Exceptional chapter di 👏 ... A mess of emotions ... And u excellently note down it ⭐️ ...Even the story itself a bunch of bursting emotions as anger... pleasure ...desire ...agony... jealousy ...hate ...love everything in it ... I think Ur another story tittle 'Is it hate or love 'suits here much 😉 😃
The time sruya proposed her he desperately wanted to talk to her and anyhow he managed to ignore every obstacle bt at last MM caught her 😆 ... Though she was not wrong for Shehenshah bt her timing gets wrong
No matter how much he is in frustration or how much have conflict with her bt her tears hurt him ... I m glad reading so ... I think He is not heartless or loveless bt he did not get love yet
Coming to the hojra scene
"he is way more stubborn than I thought, I have never envisioned a more powerful, more manipulative player comparable him, he knows very well, how to turn cards on his side " ... " LOVE ME OR HATE ME BUT YOU CAN'T RESIST ME " ...😉
ufff ye jalal bhi na do first things at first place as he instantly shot the very question ... "Why are you wearing this royal dress today???" ...As it was his distraction then and now 😳😆 as well as reason of his anger ...
" since the dress was too distracting for a conversation like this " ... 😆Ye banda kamal hai
"If you are asking about my preference then honestly I don't prefer you in this dress. I would rather prefer you in nothing at all..." .... Ya Allah! ... Seems like his anger fuelled his desires 😳
"When I wanted you to wear this dress, you disregarded my order and now you have no shame in wearing this transparent dress and exposing your body to an unknown man." He answered bitterly while his eyes lingered over at her bosom.
His obsession his possession is with soo much love ...
A hardcore Obssessive jalal
Naughty haughtiee .😳
'When she said that he will be the last person on earth whom she trust ' ... I thought that now this hot conversation will turned into rough one as when first time she distrust him at the river he was utterly hurted ... Though that was real and it was her fake accusation in anger 😉
" Since this is the best dress I have, I wore it. I didn't even realize that this dress is too divulging until you pointed out besides I didn't know that King Surya Vadan, himself came here to see me." she explained convincingly ...
Aww ...
Is she pretending to be innocent, or she truly is? Well i have also the same query .. And i think not ...akhir Kaise check karti concentration dres sejada ja pr jo tha 😃😆
"In that case, let me warn you before you take any hasty decisions. If you dared to accept his proposal, remember there will be severe consequences which you will be responsible. Remember, If you let him touch you, I will rip his hands off his body. If you say yes, then he will become my prime enemy, my mission, my target, I will ruin not only him but his kingdom as well "
" Tumsa koi aur is zameen pe hua, toh rab se shikayat hogi ... tumhe chahane waala koi aur hua, toh qayamat se pehle qayamat hogi " ... 😳
She is my child hood friend idiot ... I like the way he called her idiot 😆... He should have told her that he put Her painting in his PRIVATE KINGDOM
And then ruk s convo came ...actually this what she want to say fr soo long ...jealousy ...and even in through out conversation she really conversed what hurt Her in these days she did not seemed doing any acting bt then again when he got bit suspicous about her she instantly come in that form .. I felt like there was another radha who is on mission 😉
When she asked about ruks boasting and marks .. I thought ...That if she got to know of his imagination while that encounter with ruks what would be her reaction 😆
"His alluring scent pulled her towards him like a moth gets attracted to a flame "... I agree 😆😳
A sudden urge to touch her buttery skin made him braver, just to feel her, he carefully but delicately slithered his hand under her long smooth hair
Beautifully romantic di 😛 ... Slowly he is advancing his antics ... And radha is no less enjoying it ... Really her brain get packed infront of him 😳😆
The hug was much needed fr both She found warmth and He found solace in her arms what he craved from soo long ... i like the way everytime he tug her she got pulled to him like he a magnet as u said" moth attracted to flame" .And I loved the lines too...
