RKG CHAPTER 16 page 117 POSTED Oct 19th - Page 14

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal

Congratulations for new thread dii..
Update was stupendous 👏

Thank U Kajal😃

jalal shouted on hamida 😲

Hehehe... U R reaction😆

Akdha's arguments were never ending...

As always...

Both love each other insanely but can't confess..

Both of them have their own constraint.

Thanku for pm
continue soon

Originally posted by: thermo

Was a silent reader till date. Not regular on forum as well as am busy often. But now I really have to appreciate your writing skills. The way you describe emotions and characters is just brilliant. Continue soon, Di 👏

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Thanks for pm and beautiful and long update.

Originally posted by: ketaki1

The update committee...

U THE LEADER

Starting with the chapter, the start was unexpected; I thought that jalal spoke those words only for surya but obviously, hamida have been observing his behavior. I am not surprised that it bothered her.

Hamida was sitting next to Surya... So she heard the entire conversation.

Now you introduced maham again and jalal wants to talk to her about something personal...(like we don't know what it might be) but again it is you, so who know what they will be end up talking about.

I wanted to add some political involvement in the story... and Maham is concern about finance...

Plus if he told her about radha, I don't think that maham will be surprised with it as in the starting chapters you have written that she thinks radha could captivate any man in her beauty. But again maham's character in the story is not much known, so can't really imagine what she might think. She can think as a mother of jalal and advice him to go for her as long as she is of no harm to her. But what if she wants to see adham on throne and would think it as a good way to make others defy him. Or else she could be loyal for her sultanate and advice him to leave her alone and forget about her or make her a concubine .Confused..

Don't be confuse... Villain role suits perfectly to Maham... hehehe

Coming to marium makhani, I do not blame her for thinking for her sultanate first. She have sensed it from starting that radha would change jalal. She was the one who stopped her from leaving the palace.

She knew that it will not be easy for Jalal to pursue her but that time she recognized only Radha could void his emptiness. When she stopped her that time she didn't know that Radha is awfully persistent and even though Jalal himself proposed her to be his concubine she refuses... She never thought that anyone can refuse Jalal.

When she told jalal that she needed to talk to him, he knew it won't turn out great. I do not blame him for busting on her, and I even think that she saw that coming. He was longing for her loved but she always cared for her kingdom first( which is a duty of the queen). It have affected him as a child but now when he found his soul few days back which is going to be taken away from him, how could he be quite. I think the last sentence that hamida said that she would send letter to king surya really broke his ice.

YAP... He tried hard not to burst...

When this was taking place, jodha was waiting for jalal for a very long time. She decided to go and not meet him, which even I would have done if I was in her place. I don't understand why would he blame her for losing his mind. I know he is king and he should behave himself in all possible situation. But he is in love for the very first time, give him a break.

He is blaming her because he is aware why he is suppressed anger suddenly burst To protect his love... and To fight for his love... and His LOVE IS RADHA... hehehe... So he is regretting his action and blaming Radha...

I loved the way radha was admiring him while sitting on the bench waiting, his stubbornness, manipulative approach etc. but yet again his rage played and he dragged her inside her chamber. Jalal is furious I know...he loves her but can't accept that...he is fighting a battle inside between a king and a lover...I know sometimes king can be more powerful than the lover but honestly I am waiting for the day the lover will overpower the king... I really feel sorry for him though...all alone and yet with everyone...I do not blame him to lose his anger on jo... he waited for her so long, she wore the dress which he gave him for someone else and on the top lost his control and shouted on his mother because of her and now she tells him that, she will not see him...

Ketaki U exactly came to the point... While writing I felt the same emotions for Jalal... He is going through like hell... it started from the boat night... then he is avoiding her... her pain and tears were shattering him... Tansen night... he hurt her knowingly and his plan failed completely... King Surya vadan came to marry Radha... Poor fellow was going through a lot and on top of it Hamida pour oil in the fire. What U expect... VOLCANO...HEHEH

More dialogs' between them, I liked the way he controlled himself afterward. Angry at beginning and then clam, a beautiful blend of emotions on his side.

