Akdha TS: Hold me in the rain 'Completed' 3 parts on pg1.

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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

U put us in a dilemma dear...

What happened between Jodha & Jalal???

But it was nice .. But short..

Waiting for a biggg update...

Dress was sooo beautiful.. I liked it a lot...😳

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403
U put us in a dilemma dear...
What happened between Jodha & Jalal???
But it was nice .. But short..
Waiting for a biggg update...
Dress was sooo beautiful.. I liked it a lot...😳

Thankyou so much dear😊

Will update today but It will be short

Sorry for that. I thought to update it as one short but then divided in 3 parts.😳

Ahh.. Dress was cool and jalal liked it too😉😆

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403
Sorry for late comment...

Never say sorry dear🤗

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Thankyou so much dear😊
Will update today but It will be short
Sorry for that. I thought to update it as one short but then divided in 3 parts.😳

Ahh.. Dress was cool and jalal liked it too😉😆

Not only Jalal yaar.. Even I liked it😳

Shot update also ok... But update early Payal... We are waiting...😉

No sorry dear...

Edited by lakshmi1403 - 9 years ago

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Never say sorry dear🤗

🤗

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Updating in 2 minutes dear😊

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Kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

awesome n romantic one

update soon

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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

That was super awesome Payu di... 😊

I just loved it... ❤️

They are lucky indeed to get a second chance...

As not everyone are born so lucky to get their true love... 😊

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Let me comment for part one first ,didnt expect u will post this soon 😆
anyways part one was fab payal
so it was surya and jalals mission to bring back our jajo together
good job guys and its really working 😉
thanks for the pm dear

P.S now i will read part two 😉

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#100

First of all payal pls tell me who is this stupid girl tanya because of whom all this chaos happened .
poor jo was so hurt to see jalal with her and this jalal was vexed with her constant nagging and uttered those awful words ,which she couldnt bear hearing .
but she not innocent eithr ,she slapped jalal and called him eunuch resultinh their break up .
😭
sooo bad yaar
ahem ahem so the plan actually worked haan
they kissed each other passiontely

ab aage kya hoga ?? 😉
continue soon payal
thanks for pm

P.S i loved jodhas attire payal