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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Chapter 16.




The Story goes..

The picture was a teaser to the new Chapter
Drew wild guesses from the readers thereafter
Who was she? And who was he?
We had to wait patiently for the Chappy
We expected a snake but it turned out to be a scorpion
He saved her from its sting, she felt he was her guardian
Three words are spoken between the lovers, we used to say
The three words here " Just stay safe" the same meaning they did convey

The temple, her solitude, her meditation all went behind
His concentration, his aim, his concern only remained
The Scorpion ,the catalyst, hastened the reaction
Between the silent Hero and the Heroine full of compassion
The nearness to her made his ears go sharper
For he could "hear her silent smile " even louder
He lost himself dragged by her lowered eye lids
He fell into temptation to the glee of the cupids

After saving her he told her a little about himself
That 'little' made her understand her inner self
His statement about his immunity to poison
Made her think about him and his profession chosen
She couldn't decipher anything about him
Excepting that she admitted she was intrigued by him
Why is she worried about his health?
Why is the concern about him who entered her heart by stealth?

Later when he was tending the scorpion bite.
He thought of the ways to save her from enemy's spite
He pitied her for being so naive and ignorant
Of the ignoble conspiracy they could plan against her, the heir apparent
The scrolls that carried her message to the kings
Kept him in a dilemma between her innocence and his duty towards his Prince
"Ai khuda" he prayed to God sincerely for a solution
Did He help him to bypass his resolution?

Karkuzhali.

















OMG! It's SUPERLATIVE!!! 👏👏👏 It creates the same MAGIC as the chapter. LOVED it, Periamma!❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Chapter 16.


Haikus:

Heard of Cupid with wings
But it's cupid which stings
Between him and her!

It's not what they felt
It's how he'll be dealt by Prince
Suspense Lashy gives!

He is Dynamic
Passionate and Loyal
Guess he's Scorpio


She , Patient, Practical
Reliable , devoted,
Taurus must she be..

Zodiac says they match
He'll be built up by her
Both signs show Loyalty.

But when? Lashy will say
In a month? Or in a day?
Miracles do happen!..

Karkuzhali.


Good afternoon Aunty😊.

Lovely Haikus aunty😃,especially third and fourth ones⭐️
Edited by Kuki715 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Chapter 16.




The Story goes..

The picture was a teaser to the new Chapter
Drew wild guesses from the readers thereafter
Who was she? And who was he?
We had to wait patiently for the Chappy
We expected a snake but it turned out to be a scorpion
He saved her from its sting, she felt he was her guardian
Three words are spoken between the lovers, we used to say
The three words here " Just stay safe" the same meaning they did convey

The temple, her solitude, her meditation all went behind
His concentration, his aim, his concern only remained
The Scorpion ,the catalyst, hastened the reaction
Between the silent Hero and the Heroine full of compassion
The nearness to her made his ears go sharper
For he could "hear her silent smile " even louder
He lost himself dragged by her lowered eye lids
He fell into temptation to the glee of the cupids

After saving her he told her a little about himself
That 'little' made her understand her inner self
His statement about his immunity to poison
Made her think about him and his profession chosen
She couldn't decipher anything about him
Excepting that she admitted she was intrigued by him
Why is she worried about his health?
Why is the concern about him who entered her heart by stealth?

Later when he was tending the scorpion bite.
He thought of the ways to save her from enemy's spite
He pitied her for being so naive and ignorant
Of the ignoble conspiracy they could plan against her, the heir apparent
The scrolls that carried her message to the kings
Kept him in a dilemma between her innocence and his duty towards his Prince
"Ai khuda" he prayed to God sincerely for a solution
Did He help him to bypass his resolution?

Karkuzhali.

This is breathtakingly beautiful...👏👏 and my favorite so far❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago
Good Morning Banjaras and Baisas
🤗
It's Friday
Any special plans for the weekend?

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali



Good Morning!

What a treat to wake up to.. Loved it, Periyamma 🤗

The Kids prepare Breakfast for you!...

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Scrambled eggs..

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Pancakes with Maple Syrup...


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Crumpets with Honeycomb Butter..


Crumpets with honeycomb butter


..and Milo.


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I'm going to have the crumpets and Milo, since I don't have eggs... 🤗
but, I'll be at the table enjoying breakfast with the kutties!!! And we'll talk about all science facts about the infamous red scorpion... and I'll them about how it came in the story..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


The Scorpion..

When you look me in the eyes
Loneliness unfurls inside of me
Like a scorpion's tail
And stings the soft belly of my heart
A deep pain
Spreads throughout my body
Clutching my bone
Taking me hostage
I feel my heart swell
It is much too big for its cage
It's screeching protests
When you try to put back in
The sweating begins immediately
I feel like melting on to the dirt road
And you..
You are giggling
Distracting me with your molten eyes...

( from the internet and edited)

Karkuzhali.

Splendid... so here the scorpion signifies his loneliness...
Beautiful... I don't know what the original poem was supposed to signify.. but this edited version is beautiful
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


I'm going to have the crumpets and Milo, since I don't have eggs... 🤗
but, I'll be at the table enjoying breakfast with the kutties!!! And we'll talk about all science facts about the infamous red scorpion... and I'll them about how it came in the story..
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😛 Yummy

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Posted: 8 years ago
Rose...
Ok that guy ^^^ is basically searching for you to give you a hug 😆
Edited by lashy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Rose...
Ok that guy ^^^ is basically searching for you to give you a hug 😆
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Hey Shradha 🤗
If it is Jalal ...I am fine with it.


Edited by Jeryl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Kausi,
Your Periyamma looks younger to you!😉
Shall I tell you a secret?Dont tell anyone! (psst..psst)Her father was my craze during my college days...😆

By the way, You look very pretty in Salwar suit in the photo Payal posted in your B'Day thread!

Periyamma.

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Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Periamma became expert in Astrology and match making!! 👏👏👏 Love it! ❤️

Periamma.. did you manage to see our pic(you and me) in my bday thread? 😆

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