While writing ... I don't know how I wrote his fuming anger... U know when I am writing I am indifferent world...

"Then why are you still, trembling?"- this sentence really got me saying, because of you idiot. You frightened her till her core and then suddenly you decide to be all nice and ask her why this trembling? Then after that he tried to justify his action, even though not telling that he care for her ( which he did but afterwards).

It took him a while to amass himself.

And then after that, he was obsessed to know why she wore that dress today? Radha did handled it well. "If you are asking about my preference then honestly I don't prefer you in this dress. I would rather prefer you in nothing at all..." -(Definitely Bold) again a bold statement by him but radha didn't complained.

They are getting comfortable with each other... She didn't react just because she was confused why he was asking her?

He tactfully asked her about surya vadan proposal and by her reply she proved a point. She is keeping her options open, for me it was a statement for jalal to understand, speed up your game or else lose me. "Remember, If you let him touch you, I will rip his hands off his body. If you say yes, then he will become my prime enemy, my mission, my target."- bold statement by him. But radha understands that you should not play with fire and decided to protect surya.

She knows very well how powerful and cruel Jalal is.

The conversation turned to rukaiya, jodha's jealousy consumed her...I felt that it literally gave her away to jalal. On one hand I was happy that it gave him a hope for more but on the other hand I felt sorry for radha. You are giving a hard time to the readers di.

She confessed to herself much time... when he is around she fails to think with her brain...

She did mentioned his little trip to lake with ruk, honestly I didn't see that coming. I never thought that she would burst out on him like that. I sensed it might be her insecurities. But she had a point, you go on a trip with your one wife and then she is cover in all love bites and again you tell someone else that she is just a childhood friend and no more.?

Entire day and night she was thinking about this only... Her pain was unbearable... When something is in your mind it is obvious will come out when U get chance. As soon as she got opportunity she busted.

Jalal did ask her if she wanted to see were her painting was place and she brutally denied it. For once I thought that if only she would have said yes then she would have known what place she holds in his life. But she already know that, she just want to hear it from him but his kingly ego is coming in between.

She didn't care about her painting but she was jealous seeing Rukaiya's portrait over his bed.

The feeling for being with each other is very strong, while reading you could feel it, It's like I am the one in love. Yet again radha lost herself and allowed jalal to come near her. Jalal on the other hand told her about his fight with hamida, I really think he is craving for love. He loves her and he know that but then why refuse to say it to her? The rejection ? I don't think so as she have already rejected his proposal. He knows that she is in love with him and yet...

He strongly believes that falling in love is the biggest weakness for any warrior... Even though he knows... he will not admit it to her directly... It's not easy to change your childhood basic mindset.

I loved his explanation about what he thought when she hurt herself and that he couldn't sleep at night, why he ignored her. But then again telling her how he feel, he tried to manipulate her in accepting that she is in love with him. I loved the way you described radha's state of mind and caved her emotions of loosing herself in him and regaining her confidence back so smoothly. "Please visit Hakim Sahiba instantly Shahenshah, it seems you are losing your mind." - I was laughing so hard on this line, I wish you could see my face. Best comeback line ever.

Hehehe... I wish I could

(I will reply tomorrow for half comment😃)🤗 too sleepy... LOVE U JAAN😳

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

@red
look , who is talking..😲.😡... that author, who always promises two days for next update and takes two months...😉

Originally posted by: melovesja

When I read that line I remembered you only 😆 and here you are

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

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Originally posted by: shahbhavini

👏👏I feel so happy when silent reader comments... Thank U so much for commenting ...and appreciating my work.😃

Originally posted by: melovesja

Hi Diksha I remembered you because of your powerful one liners which brings jahnu on thread why r u so shocked.

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

aree nothing like that...I never thought all of u like that...I just post it, but later feel if I offend anybody..😃