Akdha FF ||The ultimate saga|| Ch-4 updated on pg 14 *21/7/15* - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Awesome and amazing start plzzz me me when u will post ur chappy
By the way when u r posting???
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: paridhiloveu

Awesome and amazing start plzzz me me when u will post ur chappy

By the way when u r posting???



In an hour or two 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys! Thank you so much for all the lovely comments.

Update

Soon panick spread everywhere as everyone got to know that Jalaluddin Mohammad is in their kingdom. But King Bharmal thought that it would be a very good oppurtunity for them to catch him right away. Thus he and Suryabhhan had send all their soldiers to look for him. They just couldn't let this extra chance to slip away from their hands. They knew it catching Jalal wouldn't be easy at all as the emperor probably has his own plans or else why would the King himself roam around in such a kingdom where 1000s of people are ready to slay his head.

By now Jalal got to know that everyone was aware about his presence in the kingdom. He had to be more careful. He tried to leave their territory but all the routes were blocked and there wad tight security everywhere in Amer. Every single man and house were checked in Amer. And staying outside for long wasn't safe at all. He knew that if he tried to take shelter anywhere he would be caught immediately since there are soldiers everywhere.

And at this moment the safest place was the royal palace itself. Thus he slyly made his way to the palace. Of course, getting inside the palace wasn't an easy task for him but he's Jalal after all. He knows every single tactic and all the credits goes to his Khan baba.

Jalal entered the palace as a soldier. He quickly blended in with all of the other soldiers as he knows how to speak their language. No one was able to tell that he was an outsider or the emperor as he was a master of disguise and also there are way too many soldiers in the palace and it was a bit hard for them to recall who was who.

Jalal started to roam around in the palace, secretly. He was highly impressed with the decor and all. But it seemed like his eyes were searching for someone. Yes! he was searching for Princess Jodha. He was stunned by her flawless beauty.
How can one girl look this beautiful?
He thought it was a myth or so but now he believes it. The Ameri princess is indeed beautiful.
Seems like Allah has spent extra time to create you.
Jalal thought as he smirked. He kept on roaming around the palace when he heard some soldiers pass by. He quickly positioned himself by a nearby room so that it seemed like he was guarding that room. Those soldiers were passing by and he heard one of them say to the other one
"You know I heard that Raja Bharmal has fixed Princess Jodha's alliance with Raja Suryabhan and the wedding will take place soon."
Now how will Jalal react to this?

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Guys please leave your comments and I'm sorry if there's any mistake in the writing. Will PM everyone in a while and if not then by tomorrow for sure :D

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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
nice update...😊
so jalal has already seen ameri princess 😛
now update next chappy soon , how could u end it at such point...😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute.manasi

nice update...😊

so jalal has already seen ameri princess 😛
now update next chappy soon , how could u end it at such point...😡



Will update by the end of this week and haha I'm like that cuz I love ending my chapters in a cliff hanger 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -CrazySobtian-



Will update by the end of this week and haha I'm like that cuz I love ending my chapters in a cliff hanger 😉


cliff hanger...😆
bu here ur 1st chappy is different from previous one...😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute.manasi


cliff hanger...😆
bu here ur 1st chappy is different from previous one...😲



Yeah. Cuz I forgot the storyline 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Nice starting
Jalal disguised as soldier in amer fort...wat a safe abode
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely chapter dear
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Nice update ,,,
Seems very interesting...

Pls do continue soon...& do PM me

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