TS: ||My Mother|| part 3 updated - Page 7

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Stuti di...this was one write-up which can make anyone cry..😭.Seriously...you can weave magic with your words...😳 I have said this before also, and will say it again, your writing has the power to move people. We can connect with your characters, and that too so easily. We can imagine what all they're going through. Love you so much. ❤️

Thank you soo much my darling...😳Love you too.🤗

I loved how Jalal is being honest to himself at least. He accepts that he doesn't desreve Jodha's hatred. Well not exactly this Jalal, but the cruel, heartless one. The way he said that Jodha would have definitely cried if she had met the little child, was sooo damn touchy. 😳 That means he wanted her to know him, know that little, innocent Jalal, and not hate him. 😳 Well I don't know if you planned this or not, but this sure had some glimpses of the Jalal-Jodha relationship also. As seen when he thinks of his unnecessary anger on her, when she was the only one who bothered to inform him of his mother's illness. 😳

I am not going to emphasis on Jodha and Jalal, but since it is their's story, each and every incident will have some reflection of their relationship as well.😳 This incident will certainly take a role in the betterment of their relationship if you think as a whole.😃

Both the flashbacks were sooo cute. Literally. 😳 I loved the way you have compared Jalal's mother to a dream for him. That was so good. 👏⭐️ Loved the way you have portrayed a little child's eagerness to meet his mother. And how cutely and sweetly he's imagining her...OMG...Really wow...😳 And he finally recognizes her. The bond of love is so strong, that it connects them so strongly. 😳 How beautifully you have shown the insecurities of Jalal about his mother leaving him. How cutely he ties himself to her, not wanting to let her go. Uff...😳

I knew you will like these flashbacks.😆 thank you so much dear.😳

I knew it. I knew that the stupid reason that Jalal gave was just a facade. I knew that the real reason was that his soul, the son in him did not permit him to leave his mother in such a condition. 😳😃

It had to be. Jalal is not so bad after all that he will think so carelessly about his mother.😛

The conflict between the son and the adamant Jalal is so perfectly shown. It reminded me of Jalal's Diary. Your thoughts resemble mine on this topic. He wants to go and meet his MOm, but can't. His legs don't seem to move forward. He knows that his anger is stupid and unnecessary, but he an't seem to brush it aside. Loved everything in this part! 😳👏⭐️

As I had told you once that I got the inspiration of writing this one from the latest update of Jalal's diary; so it is quite obvious that both will resemble in some parts.😳 It is not that Jalal has any apathy or hatred to his mother. He cares for her very much in his heart. But due to the deprived childhood, due to the long detachment and resentment to mother, he cannot move forward.

Waiting eagerly to know what happens next. 😳😃

I am also quite eager to write.😆😃

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti