TS: ||My Mother|| part 3 updated - Page 6

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr

Very touching and brilliant shot again👏

Poor kid,how desperate he was for his mother's love😭

You have described his longing and pain so well that I could feel everything running in front of my eyes.

The innocent 3 year old kid has become an emperor who is deprived of the basic things.He can't even cry,can't hug his mother..what a pity😭

All the flashback scenes were awesome👏

Thanks for the pm and waiting for the next part😊

Buddy you described every emotion very skillfully. After reading it my eyes filled up with tears. I know jalal's behavior was not good toward his mother but his pain not less then others. I can understand his pain. Plz update soon

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

hi stuti... ur a wonderful writer...
u very well knw hw to deal with emotions this 2nd part was amazing ...
which contains about jalal side...
I loved d way u have written about 3 year boy thinking hw his mother look like nd hw it leads him to go nd met her...
but again change his mind as he is a emperor cant should his emotions like this but he is forgetting that he is a son first...
nd 2nd FB part touched my heart a lot hw small jalal find out his mother nd her reaction for that was so cute. .. but again his dream of being with her broke out I really felt bad for jalal but he knw that all she did for his well fair nd her duty. ..
in last part he forgot everything nd cried like small boy hope he goes nd see her ... hope to read next part soon stuti...
nd thanks for pm. ...

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Thanks you for your complement raksha.😳

I knew that you all will like the flashback parts..😆I am happy that you liked it.😃

Trying to post next part asap but don't know how much hurry can I do.😆

welcome dear...
haha that was lovely fb part... its ok dear take ur time to update but nt more then a day plz...

wonderful shots dear
read the 2 parts in one go .
really awesome, like the way you describe the grief of JALAL and his dream to meet his ammijaan when he was young .
JODHA was upset with JALAL, she doesn't know the full truth
I love each and every dialogue that you wrote here . Beautifully penned down .
JALAL want to meet his ammi but his ego is not allowing him to do so, really a pathetic situation .
So in my point of view here JODHA hatred towards JALAL is right .
But now JODHA can feel his pain in her but unable to figured it out .
please end this torture soon
thanks for pm and update soon, and yes again sorry for late commenting
like button is not working will like later sorry for this also 😃

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

O dear... U r so cute soru...😳😆

Don't hate Jalal so much... He loves his mother but cannot express...😊 read second part.😆

Thank u for ur corrections. I am very very very poor in Hindi.🤓

Thank u for reading dear.😳

Awesome update dr..
what a emotiinal chppy..
FLASHBACK part was sooo amazing..
update soon nxt part..egerly waiting for that..

Originally posted by: Mavaddat

wonderful shots dear
read the 2 parts in one go .
really awesome, like the way you describe the grief of JALAL and his dream to meet his ammijaan when he was young .
JODHA was upset with JALAL, she doesn't know the full truth
I love each and every dialogue that you wrote here . Beautifully penned down .
JALAL want to meet his ammi but his ego is not allowing him to do so, really a pathetic situation .
So in my point of view here JODHA hatred towards JALAL is right .
But now JODHA can feel his pain in her but unable to figured it out .
please end this torture soon
thanks for pm and update soon, and yes again sorry for late commenting
like button is not working will like later sorry for this also 😃

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

Well Stuti dii , I didn't mention in my previous cmmnt anywhere that I hate him , i don't , i even can't 😳 ; instead i said i Pity him , n I still Pity him , seriously Pity him .

I know what m saying is a li'l wierd , what to do this is only what m thinking or what is going in my heart n mind .

U were as always Superr Awesome here too , no doubt in that . The way u express each n every single emotion , what could I say , m just Speechless !!

Believe me m truly not in the condition to speak up or type anything right now , again m going to sound weird with what m going to say now , my throat is chocking n my tears are nowhere to stop . I don't know wts happening , m just way too touched .

Anyways , i loved this part too . The little boy craving for his Mother's love , that flashback part was Spectacular one !! Still my take on Jalal is the same as before .

I know m again sounding harsh as well as wierd .

Well , sorry dii for filling up my whole cmmnt with all this wierd things .

I still hope the guilt which will take place or should I say is taking place in his heart should Never lessen .

M just way too much touched I guess . Ahh !! How m I gonna get a peaceful sleep tonight . These thoughts are going to haunt me the whole night today . Uff!! M being such a cry baby 😆 !!

Update the last part Soon .

Thanks fir the pm 🤣..

Once again sorry for such a wierd cmmnt 🥱!!