RKG CHAPTER 16 page 117 POSTED Oct 19th - Page 16

Originally posted by: ketaki1

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1) I would never alter anything di, you are the writer and you know very well were you want to take the story as a reader it is a ride of emotions. We could give our opinions but you are the one who make this journey a masterpiece.

2) The story is beautifully written and on right track, but again you are the writer you know the right track, we are just here to enjoy the ride.

I am glad to know... U didn't feel it's moving at the torturous speed

3) To be honest, it is very confusing.. when I read a chapter first I love a character and justifies his actions but then again I read it the second time I love the other one. The more I read the more I am confused. You are a great writer di, you can make the readers love each and every character. For me it is all as everyone is playing a role and helping other characters to mold and forwarding the story.

So U enjoy all the character... wow... I am so happy...😃

Well the next chapter seems more interesting... I haven't forgot the look in adham's eyes that night when he saw radha and the way jalal have seen it all. Excited to read more di...

Originally posted by: piya58

Woow di awsm chappy
Its upto u di coz i love ur thoughts in story

Thank U Piya😃

Jalal radha r my fav chactrs 😊
Their converstion is awsm both r really love each other but their sutitutions or diffeent
The way u worte is amzg dii 👏

🤗

Precap y stupid adham want to see radha ?
Updatee sooon di
Thanku diii

Originally posted by: latanzia

change nothing and it is going in the right direction,my favourite is Jalal and Jodha.

I want herto tell him the truth of who she really is, he willbe hurt when he finds out the truth.

Beautiful update.

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

Hi Bhavini

I am super glad to read your update after a long time😃

Not Fair...its not long time... I updated in a month...

As usual, I am just speechless what to write, it was super awesome. Jodha Jalal conversation had all emotions ego pride, anger, frustration, love, longing, helplessness, pain, sadness, being witty and devious too. It was a complete roller coaster for a reader.

Now answer to your questions : I would not like to alter anything in this chapter, reason is as a reader I love your writing style.

Thanks😳

For the pace of the story, I feel it can be a bit fast, but I m not sure as I still enjoy reading it as it is.

Sure I have decided to move lit bit faster 😊 I specifically asked this question just because I wanted to move faster... hehehe

My favourite character is Jalal as most of the time he seems pratical and reasonable human in his actions. He doesn't act what he is not.

Jalal ... Hmmm... Mine too😉 always😆

Request you to please put up next update soon. I eagerly wait for your updates\

Next... I am going to UPDATE is it hate or LOVE...

Originally posted by: GERUA

congrats on the new thread
outstanding update

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

2 hrs😲 I can understand di.. This thing irked me more when I get problems in posting

I couldn't control and read the chapter di😆

My net is giving problems since morning😭

I will comment at night or tomorrow morning.

Btw I loved the chapter di..⭐️⭐️⭐️

A wonderful chapter with your awe-inspiring writing made me feel enthralled.

Payal... when I read UR this comment... Really felt relieved... chalo chapter sahi hai... I was thinking readers will get mad because Jalal was too harsh in beginning...

I so loved this chapter di and oh my my, this delectable devil will be my death one day.

Mine too... I am so so in love with this JALAL... in my dreamland otherwise my hubby will kill me...😆

He is already very hot bavi di.. and in this hot summer, you don't need to raise the temperature of our body more by making this tempting devil, scorching hot❤️

U just need a boyfriend babe🤣

overall an awesome chapter👏👏👏 and was indeed worth waiting.⭐️⭐️

LOVE U JAAN🤗 WAITING😲 I UPDATED QUICKLY THIS TIME😆 COMPARE TO MY PRVIOUS RECORDS 🤣

Originally posted by: aswin2134ja

Ur question answers 1 st question i don't know

U don't know... 😲 kuch toh soch yaar😃

2nd question answer is story going right path

Thank U so much... relief😳

3 rd question answer is my favourite character is akdha

Jalal or Jodha???

Update nest chapter soon

Originally posted by: Geetbaala

Hey Bhavi di🤗

What a wonderful ride of emotions..I thoroughly enjoyed the read di..I am short of words to describe here... Just I will bow to your magnificent writing.. All the characters emotional out burst were right at their own place.

I don't want you to change any thing...it is running at right pace ..and the character I liked most is of course my Jalal

Little busy with life Di..so could not unres last update.

And this time too coming with very short comment.

Hope in few months will give you long comments.

Whether I write comments or not but I read and thoroughly enjoy your writing Di...love you.

Originally posted by: arooj1991

Super awsome chapter.your selection of words to describe diferent emotions is just amazing.
thank for the pm di
and plz plz update is it hate or love too 😊
Tc stay blessed