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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#111

Chapter 16.

Haikus:

Heard of Cupid with wings

But it's cupid which stings

Between him and her!

It's not what they felt

It's how he'll be dealt by Prince

Suspense Lashy gives!

He is Dynamic

Passionate and Loyal

Guess he's Scorpio

She , Patient, Practical

Reliable , devoted,

Taurus must she be..

Zodiac says they match

He'll be built up by her

Both signs show Loyalty.

But when? Lashy will say

In a month? Or in a day?

Miracles do happen!..

Karkuzhali.

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

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Posted: 8 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 16.

Haikus:

Heard of Cupid with wings
But it's cupid which stings
Between him and her!

It's not what they felt
It's how he'll be dealt by Prince
Suspense Lashy gives!

He is Dynamic
Passionate and Loyal
Guess he's Scorpio

She , Patient, Practical
Reliable , devoted,
Taurus must she be..

Zodiac says they match
He'll be built up by her
Both signs show Loyalty.

But when? Lashy will say
In a month? Or in a day?
Miracles do happen!..

Karkuzhali.

wow aunty superb

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Good Morning!

The Kids prepare Breakfast for you!...

Scrambled eggs..

Pancakes with Maple Syrup...

Crumpets with Honeycomb Butter..

..and Milo.

tastilicious breakfast aunty good morng...😃

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 16.

Haikus:

Heard of Cupid with wings
But it's cupid which stings
Between him and her!

It's not what they felt
It's how he'll be dealt by Prince
Suspense Lashy gives!

He is Dynamic
Passionate and Loyal
Guess he's Scorpio

She , Patient, Practical
Reliable , devoted,
Taurus must she be..

Zodiac says they match
He'll be built up by her
Both signs show Loyalty.

But when? Lashy will say
In a month? Or in a day?
Miracles do happen!..

Karkuzhali.

wonderful aunty...⭐️

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

The Scorpion..

When you look me in the eyes
Loneliness unfurls inside of me
Like a scorpion's tail
And stings the soft belly of my heart
A deep pain
Spreads throughout my body
Clutching my bone
Taking me hostage
I feel my heart swell
It is much too big for its cage
It's screeching protests
When you try to put back in
The sweating begins immediately
I feel like melting on to the dirt road
And you..
You are giggling
Distracting me with your molten eyes...

( from the internet and edited)

Karkuzhali.

beautiful aunty...⭐️👏

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 16.

Haikus:

Heard of Cupid with wings
But it's cupid which stings
Between him and her!

It's not what they felt
It's how he'll be dealt by Prince
Suspense Lashy gives!

He is Dynamic
Passionate and Loyal
Guess he's Scorpio

She , Patient, Practical
Reliable , devoted,
Taurus must she be..

Zodiac says they match
He'll be built up by her
Both signs show Loyalty.

But when? Lashy will say
In a month? Or in a day?
Miracles do happen!..

Karkuzhali.

Periamma became expert in Astrology and match making!! 👏👏👏 Love it! ❤️

Periamma.. did you manage to see our pic(you and me) in my bday thread?

😆

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#117

Chapter 16.

The Story goes..

The picture was a teaser to the new Chapter

Drew wild guesses from the readers thereafter

Who was she? And who was he?

We had to wait patiently for the Chappy

We expected a snake but it turned out to be a scorpion

He saved her from its sting, she felt he was her guardian

Three words are spoken between the lovers, we used to say

The three words here " Just stay safe" the same meaning they did convey

The temple, her solitude, her meditation all went behind

His concentration, his aim, his concern only remained

The Scorpion ,the catalyst, hastened the reaction

Between the silent Hero and the Heroine full of compassion

The nearness to her made his ears go sharper

For he could "hear her silent smile " even louder

He lost himself dragged by her lowered eye lids

He fell into temptation to the glee of the cupids

After saving her he told her a little about himself

That 'little' made her understand her inner self

His statement about his immunity to poison

Made her think about him and his profession chosen

She couldn't decipher anything about him

Excepting that she admitted she was intrigued by him

Why is she worried about his health?

Why is the concern about him who entered her heart by stealth?

Later when he was tending the scorpion bite.

He thought of the ways to save her from enemy's spite

He pitied her for being so naive and ignorant

Of the ignoble conspiracy they could plan against her, the heir apparent

The scrolls that carried her message to the kings

Kept him in a dilemma between her innocence and his duty towards his Prince

"Ai khuda" he prayed to God sincerely for a solution

Did He help him to bypass his resolution?

