RKG CHAPTER 16 page 117 POSTED Oct 19th

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha
Bhavini, superb update as usual...u have put a certain standard for this story, and every new chapter just surpasses the previous one to be better...just too amazing...superb powerplay of emotions...
Diksha thank U my dear... for such a lovely word... Powerplay emotions😳

just precap is scary...Surya and Jalal were less to create problems for Radha/Jo, so now Adham is coming up..😡...poor Radha...she is breaking mentally by Jalal's obsession and her love for him...and now that stupid Adham will make her life hell????😲😡plz dear, she doesn't need more enemies...🤢
Don't worry she is waiting for him to approach her 😉

and why suddenly this question / answer round? not getting replies like u want, or something bothering u??ok so replies to ur question..
Actually, I continued this story after a long break... so it took me about two to three chapters to come back to the flow of the story... Personally, I felt story pace was slightly slow... and I felt after writing this chapter so I was in dilemma to post this chapter or not... at one point I was thinking to rewrite entire chapter... but I felt lazy😆 and already readers were requesting for the update.
Diksha this story is really complicated and I am aware that I have taken a risk... many readers might give up the story in the middle because it's not a simple love story (hope not), this story will have many many ups and downs ... but eventually, they will enjoy it... I am hoping😆
I truly wanted to obtain readers point of view.
Questions:
1. If U were the writer of this story, would U alter anything in this chapter? If so... WHAT? And Why?
no alteration...this chappy is beyond my imagination, so I just love this as it is...
2. Do U think story moving at the correct pace?
thoda fast chalega...I mean, if u can update fast, and we get updates atleast once in 15 days😉😛
3. Who is UR favorite character in this story? (Jalal... Jodha... Rahim... Ruku... Hamida... Surya) why?
of course Jalal and Jo/radha😳...and even rahim too...😃...waise ruku me like karne jaisa kuch hai kya??😕...and Surya, then we r yet to know abt him...Hamida , i don't know...

Thanks😳

Edited by shahbhavini - 9 years ago

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-
Bhavi di...sorry for this late... but I don't want to be short in my comments, and right now I am not free enough to write a long one.
Will comment tomorrow...sorry again di!

Shagun where R u?

Edited by shahbhavini - 9 years ago

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: swriter
Nice chapter di but if u don't mind can I tell u something?
Plz give some speed to your story u know your other story have good speed.
U did everything right in it but in RKG aap bahut lamba keinch rahi ho.
This story I started as SS... suppose to finish in 15 chapters... but readers requested to make it to FF... so I slow down... but I have decided to speed up ... I don't want to bore readers...

Sometime, I feel that this story is stopped at same point.

I am really sorry I have disappoint you😕

I know u r awesome writer and I love you so much.
Because of your writing talent I stick my lots of hopes and desires 😃

I am learning and trying... but I will try my best... 😃

Plz give some interesting twists and turn to this story.

It will take time for twist and turn... but once it began to bounce U will squeal... be ready for fastest roller coaster ride🤣

Which will make this story more interesting.
And don't take long time for updating di.
Plz update next chapter soon ...

I will try my best... but next chapter .. IS IT HATE OR LOVE

I m waiting di 😳

Edited by shahbhavini - 9 years ago

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ketaki1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

So the next update is on is it hate or love..
I even love that story di.. that was the reason for me to join IF... I started to follow it on fb first. ...eagerly waiting di...

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Ashvneet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Unressed on pg 2 .

Really sorry for being this late .

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swetiii

@swetiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

amazing chappi Dii
loved it
Jalal was literally going mad because of Jodha..
he even shouted on his mother
but I liked that he felt guilty about that..
and his emotions..
that he was not able to understand what hurt him more.. his words or hami's choice

finally JJ face off
you depicted their emotions so well..
love
pain
hurt
sorrow
helplessness
care
ego
resentment
anger
and everything
loved their change of emotions
Hehe

"i would prefer you in nothing at all"
Jalal becoming naughty..
🤣

Jalal really trusts her so much
he didn't even listen to his six sense when it came to radha
he feels suspicious of her
still loves her blindly

but I truly didn't like radha here
she is literally playing with jalal's emotions
she is betraying his pure trust & love
even though she loves him..
she doesn't feel bad about betraying him

I know she is not wrong at her place
but what he did to her was done in unconsciousness..
he was under alcohol affect
he didn't try to force on her intensionally
(its the thing I guessed from the past thing which u gave Dii..
where jallu found himself half naked with nail marks on his chest as if he was trying to force on someone
& she managed to get free from his clutches
and she was Jodha
& here she is to take revenge)

but she should have understood him in this course of time
that he can't do such a crime

coming to present
Jalal won't accept his love that easily
but its not his fault
he is like that only
still he said everything that shows he loves her

I really imagined Jo crying thinking about ruku's boasting of her love bites & the loving words that Jalal spoke to her.. which was meant for radha
ofcourse it will tear up her heart
I liked her hold on herself
that she didn't give up easily
she stood strong for herself

and like seriously
they were fighting like tom & jerry
wanting the other to accept his/her love first
kuch nahi ho sakta inn dono ka
🤣

Jalal was so sad about the Rukaiya thing
poor him.. never got the true love he craved for
just thinking how will he protect himself from destruction..
when he is falling for the enemy
how will he react when he will know that radha was his enemy
whom he desired so much

I don't mean to portray Jo as villain
but still
I said my POV

I loved Jalal's character
and although the story is going in amazing pace
I am going mad thinking about what will happen next
Hehe
can't help
desperate reader I am
🤣

loved it all Dii
update asap

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

@Blue😉

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399
Unressed on pg 2 .
Really sorry for being this late .

Don't be sorry dear.. Ab late comment kiya h to reply bhi late he milega..😛

Scores Equal😉🤣

Haina bhavi di???🤣

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Ashvneet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Don't be sorry dear.. Ab late comment kiya h to reply bhi late he milega..😛
Scores Equal😉🤣

Haina bhavi di???🤣

Catty dii ... Aapki muj se koi dushmani h kya 😡 ??

Bhavi diii ... Inki baat mt Suno ... Ye to hamesha muj bichaari nanhi si jaan k piche padi rehti h 😡

Edited by Ashvneet2399 - 9 years ago

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

Catty dii ... Aapki muj se koi dushmani h kya 😡 ??
Bhavi diii ... Inki baat mt Suno ... Ye to hamesha muj bichaari nanhi si jaan k piche padi rehti h 😡

Kya dushmani??😆

Aur kon nanhi si jaan??😲😲

wese mujhe bhi kaunsa abhi tak reply mila h ashu..🤣