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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Nice start. ..jo family moments lovely. ..continue soon nd do pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
nice update
but update frequently
nice title
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
nice start
cont soon

thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Nice chapter n thnxx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Nice update lakshmi dii..
Jo is already engaged to abhi!!! Does she love him??
Ohhh everyone in her house loves her attama a lot..they only do what she likes..
Hahahah jo doesn't wanna live in that village after her marriage 😃
she wanna study further and wants to settle down in USA..
Lets see where her fate takes her.
Thanku for pm
and take care of yourself
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Sure dear😊
Can u tell me the names of ur stories?? Actually I have 250 unread PMS right now in my inbox so it will be easier for me to search when I get to know the titles😆

Akdha ss punishment completed
Akdha ss Mr& mrs angel in progress
Now this the last mistake...
Thanks dear..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
hello dii..
Nice strt dii😃
love jo n maina prt..
actually love thr bonding thy luk more friends thn mother daughtr😃
jo is such a fun loving chirpy girl..
waiting fr nxt update😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
nice update
jodha is very good and naughty girl
everyone happens according to attamma
waiting for jalal's entry
update soon
thnkx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
I use chand for chandrika...
Bhar for bharmal...
I hope it is ok for that all...

CHAPTER 2:


Jodha & bhar reaches her attamma house...

Chand...Annayya(brother)...how are u?? Hugs him...takes blessings from him...how is my bhabhi...??

Bhar...I am good chelli(sister )...we are fine.. how about u... where is jija ji..???

Chand..he is in his room...he has some work..come annayya... jodhu how r u beta..?? How is ur vaccation...

Jodha...it's good attamma...takes blessings from her..

All goes into house...

Ramarao comes down hearing their words..(chandrika husband..nice guy..loves jodha a lot..)

Ramarao... bharmal how r u??? Hugs jodha.& asks.. how is my bahu???

Bharmal.. I am fine jija ji.. how r u?? Hope everything good...

Ramarao...yes everything cool...

Jodha...Mamayya(father in law) I am super cool... is my attamma troubling u..?? Tell me Mamayya I will take care of that...

Chand... no need to take care of my husband...take care of my son...that is enough for me...

All smiles...

Jodha..thought...oh god...again started...I hate this topic.. I hate this marriage...

Bhar...she will chelli.. U don't worry..

Jodha...just smiles... goes to kitchen to have water...she don't want to marry abhi...she don't have any feelings for him...she said ok to this marriage only for her father...

After having lunch both jodha & bhar leave for jodha hostel...

At the hostel..

Bhar...take care jodha.. do call to Amma & attamma ..ok na.. eat well beta...hugs her & kiss her on forehead & left...

Jodha... bye daddy...I will do...


Jodha...hmmm... bach gaya... Amma i missed u... even I missed u daddy...but even I can't say that to u.. for u attamma is everything...& u r everything to me daddy... maybe in next life I should born as a sister to u dad.. then u love me endlessly...but it's ok jodhu still he loves u.. don't worry...U only scared of him... poor me...
Oh god what poor... I have the classes tomorrow... I need to go...god again hostel...mess food...I missed ur food Amma...

Goes to her room... she shares her room with her friend vaishnavi... both jodha & vaishnavi are best friends...

Jodha... vaishu my baby...how are u??? Hugs vaishu tightly...

Vaishu...Oie drama queen..finally u came...don't hug me yaar...I am not that type..plz... don't hug me...hug ur abhi...plz...

Jodha...vaishuuu...I will kill u...if u started again with abhi...plz stop it re...morning morning Amma...then attamma...again u... I don't want this marriage...let me just wanted to fly to USA...enjoy my life..&.throws herself on the bed...

Vaishu...dream on jodhu... ok now don't sleep plz..let's go down & we will have tea..plz.. let's have panipuri also..

Jodha...we are back today again street food...very bad...

Vaishu...what.???u are saying no to street food..did anything happened to u??? R u fine??? Let me Check... keeps her hand on jodha forehead...
Nothing fine..did ur abhi told to u not eat street food...laughs...

Jodha...throws her pillow...
Vaishu catches...& what happened jodhu tell me...U r looking very dull..

Jodha...nothing much... again today went to attamma house... I don't know but I don't have any feelings for him.. even I don't have intrest in marriage right now..I want to study...ms after job.. after a nice guy... I want a simple life Vaishu..simple guy...like..he should love me very much..he has to take care of me.. he should listen to his mom but he should respect me also... when I hug him I have to forget everything...even myself..he has to know about me everything...without telling anything he has to understand my feelings...cares me... loves me.. when I am with him I should even forget my parents..I want a simple guy Vaishu...my Prince charming...but not a mummy boy...

Vaishu...hugs her...I think u should better marry a robot...then u can create a program according to ur wishes...hahaha...

Jodha... U idiot...I am talking very seriously...U r joking with me...

Vaishu... I heard it a lot of times.. chalo let's go down..enough drama...

Jodha...ok.wait..let me change...goes to wash room

Vaishu... thinks... oh kanha keep my jodha happy always...if I didn't irritate u then u will feel bad Jodhu..I don't want u to be upset..I want always ur smile..I know abhi is not for u..I hope god do some miracle & bring u all happiness...

Jodha came out wearing a black Capri & coral colour t-shirt..

Vaishu..my jodha looking sexy...

Jodha...stop it re...chalo...

Both goes down to have tea & panipuri...

Jodha is a big tea & panipuri lover...whenever she feels upset she will have tea.. even in the midnight also..



Precap: Annayya there is my boyfriend...
Chinnu look at them...they are irritating me...

Sorry for the mistakes...
Plz like & comments..it gives me strength to write more...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Nice description for Prince charming
Introduce jalal

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