NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~Thread 11 - Chapter 16 - UPD 22nd SEP

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: lashy

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#102

The Scorpion..

When you look me in the eyes

Loneliness unfurls inside of me

Like a scorpion's tail

And stings the soft belly of my heart

A deep pain

Spreads throughout my body

Clutching my bone

Taking me hostage

I feel my heart swell

It is much too big for its cage

It's screeching protests

When you try to put back in

The sweating begins immediately

I feel like melting on to the dirt road

And you..

You are giggling

Distracting me with your molten eyes...

( from the internet and edited)

Karkuzhali.

Edited by karkuzhali - 8 years ago

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Nima

@nims23

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Hi shrads, how are you dear? First of all, sorry for not commenting on last few chapters :(

Coming to the latest update, its outstanding... the best scene is ofcourse, no doubt...Heera Akbar's convo...

Akbar is worried for her..her safety... why woudn't he? Afterall he knows all her as well as his own master's plans...

Just loved the way you described how they feel in each other's company...just awesome... They both know they are like a forbidden fruit for each other but still cant help to taste it a bit...

Akbar took scorpio bite for Heera... and he is happy that he did it... kamse kam Heera is safe...awww

He said he has grown immune to such poisons...that shows how tough his life has been!!!!

Heera is worried about him..but cant do anything, can she? Finally, she has decided not to think about him. Can she really do that??

Akbar is hiding scroll truth from his master to save Heera's life...he has already started his journey to save his "only loved one" (obviously which he hasnt realised yet).. come what may..he will do it...awww...

Now lets wait to see how these both keep themselves away from each other! !!!!

Again, Awesome chappy dearie...hugs**** muahhh

Edited by nims23 - 8 years ago

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melovesja

@melovesja

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: lashy
Thanks Sona 😳

Thanks da... 🤗

Mitu... a suggestion... I think the pic in your avtaar's quite large maybe you can use it as your signature... it's not showing properly on avtaar... too large for it, I think... 🤔

Thank you so much 😊. When I change dp here I can see old one i changed it yesterday night but I can see that cut image now .pls. tell me now you can see jalal in dp.

Edited by melovesja - 8 years ago

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melovesja

@melovesja

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Lashy

Amazingly managed with Cupid danger to saw flattery heart and quarring lips of heera and mental and physical effect or can say turmoil of Khan shahib to keep his moral. She effect him both way from first cannal. 👏 detailed one later as I am travelling.

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: lashy

Yeah... now that you said it... 😆

Durgesh nandini come back 😡 Say something *shakes her hard and then uses Shyamala periyammas tactics to wake her up*

Well it's a bit too early by my usual standards, actually I am still dozing, but my roommates woke me up😡

Seems like I disappointed waiting souls😆

Lashy di, a good morning hug for you... 🤗

Assure your self, that you have etched the best possible romance, from all the available ingredients!!! Because there is no other way it could be more logical and explainable 👏... give yourself a congratulations hug on my behalf , and will comment in details later on! 😳

Edited by durgeshnandini - 8 years ago

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

The Scorpion..


When you look me in the eyes
Loneliness unfurls inside of me
Like a scorpion's tail
And stings the soft belly of my heart
A deep pain
Spreads throughout my body
Clutching my bone
Taking me hostage
I feel my heart swell
It is much too big for its cage
It's screeching protests
When you try to put back in
The sweating begins immediately
I feel like melting on to the dirt road
And you..
You are giggling
Distracting me with your molten eyes...


( from the internet and edited)

Karkuzhali.

amazing poem aunty

Edited by binduprasad41 - 8 years ago

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Good Morning!

The Kids prepare Breakfast for you!...

Scrambled eggs..

Pancakes with Maple Syrup...

Crumpets with Honeycomb Butter..

..and Milo.

Edited by karkuzhali - 8 years ago

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Good Morning!

The Kids prepare Breakfast for you!...


Scrambled eggs..

 Pancakes with Maple Syrup...

Crumpets with Honeycomb Butter..

..and Milo.

aww thank you dear
so sweet of you both

good morning aunty

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

The Scorpion..

When you look me in the eyes
Loneliness unfurls inside of me
Like a scorpion's tail
And stings the soft belly of my heart
A deep pain
Spreads throughout my body
Clutching my bone
Taking me hostage
I feel my heart swell
It is much too big for its cage
It's screeching protests
When you try to put back in
The sweating begins immediately
I feel like melting on to the dirt road
And you..
You are giggling
Distracting me with your molten eyes...

( from the internet and edited)

Karkuzhali.