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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
EXCELLENT 👏
the mother son duo united finally after getting out of their griefs.
Finally shehenshah-e-hind's ego is defeated by his love for his mother.
Finally there was a contented smile on his face after many years.
You penned down the emotions very beautifully stuti..i could imagine everything in front of my eyes.
Ending couldn't be better than this..
Thanku for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
What a wonderful chapter👏
Jalal and Hamida's bond looks so pure and divine
Even Jodha was lost in their purity and emotions
Loved this chapter😃
Awaiting next chapter soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

What a wonderful chapter👏

Jalal and Hamida's bond looks so pure and divine
Even Jodha was lost in their purity and emotions
Loved this chapter😃
Awaiting next chapter soon

Thank u dear.😳
But friend, this was the last chapter.😛😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr

Amazing end 👏
Do write more stories 😃

Only this?😭
Comment a bit longer dear.😃😆
However, thank u...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
awsum buddy
jalal was such a cutie pie
hehe
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal

EXCELLENT 👏
the mother son duo united finally after getting out of their griefs.
Finally shehenshah-e-hind's ego is defeated by his love for his mother.
Finally there was a contented smile on his face after many years.
You penned down the emotions very beautifully stuti..i could imagine everything in front of my eyes.
Ending couldn't be better than this..
Thanku for pm

Thank u very much dear.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh

Res 😛

Res 😛
hehe 😆 Will unress tomorrow 😃😃
Umm gussa mat hona please
Homework mein phasi hoon 😃😃

Chalo dekhte hay...😳😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Okk ! I know m just soo very much late to unress ! M really very sorry dii !
This one is fr the 3rd part !
This was just AMAZINGLY AWESOME !
Just loved it but after reading it , i really need one more shot please ! Can't get a hold on my anxikus heart which desperate for some AkDha moments 😉 !
N about this shot , i really loved the way u penned Jalal's n HB's emotions n Jodha's as well .
Seriously , it was fantabulous !
But still , it doesn't change my views about Jalal 😛 ! Really sorry if m again sounding wierd here but this is what actually i could think about Jalal !
But i guess , this part had somewhat lessen that pity for him.
U are just MIND BLOWING !
I was living in that moment their reading Jalal - HB convo ! It just stole my heart away !
Beyond words ! The motherly love she bestowed n the emotions which were convulsively flowing from his heart for his mother , left me speechless !
Please update one more shot ! Please !
Thnks fr the pm 🤣.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Wonderful and emotional part dear. U wrote every emotion every skillfuly plz update next part so soon i m waiting dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: swriter

Wonderful and emotional part dear. U wrote every emotion every skillfuly plz update next part so soon i m waiting dear

This was the last part...😛😃
Thank u so much for liking it...😳

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