TS: ||My Mother|| part 3 updated - Page 5

Originally posted by: pinamanenikavya

3rd part ko bhi abhi update kardo

Originally posted by: lovespari

😭 wo mne ittni mehnat se half hour invest kr ke cmmnt likha tha TS pe pr jb post pr click kiya to woh post hone ke jagh delet ho gaya...😭 meri saari mhnaat bekaar...😭 ab m kya krungii..kitnu mehnat se aur itna bada cmmnt likha tha mne pr 😭😭

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

Awesome idea dear. ...
it was so emotional to read it...
at first I was like this jalal will nt care for any one...
but after reading fb v got to knw I did nt knw about her at all...
this maham was totally in to send him away from his mother only to make her son position strong...
by this its clear that she want to apart jalal nd hamid. ...
I was happy he told he will nt go but sad after reading next line...
good to knw jodha found out there is same emotional in both mother nd son to be with each other but cant do anything nw... hope jodha get jalal in front of hamid nd let him see what is she for him...
thanks for pm. ..
nd update part soon. ...

Both the chapter r superb n thnxx for pm

awzum
jallu still loves his mom
update asap

Very touching and brilliant shot again👏

Congratulation sissy for your first ts 😊

Oh my god both two shots were simply wonderful dear now i m eagerly waiting for rest of steps plz update them so so

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh

Congratulation sissy for your first ts 😊

[BIG HUG] 🤗

Awesome superb update sissy 😃😃

Argh i hate this jalal 😡

His mother is so ill and here He is trying to Flirt with jodha 😲

koi aisa karta ha kia idiot kahin ka 😡

really really what kind of son he is 😕

Argh seriously agar mein wahan hoti na to ek thappad marti is idiot ko 😡

shayad do ya phir shayad 100 ye sahi ha ye isi layak ha 😊

He does not care about his mother 😲

sissy zasbaato nhi ha 😊 jasbaaton ha 😊

Yuck what kind of human he is 🤢

He don't have time for his own mother 😭

I hate him i hate himmm 😡

Sissy bachan nhi 😕 vachan 😃 mithya kiya ha 😕

hehe okay i take my words back i don't hate him 😃

He didn't knew that na that her mother is very ill 😃

None had told him 😃 I Don't hate him 😊

Yeah okay i hate him thora sa 😊

u written true lines sissy Its a responsibility of a son to know about his mother's health apart from all his duties 😊

Argh i hate him so much how can he think like that 😡

Jodha is right if he go to his mother she will get peace 😊

But this stupid jalal and this idiot maham 😡

I hate him 😡😡😡

hi stuti... ur a wonderful writer...
u very well knw hw to deal with emotions this 2nd part was amazing ...
which contains about jalal side...
I loved d way u have written about 3 year boy thinking hw his mother look like nd hw it leads him to go nd met her...
but again change his mind as he is a emperor cant should his emotions like this but he is forgetting that he is a son first...
nd 2nd FB part touched my heart a lot hw small jalal find out his mother nd her reaction for that was so cute. .. but again his dream of being with her broke out I really felt bad for jalal but he knw that all she did for his well fair nd her duty. ..
in last part he forgot everything nd cried like small boy hope he goes nd see her ... hope to read next part soon stuti...
nd thanks for pm. ...