Karkuzhali.

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 16.


 

The Story goes..


The picture was a teaser to the new Chapter
Drew wild guesses from the readers thereafter
Who was she? And who was he?
We had to wait patiently for the Chappy
We expected a snake but it turned out to be a scorpion
He saved her from its sting, she felt he was her guardian
Three words are spoken between the lovers, we used to say
The three words here " Just stay safe" the same meaning they did convey


The temple, her solitude, her meditation all went behind
His concentration, his aim, his concern only remained
The Scorpion ,the catalyst, hastened the reaction
Between the silent Hero and the Heroine full of compassion
The nearness to her made his ears go sharper
For he could "hear her silent smile " even louder
He lost himself dragged by her lowered eye lids
He fell into temptation to the glee of the cupids


After saving her he told her a little about himself
That 'little' made her understand her inner self
His statement about his immunity to poison
Made her think about him and his profession chosen
She couldn't decipher anything about him
Excepting that she admitted she was intrigued by him
Why is she worried about his health?
Why is the concern about him who entered her heart by stealth?


Later when he was tending the scorpion bite.
He thought of the ways to save her from enemy's spite
He pitied her for being so naive and ignorant
Of the ignoble conspiracy they could plan against her, the heir apparent
The scrolls that carried her message to the kings
Kept him in a dilemma between her innocence and his duty towards his Prince
"Ai khuda" he prayed to God sincerely for a solution
Did He help him to bypass his resolution?

Karkuzhali.

wow aunty
seriously I don't know what to say about your talent
yet again another mater piece
you are so fast
since morning your post created magic in this thread
we are so bless to have you here
thank you so much for sharing this

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#119

Chellam

Don't ask the Lord to take away death,

Ask Him instead, to take away your fear of death.

For death is a must in everyone's life,

But fear is not.

Don't ask the Lord to carry your burdens for you,

Ask Him instead, to give you the strength to carry them.

For burdens are a must in everyone's life,

But weakness is not. --👏👏👏 OMG! This so beautiful yet motivational!! Do you know? or Did say before?? You're the one of inspiration for many of us here. THE PERFECTIONIST!! ⭐️⭐️ Whatever you do... You used to give your 200% in it. And this chapter is not exception. But still it's standout in a way for its content. It's beautiful beyond my word.

'You've no idea of what's behind you, Sahiba...trust me when I say the enemy is as dangerous and cunning as can be...'

'Dangerous AND cunning? Interesting match it'll be then... well... I do hope I'm not wrong in assuming that you're an expert at this... in assuming that you like playing such deadly games?'

'No you're not wrong... I do like playing deadly games, Sahiba... but, I do hope I'm not wrong in assuming that my games have you intrigued... that you're beginning to like playing them too!' Though It looked like very simple yet witty conversations but Isn't it the ENTIRE STORY about? How cleverly you've briefed everything here in this mere conversation. CLEVER!👏👏

The Sahib and Sahiba trying their best to not to loose their grip to other magnetic personality though they are failing miserably while the aggressive creature... THE RED SCORPIO just behind them waiting for right time for its prey. Shall I make it that Scorpio as Khalil backed by Shehzaade. Now read that above line. Isn't it also another best comparison for this entire story? INTELLIGENT! 👏👏So from the observation of this incident I could foresee the entire story... That is Akbar will save his Sahiba from all her threats though he might hurt but that's not life threatening as always. But how Sahib is going to archive is the mystery of the game that our Chellam going to show us. I'm super excited as always.

There is another incident that is also giving away how Akbar going to do all this... that is the BURNED SCROLLS!! It may seemed like Akbar cheating both Heera and Shehzaade. But actually it's not. He did good for both. Yes he saved Shehzaade from the riot that scrolls could create at the same time he saved Heera by stopping that scrolls reaching the wrong hands. obviously one is Mahendar. SPLENDID!!👏👏 So Akbar is going to save Heera but at the same time he's not going against to his master. OMG I'm super duper intrigued for fascinating upcoming plots.

Hope now you get it why I said it's standout from other chapters. You've given away lots of things under this passionate romance. LOVE YOU MY DARLING specially the CRIMINAL MIND behind that BEAUTIFUL FACE!! ❤️