted to take a rest." Jalal added. The khemas were already grandly set up. Every one got out and started eating the food and drinking some water. Rahim quickly sat down beside Jodha when everyone left to go inside the Khemas to do their stuff. And with Rahim the ever so handsome Jalal came along angering Jodha. Jodha was about to get up and go before Jalal placed a hand on her hand.

" Sometimes stop and sit with with us Jodha Begum." Jalal patiently told her still keeping his firm hand and her fidgety one. Jodha sat quietly and listened to what Rahim was saying.

" Choti ammi jaan,I want to ask you something." Rahim innocently asked both of them.

" Like Bakshi phupijaan has a toy in her stomach which Sharif phuphajaan gifted her, will Shenshah also give you a toy." Rahim added with his innocent brown eyes staring at both of them innocently ( he meant when is Jodha going to be pregnant). That question caused Jodha to blush very deeply while Jalal just smirked and answered Rahim in a very teasing way.

" Well, the thing is Rahim, your choti ammi jaan always rejects me when I try to give her a toy, please make her understand to accept it." Jalal whined to Rahim while looking into Jodha's deep hazel eyes still smirking.

" Choti ammi jaa-". Rahim turned to speak to Jodha put Jodha was already storming her way into her palki just like Salima and the other women. Rahim also started hurrying his way to his palki which was with Salima begum's.

Jalal smirked and got on his horse which was next Jodha's palki. Before he got on his horse he spoke words to Jodha that angered her even more and made her blush deeper.

" Think about Rahim's offer Jodha begum, I would be glad to accept it." he smirked and rode off.

I am really sorry for this short update but it interduced alot of new entries! Next update 25 likes.




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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
I ignore Sharif nd adham but rahim part loved it.. update soon nd do pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
amazing update buddy
Jalal flirting with Jo in front of rahim
Hehe
update asap
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
awww...toy gift!!! 😛. living toy!!! lollzz...anyway chotu chappy bt beautiful chappy...n rahim always cutipie n always work as Cupid fr AKDHA

lovely...please update ASAP...

U didn't PM me this time dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Though the chapter was chotu, it was amazing. I loved rahims toy dialogue😳 and jalals reply to him☺️
Edited by divyadaya13 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Though the chapter was chotu, it was amazing. I loved rahims toy dialogue😳 and jalals reply to him☺️


Thanks!
Can you pretty please tell me how to add gifs into your signiture
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

awww...toy gift!!! 😛. living toy!!! lollzz...anyway chotu chappy bt beautiful chappy...n rahim always cutipie n always work as Cupid fr AKDHA

lovely...please update ASAP...

U didn't PM me this time dear


I'm really sorry the thing is I have very little time so I don't get time to pm. Just check the index every 2 days there might be a update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: swetiii

amazing update buddy
Jalal flirting with Jo in front of rahim
Hehe
update asap


Will try my best
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Hello! I am back with another update as soon as the likes hit 25! Hope you enjoy the update.
They were welcomed grandly in the Amer palace. The grandest Jalal had ever been to, an he was experienced with this every-time he came to Amer. They all entered the grand palace when Jalal felt a gaze on him, he turned to see a good looking prince lustily staring at Jodha passing by but was giving him the cold shoulder. His jawline tightened but then he cooled down, not here he thought not in his sasural.

After eating the delicious food, Jalal crossed his fingers to get a chamber with Jodha. But he knew Jodha would how pester her mother and her mother would pamper her youngest and only daughter, he had to think of something. He smirked when the idea came to his devious brain, he called one of Jodha's youngest relatives, a 5 year old shezaadi and told her to tell the queen that your phupisa has to sleep with your phupasa since you want to stay in her room, but you won't sleep on the bed. He knew this rule since the last time no other shezaadi is able to sleep on her bed a rule made by her caring brothers. Aaand he thought if you do that I will give you 100 golgappa, and with that the greedy little girl ran away to Maharani Mainavati. When the girl took her reward and ran away Jalal looked at the sight in front of him. The spoiled Rajkumari wanted a chamber close to the moon, BY herself but her mother was convincing her that if she wanted room by herself she would have a luxurious guest chamber or if she wanted a Chamber with full moonlight like her other chamber she would have to share with Shenshah. The girl pouted and agreed to her mothers plea. Jalal rejoiced inside.

That night Jalal were both in their nightwear and were fighting on who sleeps where.

" Jodha Begum I am telling you if you don't want to sleep with me on the bed then you sleep on the bed and I will sleep on the couch." Jalal pratically begged her.

" No Shenshah, I am sleeping on the couch you are sleeping on the bed." Jodha ordered him snatching the blanket and pillow away from him and retreating to the couch.

Jalal sighed defeated and slept on the soft bed giving him instant relief. About 3 in the mourning Jalal woke up to the sound of shifting. He got up and looked at Jodha shifting because of the bright moonlight. He smirked and got up quietly picking Jodha up and putting her on the bed. She looks like an angel when she sleeps but when she gets up a bitter spice he thought. When Jalal layed on the couch he thought no matter Jodha wanted to sleep on this it is just like the bed.

An hour later Jodha woke up with a thirsty throat. She quickly drank some water and looked at her surroundings. How did she get to the bed?? She went in anger to Jalal and started shaking him hard.

" What happened Jodha Begum why are you-." H e was cut of by Jodha and her beauty in the moonlight.

" Why did you switch spots with me Shenshah wh-." he cut her off this time by pulling her with him in the wide couch and covered the blanket over both of them.

" Be quiet Jodha begum, we have a long day tomorrow just go to sleep." he murmured to her and made her snuggle closer to him and fell asleep. Jodha fidgeted for about 10 seconds until she understood that she couldn't get out of his iron grip and the cold breeze started blowing through the open window then causing Jodha to snuggle even closer to Jalal if it was possible she fell asleep in second with his body which was made just for her hut how would he know the games destiny had planned. Jalal smiled in his sleep finally one night with Jodha.

25 Likes for next update to! Please give updates on how you felt on akdha scene!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
amazing chappi buddy
they both wanted the other one to sleep on bed
and ended up sleeping on couch hugging each other
Hehe
update asap buddy

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