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Posted: 9 years ago

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Lashy 🤗u know this is one of the best update till now ...i know many r yet to come ,still i feel this's the bestest of all the chaps ... with the whole scorpion fiasco u hinted towards the ememies Heera is supposed to face in future and that her sahib will always be with her to sheild her protect her from all the evils like he did today ...and with that we readers got an assurance that Heera will always be safe around Akbar .

When Khan sahib finds Harka sitting alone on the temple steps he became consious of her safety , after all who knew better than him ,how dangerous it is for sahiba to roam around that too without any security .

Isshh for the first time i heard/read a scorpion playing cupid 😆 u r simplh superb bangaram ...Although it harmed Our khan sahib yet i cant help liking it 😆

Hayeee the authority with which he said "DON'T MOVE SAHIBA" and she gladly obligued (ofcourse ,she didnt had any other choice ) and then the slipped dupatta revealing her divine beauty followed by throbbing heartbeats , the warm breaths ☺️ .

The entire thing also raised few doubts in Heera's mind " Dont wory sahiba ,i've grown immune to such venoms and poisons "

For once i felt ..atleast this time Harka would nurse khan sahib's wound but this stubborn man didnt gave her anychance dampening all my hopes and then advised her to stay safe .

Hmm he burned all those messages haan ,its good actually...what if khalil or shehzade's spy get those scrolls and about Heera we need not to worry ...Why fear when Akbar is here 😉

Thanks for the lovely lovely update lashy

Nd sorry for late reply dear

Already read chap 17 too ...but i will comment on that later 😉

Love u my dearest author sahiba ...❤️

Edited by avika444 - 9 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1192

It's really amazing chapter Di
Harka went temple to seek some peace and she was getting it but alas Akbar came in love he came for her then their interaction and harkas point out on his warrior instincts good
Then it turned into a thrilling scene when scorpion came in the scene
Akbars alerting harka but without naming the danger wow then to divert her mind and calm herself she try to wrap Akbar in a teasing convo but end up trapping herself that was really chuckling
Their close proximity whether it's little but wow
Both got close glimpse of each other and both want to lost in each other so romantic
Alas scorpion bite Akbar while he was saving harka his comment on bite left harka with many questions
Both went on thinking about each other for harka he was puzzle and a slight peace refreshment But for Akbar Harka is becoming something he don't want her to become he wants to protect her but Bond to shehzade ehsan then along with orders he stopped that msgs to save harka so thoughtful of him
Can't wait to read further
Thanks for pm
Love you