Okk ! I know m just soo very much late to unress ! M really very sorry dii !This one is fr the 3rd part !
This was just AMAZINGLY AWESOME !
Just loved it but after reading it , i really need one more shot please ! Can't get a hold on my anxikus heart which desperate for some AkDha moments 😉 !
N about this shot , i really loved the way u penned Jalal's n HB's emotions n Jodha's as well .
Seriously , it was fantabulous !
But still , it doesn't change my views about Jalal 😛 ! Really sorry if m again sounding wierd here but this is what actually i could think about Jalal !
But i guess , this part had somewhat lessen that pity for him.
U are just MIND BLOWING !
I was living in that moment their reading Jalal - HB convo ! It just stole my heart away !
Beyond words ! The motherly love she bestowed n the emotions which were convulsively flowing from his heart for his mother , left me speechless !
Please update one more shot ! Please !
Thnks fr the pm 🤣.
Edited by Ashvneet2399 - 9 years ago
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