"Mild waves of heat flowered in her heart like a bud flourishing in the spring sunbeams" ... Every scene was delight to read both of them lost in each other
OMG ... his sixth sense got doubted on her as mystery bt he discard it ... I feared that he is now nt heartless bt disclosure of her identity would made him so 😕
Oh God ... His wrath would be unexpressable ... Also a high stuff chapter fr u to write haina di ( u must be thinking that in my every comment i wrote it)😆
Woah ... jo observed a hidden Pain in his heart his agony when he was talking about hb and Bt these words of her surprised me more >
" who is obsessively devoted to her and ferociously in need of a true love "... Did i read right? ... Radha said so ... So now when she perceive it i wish she give heed to her sixth sense bcoz now condition has changed ja started to love her deeply and it is increasing with every day ... As the description of his state u wrote when he was facing the window clearly displaying so ...Waiting fr her reasons to unfold
"Please visit Hakim Sahiba instantly Shahenshah, it seems you are losing your mind."
"You are a fearless pigheaded idiot... you really need to learn how to behave with a Shahenshah, otherwise one day, I will lose my all senses and will choke you to death... not only you but I will suffer my entire life because of your arrogance."
Offfo indono ki ladayi ... I would say that these wildly fights need some lovely bytes 😉😆
As both r in need and both r in desire 😛😆
Hehe ... Jodha turned her face and clutched her jaw while mumbling ... Very cute 😛... Is miss arrogant don't know dat this devil has two scanning machines also which can scan in her soul as well as 😉 ( u know ... 🤣)
"Don't be too self-conscious, confess 😆
I can't take any more of his arrogance, either he admits that he loves me or let me walk away.' ...
A little confusion di pls clarify that weather her heart want him to admit his love or it was her plan .. Bcoz her mission is to make him fall and he is fallen fr her
" you are MINE only..." he muttered in a voice so low, almost inaudible, she wasn't sure if he meant for her to hear, he continued emphasizing, "Yes... I do not believe in forcing on women and I will never force you to accept me, but I am not that great or a saint I will allow you by myself to go to him. And your statement about being unfair... Radha being a Shahenshah, I have done uncountable unfair things... I will add one more without a hitch, and for you, I can go to any extent..."
Wov di u r The best 👏... The way u had potrayed his character till now is outstanding ...sirf kahne k liye nahe he is manipulative dominant strong and ravishing character bt u made him by his every word every action u justified his character ...u remembered there msg transferring session ... There what lines u wrote was a delight to read i very much liked them and so many places
'Because your pig headed queen snubbed me and your damn mouth was shut.' she angrily thought' ... I agree 😆
'Because you broke my heart cruelly and offended me by proposing to be your concubine.' I understand
'Because I love you damn it... I can't bear your hatred and ignorance.' ... I loved these silent answers of jodha 😉
"Jalal silently mumbled to himself while twirling his hand through his soft curls. What are you trying to prove Radha that I ruined your fortune? Ohhh You have not known me enough... Even after I give my decision in favor of Surya, you will still deny him and that too all by yourself. No woman has survived my charm yet... You probably need to spend more time with me, especially when I am not this aggravated. His alert gazes constantly fought to read her mind."
Ya... Allah ! Meri tauba ... ❤️ ... 😆
Lines justified my bewitching jalal
. "I feel complete when you are in my arms, your audible heartbeats assure me of the existence of my heart... Please don't leave, I feel deserted, I need you today."
He has said everything to her ... ❤️
And Radha understanding it bt not admitting it ...
"Can I request you for something,Please" He stated in pleading tone and emphasized the word please'.
'She bizarrely nodded her head in disbelief at his mellow tone.' ... @bold ... 😆
"I will probably end up slaughtering my own kin, my own cousins, and their family, it would be a bloodbath. They will not keep silent... and instead of achieving my goal to rule the entire Hindustan, I will end up struggling to hold on to what I do possess. But isn't it so that I am the super power and if I feel helpless for my own sake then what good this throne is for me. I need to step up and fight for myself... my own happiness. I have suffered enough and given plenty to my people throughout my lifespa
why can't I fulfill my own desire?"
Here i want to say that his ressons r considerable ...though he loves her ... Even if not fr rule or regulations bt fr his duty towards his Throne ... And as he is shehenshah it owns some sacrifices from him ... And he is bind to pay them if he wish or not ... This is an irony of his character that he is shehenshah the powerful man bt he can not get love of his life ... Though she is his ' jaan ' ...
Let see how will u unite them 😉... Thanku fr this long update di ... i wish there conversation not ends 😆... Waiting fr next 😊
Edited by KanJmaskis - 9 years ago
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