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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hai all...again I am writing a new story to kill all...
Hope u all like it...
Sorry if I hurt anyone with this ss...
It's a small ss... mostly 8-10 parts...
Plz give comments positive or negative...
Mostly story revolves around jodha only.. she is the narrator...
Still thinking for a name... suggest some name also..
Who ever wants pm plz send me a buddy request...
In the first I thought should I write or not but after a lot of thinking I started writing...hope u all will like it...thanks in advance...

Prologue is not much there...so I will directly jump to story...hope u all don't mind...

Plz like it...

I want to share a good news with u all... always I am saying I have a health problems... it's not really problem...actually I am pregnant... 5 months...so I am taking time for updating...thank u all for supporting me...

Thank u all..
Love u all...


INDEX:
CHAPTER 01:5
CHAPTER 02:8
CHAPTER 03:10
CHAPTER 04:12
CHAPTER 05:17
CHAPTER 06:21
CHAPTER 07:23
CHAPTER 08:27
CHAPTER 09:31
CHAPTER 10:37
CHAPTER 11:61
CHAPTER 12:68
CHAPTER 13:75
CHAPTER 14:78
CHAPTER 15:81
CHAPTER 16:87
CHAPTER 17:91
CHAPTER 18:96
CHAPTER 19:102
CHAPTER 20:104
CHAPTER 21:107
CHAPTER 22:112
CHAPTER 23:115
CHAPTER 24:119
CHAPTER 25:125
CHAPTER 26:131
CHAPTER 27:135
CHAPTER 28:139
CHAPTER 29:143
CHAPTER 30:148
THREAD 2:


Character sketch:

Jalal...26 years.. completed mba doing job in software company...fun loving guy...nice guy... but his one mistake made jodha life hell... still regretting his mistake...

Jodha... 20 years...fun bubbly girl...loves his family a lot..doing engineering..her mother is her best friend...loves his father but scared of his angry..she do whatever her father asks her.. never so no to her father..engaged to his bava...abhi..

Bharmal... father of jodha..loves her... loves his sister chandrika much than jodha... he gave promise to her that jodha will become her bahu...society is comes first to him than daughter life..doing business...

Maina...jodha mother...very kind.. loves her family a lot..supports jodha every time...best Frd to jodha.. she tooo likes her sister in law chandrika...

Chandrika...sister of bharmal..loves jodha a lot.. wants her as her bahu..abhi mother...

Abhi ...fun guy..cares jodha..wants to marry her for her mother..stays in Australia..doing job...engaged to jodha...

Hamida...jalal mom... kind but hates jodha..( I will tell the reason later)

Humayun... jalal father.. business man.. hates jodha..reason later...

Later on I will introduce character according to story...

Prologue:
Y should always girls are the victims..even the mistake is boy still girl should face all the problems...
Jodha is a girl facing all the problems...how she solved her problems...
Let's wait & see...
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mamtasingla thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice character sketch
continue soon
thnks fr pm
mamtasingla thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats dear for this good news😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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first of all CONGRATS FOR YOUR PREGNANCY
interesting cs & prologue
update soon
avika444 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heyyy naku e story telusu
yayyy

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Anyways congo for new story ra
looking forward to read this
nice character sketch
continue soon pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Firstly congratulation for pregnancy..
Nice CS nd Prologue..
congo for new SS also..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow what a great news di.
Hmmm so now i going to achieve new post as maasi šŸ˜Ž... Yipppeee its party time 🄳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all,congratulations on the promotion😃
Take good care of ur health😊

Nice concept and CS😊

As of now,I've no ideas for the name,will tell you if I get any😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wowww. U r pregnant.. Congi Di n ur story is super n tc ur health properly n baby to..

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