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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
CHAPTER3:

Both jodha & Vaishu goes to have tea..near by her hostel there is a small panipuri stall is there..

Both Vaishu & jodha goes to there by walk..
While walking..

Vaishu: so did u enjoyed vacation?? How is aunty??

Jodha: yep...full tooo...this time no attamma house..luckily they didn't come..I spend full time with mom...

Vaishu: cool... y again chashmish??? Use lens baby(jodha has eye site problem.she has spectacles.. but she wears lens..hope everybody have idea about lens). U look like aunty...
Jodha: me aunty..noo.U only aunty... not me...I like my chashmish... I hate that lens...it irritate me...

Vaishu: hmmm...ok.. whatever u look sexy baby...

Jodha: thanks... chalo...
Soon reached the stall...
They had panipuri.. & having tea..

Group of 3 boys came starts commenting jodha...

Boy 1: hey chashmish...looking cute...
Boy2: want a ride...
Boy3: y she is not speaking..

Jodha: Annayya thank u..but no need ... my Boy friend is on the way..he will come & pick up me...

Boy 1: where is he dear??? Show to us also...

Jodha: there look...he is coming...in that black car.. goes near to car...

Soon a guy came out from the car..verna fludic Black car...

Jodha: look Chinnu they are irritating me.. I am telling them I already have u... but they are not listening me...look at them...but handle with care...they are my brothers...

The guy didn't understand anything..what. wait.. me Chinnu???...looks jodha face with utter shock...but he observes her..she is pretty..dressed in his favorite colour (black colour)
Long hair left open..a small clip is holding few hairs.. with the chashmish..but looks very pretty...guy was immersed in her beauty..

Jodha: Chinnu Chinnu...look...

Guy: what ...
Jodha: look at them chinnu...please...signals from her eyes to save her...

Guy understood her problem &
Looks to the three boys.. with a very serious face..
Just looking in to his face the boys run for their life...because indeed he has good exercise body..full fair...cute dimple..but bossy look...
Guy is handsome & cute... both at a time...


Guy: they are gone miss...

Vaishu: teja she is teja..me rani... thank u for saving us...
Teja chalo..it's getting late...

Jodha: teja me??? rani who???

Vaishu:U only..chalo let's go enough drama... drags from there...makes a sign from her eyes..

Jodha: but wait... let me just wish him thanks re... to my boy friend...smiles...

Vaishu: stop it Jodhu..enough... now walk fast...

Both reaches hostel...jodha can't able to hold her laugh... she laughs very badly..holding her stomach..me teja.. U rani... hahaha...what happened y u tell other names to him... what's his name yeah Chinnu...my Chinnu...my boy friend...laughs again...poor Chinnu...

Vaishu: hey Jodhu stop it...didn't u see what happened just now..they tried to hold u.. luckily that guy came..we escaped..is it required to tell our original names...no need... let it go..& stop laughing...what's that Chinnu...

Jodha: then what should I call him?? Boy friend Hai na... so nicknames will be there... I don't know his name so called him as Chinnu... whatever I got in my mind...but at least we should thank him properly...

Vaishu: we thanked him na..enough..forgot it...

Jodha:ok baby ...leave it...

Both jodha & Vaishu forgot about it completely...soon the day ended...

From tomorrow onwards classes..final year project , gre exam,placements.. full to busy life...


The boy just stares into the retreating figure of jodha..
Teja...hmmm nice name...but y I am feeling like that it didn't suited u..& .me Chinnu... nice name...first time other than my mom u called me with Nick name... like it...& U r very pretty & beautiful miss... I just like u...oh god what brothers poor guys... she is looking like bundle of energy...it's nice meeting with u teja... ha no teja. It's not nice..it didn't suited u...then what should I have call u... thinks for a while yeah sonu... good... me Chinnu.. then U r Sonu ..it suits u... I like u Sonu...see I kept good name for u... smiles...& goes to meet his friend...


Precap: guy & jodha meeting again...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Wow lakshmi beautiful and cute chapter bangaram
Jodha is such a darling girl ,full of life ,im loving her :)
Who is the man ??is he jalal??
Chinnu how sweet ra
nice nick name 😊
bangaram its a very short update
i want big chaps
pls continue soon
thanks for pm
Edited by avika444 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
i guess that guy is ja...superb dear..continue soon& do pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: avika444

Wow lakshmi beautiful and cute chapter bangaram

Jodha is such a darling girl ,full of life ,im loving her :)
Who is the man ??is he jalal??
Chinnu how sweet ra
nice nick name 😊
bangaram its a very short update
i want big chaps
pls continue soon
thanks for pm

Thanks Avi baby...
Full bubbley loving girl she is...
I will give another update by evening,,,
Thanks a lot for the support Da...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Teja ?? What a name 🤣
& Chinnu was cute name given by Jo, while the macho man has named her Sonu
I liked the way her so called brothers just fled away by looking at serious and Bossy face of Chinnu😆
Funny and nice chappy...
Thanks for the PM dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
awsum
cheenu.. jalal
sonu.. jodha
hahaha

nic trick
hehe

update asap
cant wait
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Amazing..
teja nd rani..omg so funny..
cut name chinnu..hehe
oh sonu what a sweet name..
update soon part plzz..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Nice chapter di i know this guy none other then was jalal .
Plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
lovely chptr dear
nice name chinnu ,teja
loved it
cont soon

thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Awww wonderful update dii 👏
i enjoyed it thoroughly 😊
hww those boys 😡 were misbehaving with jo
but jo is way smarter 😉
she addressed that unknown person as her boyfriend..Chinnu 😃
that teja and rani thing was too funny 🤣
but that person named her as sonu..aww 😳
i think he is jalal..
Thanku for pm
take care of yourself

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