TS: ||My Mother|| part 3 updated - Page 9

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Why did you end it there? 😭

one more chhota sa shot plzzz... 😭

Originally posted by: swriter

Next part plzzz

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Do you know how rabindranath tagore has defined short stories? The main criteria is it should be finished in such a way that the reader's mind does not get satisfaction. So that he thinks that the story has not ended, it has something more after that.The ending should be entirely dependent on the reader's individual imagination...😉

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Stuti di...I am really at a loss of words now...I have used up all of them in your praises...But they aren't seeming to be enough now...👏👏👏

Thank u...🤗

And I'm really really sorry for being this late...the reason above - mentioned...😛

O really?😆

The update was...M-A-R-V-L-O-U-S, A-M-A-Z-I-N-G, B-E-A-U-T-F-U-L, and what not. 😳⭐️ Really really lovely and beautiful. 😳❤️

I am relieved to know that you all have liked it... I was not gaining much satisfaction while writing so...😛

I loved loved loved the cute , sweet, and innocent Jalal, and his bond with his ailing mother. 😳 I loved the line about how he himself didn't know that he could speak like this also. 😳 A new Jalal has been discovered by the old Jalal...Just Wonderful...❤️

And my sister was saying that this chapter has become a cheap melodrama.😡

Loved everything about this chappy...😳😃

Thank u.😳

I really really want you to continue this. Pretty please...😳

Actually I fear I dont know what to write next😕

I didn't even realize when it ended. I was like, where is the rest? 😆 Well, that was the magical spell it had cast on me. 😳❤️.😃

I had deliberately ended this way so that all of you are compelled to think that what after that. You remember what I had said about the definition of short stories by Rabindranath?'sesh hoyeo hoilo na sesh'-ending should be in that way so that all thinks it has not ended. So you mean I am able to fulfill that criteria?😆