Akdha FF ||The ultimate saga|| Ch-4 updated on pg 14 *21/7/15* - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: geeta.M

Nice prologue..do continue..and Update soon.

If possible pls do pm me.



Sure and thank you ^^
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys!
I'm so sorry that I couldn't update this FF for so long. It's because my laptop crashed and I got it back today. So please be patient and I'll be updating this story on 8th April for sure.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm so sorry guys for not posting it earlier

And about his chapter, I have zero knowledge about war and all so if you guys found something wrong [most probably you will find mistakes 😳] then I apologize in advance.

Chapter 2


Jalal certainly didn't like the idea of Jodha's marriage. He didn't know exactly why he didn't want her to get married. He shoved away the thought and planned on attacking Amer right away. In that way he can delay the process or if Suryabhan himself takes part in the war then he can easily finish him off.

Jalal kept on wandering around the palace and gathered knowledge about their strength, army and all. It was midnight and Jalal had to make his way out of the palace as he had to get his army ready. While making his way out of the palace he saw Jodha. A smile crept upon his face. He could stare at her face all night but he really had to walk out of the palace. Jalal really underestimated the palace's security. As it was night time the security of the palace was doubled up and getting out now will be a really hard job for him.

There were soldiers everywhere and were double checking everything and as Jalal was disguised as a soldier it wouldn't make sense for him to walk out of the palace at midnight. So now he had to sneak out. Really it was too much for him for a day but he himself had brought upon this problem. So the ultimate option for him was to sneak out.

Ugh! Now how do I get out of this place?


Since it was impossible for him to get out of the front door he thought of using the back door. Now he has to find that goddamn back door.

After another half an hour of roaming around in the palace he found the back door but to his dismay there were soldiers as well. But there were 2 of them so he just had to get rid of them. So he slyly went up to them and said that Raja Sahed was calling them and meanwhile he will guard the door. And with that he snuck out of the palace but Jodha could clearly see from her room's balcony that he had snuck out. She quickly sent guards after him but it was late and Jalal had already fled away.
Jodha's guard quickly informed Raja Bharmal and then after inquiring the guards who were in charge of the back door they realised that they have been fooled. Raja Bharmal instantly concluded that it was probably Jalal or his spy who has entered the premises.

Jalal quickly made his way out of Amer.

At Jalal's tent


Jalal called Sharifuddin and gave him all the details that he had collected. He had asked him to attack tomorrow itself. And Jalal had made himself clear that he wanted to win at any cost and if Sharifuddin takes part in the war then he had to kill him. Jalal promised to reward him only if he wins the war, if not then he had to bear the consequences as well.

Sharifuddin nodded and in his mind he thought, after winning the battle he shall ask Jodha as his reward.

Amer

Everyone panicked after the news of Jalal or his spy was in the palace spread like wildfire. Raja Bharmal and Suryabhan were super tensed. Soon they received the letter that the war will take place after sunrise. This tensed them even more. Jalal probably knew about all their plans and also had an idea of their army and all. They thought that Jalal might think that they'll change their plan thus they decided to go with their old plan.

At Jalal's tent


"What if they change their entire plan?"

Sharif asked Jalal.

Jalal smirked and replied, "They won't. Firstly they don't have enough time to do that and secondly they probably think that we think that they've changed their plan thus they'll stick to their plan"

"What if our plan fails?" Sharif asked.

"Sharif our army is 4 times more than theirs. Do you really think they can win against us?"

Jalal said and clearly expressed that he was annoyed by his non-stop questions.

"It's better if you focus on the war now. Go get some rest now."

Saying that Jalal dismissed Sharif.

"Get ready Jodha! This war is a game and you are my trophy"

Jalal thought with an evil smirk.


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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
it was short but nice chappy
jalal is very cunning he entered in palace n saw jodha also😳
he gave order to attack on amer coz he wants to stop jodha's mariage
but jodha dont like him naa..??and i am confused jalal ne jodha ko 1st time kab and kaha dekha😕😕i want to know about JJ's first meeting
is he married with ruk n other begums...??PLZ tell me😕😕😕😕😕😕
update soon and dont take long time plz u should update every week
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Nice chapter continue soon pm me accept my buddy request
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Awsm chapter...
Loved it...
Thanks for the pm dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Nice chappy..
But its small one.. Next update we want bigger one.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: hely

it was short but nice chappy
jalal is very cunning he entered in palace n saw jodha also😳
he gave order to attack on amer coz he wants to stop jodha's mariage
but jodha dont like him naa..??and i am confused jalal ne jodha ko 1st time kab and kaha dekha😕😕i want to know about JJ's first meeting
is he married with ruk n other begums...??PLZ tell me😕
update soon and dont take long time plz u should update every week



Hey sorry for the short chapter :|
And yup. The first part is the same old one as per shown in the show.
And yes he is married to Rukaiya and the other begums :)

Edited by -CrazySobtian- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
thanks for the pm
awesome update
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
superb update do continue soon...

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