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nikki

@natashathakur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Congrats for good news n nice story n continue sn

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Thanks to all...I am doing good... Thanks for the lovely wishes...

Sorry I am not replying to ur comments... But I read each & every comment... I liked them also..

Coming to name I thought THE LAST MISTAKE... ( sorry not my idea yaar.. Rahiramesh suggested... I like it so wants to keep it... Thanks dear for the name..)

Plz tell me how is it??the name...

I will update first chapter in a while...

I am clearly saying in first few chapters there won't be much Jalal.. I told u people already it's a girl story.. So story revolves around Jodha mostly...after few chapters he will be there...sorry for hurting Jalal fans... Even I am a big fan to him but no way I can't do anything... Very sorry for that...

Plz give comments... So that I will proceed or stop...

Sorry if I hurt anybody feelings...

Thank u all,

Love u all...plz comment & like...

Once again thanks for the lovely wishes...😛

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

nice name akka...
its ok I will wait for jalal entry in d story...

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Will be waiting for the first chapter..

Edited by kajalparijat - 9 years ago

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Avika444

@avika444

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Wow the title seems apt for the story bangaram

waiting for first chap

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403
Thanks to all...I am doing good... Thanks for the lovely wishes...
Sorry I am not replying to ur comments... But I read each & every comment... I liked them also..
Coming to name I thought THE LAST MISTAKE... ( sorry not my idea yaar.. Rahiramesh suggested... I like it so wants to keep it... Thanks dear for the name..)

Plz tell me how is it??the name...
I will update first chapter in a while...
I am clearly saying in first few chapters there won't be much Jalal.. I told u people already it's a girl story.. So story revolves around Jodha mostly...after few chapters he will be there...sorry for hurting Jalal fans... Even I am a big fan to him but no way I can't do anything... Very sorry for that...
Plz give comments... So that I will proceed or stop...
Sorry if I hurt anybody feelings...
Thank u all,
Love u all...plz comment & like...
Once again thanks for the lovely wishes...😛

Nice title😊

I haven't read ur any story yet but whenever I get ur pms I hit the like button on ur chapters.. will read ur stories soon😃 Whenever I read ur notes, often u're apologising to readers.. Wanna say that stop saying sorry everytime dear😊 and congrats again😃

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

wow dii great news congratulation dii😃
god bless u dii😊
N tk care of ur health n our chotu also😃😉

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lovespari

@lovespari

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Congrates dii fr new ss😃
concept is nice...
CS is interesting dii wanna knw wht MISTAKE ja did..?? n y ja parents hate jo..??
waiting fr frst chap 😃

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403
Thanks to all...I am doing good... Thanks for the lovely wishes...
Sorry I am not replying to ur comments... But I read each & every comment... I liked them also..
Coming to name I thought THE LAST MISTAKE... ( sorry not my idea yaar.. Rahiramesh suggested... I like it so wants to keep it... Thanks dear for the name..)

Plz tell me how is it??the name...
I will update first chapter in a while...
I am clearly saying in first few chapters there won't be much Jalal.. I told u people already it's a girl story.. So story revolves around Jodha mostly...after few chapters he will be there...sorry for hurting Jalal fans... Even I am a big fan to him but no way I can't do anything... Very sorry for that...
Plz give comments... So that I will proceed or stop...
Sorry if I hurt anybody feelings...
Thank u all,
Love u all...plz comment & like...
Once again thanks for the lovely wishes...😛

Hey Buddy

You liked my title, Thanks. I am happy 😃
Eagerly waiting for your update
& Yes please call me Rahi..

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

CHAPTER1:

a beautiful morning... a girl in 20 is sleeping peacefully in her bed dreaming about her Prince charming...but soon she heard something...disturbing her dream...

Jodha jodha...get up... U r dussera holidays are over... get up..U need to go college again...dad is waiting for u.. he will drop u in the hostel...

Get up beta...

Jodha...jerks from bed ... & says. what dad...Amma y didn't u tell me yesterday only..I would have wake up early na...no Amma I will go myself..no dropping..plz Amma tell to dad...I will go by bus Amma...Plz tell to dad...

Maina...no way u have to go with dad...attamma(bharmal sister chandrika)called dad..she has some work with dad..so u know about him na...if attamma calls him he will just run to her..he loves her a lot... & moreover she is asking u.. on the way meet her & then go to hostel..we didn't went for the festival this time..she feels bad..

(Jodha stays in hostel in Hyderabad. she is in final year.. her parents stay in different city because of her father business..her attamma also stay in different city...middle in the way to Hyderabad..jodha engaged with abhi last year..marriage will be after her education...jodha wants to do masters in USA ... she is preparing for gre exam...)

Jodha...but mom I went there when I am coming to home..just a week passed Amma...again & again.. what is this Amma...I don't want to go...Plz Amma tell to dad..I like attamma but I don't want to go frequently..Plz Amma...

Maina... don't say that my dear.. after few years u have to go there only...U have to stay there only...leaving me all alone...

Jodha...me no way.. I want to settle in USA...who will stay in that village...I will ask abhi to come USA only...hahaha... he will listen to me...

Maina...hahaha...in ur dreams... ur dad & abhi will listen to ur beloved attamma only...she is the the boss to them...she will decide ur future my dear...

Jodha... U r devil mom...Y u said ok to this alliance.. if u support me then I may marry my Prince charming... not this mummy boy...anyway I will change him after my marriage...U just wait & see baby...

Maina..dream on darling...but abhi is a nice guy... even ur attamma is good...she Will be a mom to u not attamma...I am sure in that...& dad loves her...&...

Jodha...ok meri maa... now stop the drama..i know all...now plz stop.. tell to ur husband I want to sleep for some more time...go tell him...

Maina...r u sure..should I tell him..

Jodha...yes my baby..go tell him...

Bharmal...jodha...jodha...calls from downstairs...did u wake up or not...come beta it's getting late...

Jodha...jerks from her bed..& says yes dad..yes...I am coming

.just 5 minutes...

Maina... should tell him...???

Jodha...looks at maina angrily no need ...I hate u...devil...

Maina...but I love u baby...

Jodha...runs to bathroom but again comes near to maina hugs her & says I love u to Amma...runs to freshen up...

Maina..pagal... hey kanha keep my daughter always happy...save her from all evil eyes...

Goes to prepare breakfast...

After breakfast jodha & her dad goes to car...to go hostel...

Maina...take care beta...Plz eat properly on time...do call me everyday... miss u jodha...& sleep well. ...& ...

Jodha...ok ok stop now...I will do all...ok na...Plz don't cry... I will come again in January holidays..ok na..U can come to me anytime..I am just going to hostel Amma...not to my husbands place..Plz stop crying...

Bharmal...jodha...when u go to my sister house we won't cry .. we send u happily...my sister is a mother to u..

Jodha..sorry dad...I didn't mean that..I am just Kidding with mom..

Maina...it's ok bharmal...let her...Ok beta. take care...bye beta...

Jodha...bye Amma...hugs her & gave kisses...

Both father & daughter stats their journey...

Plz like & comment

Thank u all..

Edited by lakshmi1403 - 9 years ago