Akdha TS: Hold me in the rain 'Completed' 3 parts on pg1. - Page 11

Originally posted by: avika444

Let me comment for part one first ,didnt expect u will post this soon 😆
anyways part one was fab payal
so it was surya and jalals mission to bring back our jajo together
good job guys and its really working 😉
thanks for the pm dear

P.S now i will read part two 😉

Originally posted by: futus

thnxx for updating so soon dii.I didn't expected u to update this early 😆 😆

Originally posted by: avika444

First of all payal pls tell me who is this stupid girl tanya because of whom all this chaos happened .
poor jo was so hurt to see jalal with her and this jalal was vexed with her constant nagging and uttered those awful words ,which she couldnt bear hearing .
but she not innocent eithr ,she slapped jalal and called him eunuch resultinh their break up .
😭
sooo bad yaar
ahem ahem so the plan actually worked haan
they kissed each other passiontely

ab aage kya hoga ?? 😉
continue soon payal
thanks for pm

P.S i loved jodhas attire payal

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Ohk.. I"ll take a month to update it's last part😆

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Even I am surprised with myself that I updated too early😆

Thankyou dear😊

Correction dear.. It was surya and Abdul's plan😛

Yep It worked😆

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

he he his ex girlfriend😆 I mentioned it in update dear.

Yep she's not so innocent. He said just one thing and she didn't let him complete.. slapped him and said so lovely words to him😆😆

Aage yaar mujhe kya pta.. You know I am too innocent to talk about such things like ashu🤣

Me too loved her dress 😉

Thankyou so much for reading and commenting avika 🤗