Akdha FF - A spontaneous desire Chapter 20 TZR updated pg 159 June 24

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#691

Amazing and emotional update .. loved it..brilliantly written

Flashback ended on a positive note..

Jalal was always there for her , stood with her,embraced her at the crucial phase of her life..

While he himself going through so much pain..fell in love with him again..

How will he make her face the bitter truth of her sons..going to be tough for him..

Waiting for the next..

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meera

@meeramiss18

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#692

Awesome as well as emotional chappy

jalal took good care of jo

but when she learns her kids are dead

she cannot able to withstand

hope jalal convinces her

the update was really fantastic dear👏

do continue soon prema😊

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harini1482002

@harini1482002

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#693

lovely update

aww jalal taking care of jo

loved it

thks for the PM

update soon n PM me too

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irene

@sangreal

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#694

Very intense all whats happening,

jalal is surely in a mess not telling jo

i think she will be devastated, i hope this will not be a reason for separation.

Your ff is very interesting, i would like to encourage you to keep up with your work, looking forward to read your next update soon

Thank you

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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#695

Stupendabulouslly fantastic chappy dear... u r just amazing... I can't w8 to read more...

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...Ishika...

@...Ishika...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#696

Fabulous updt + emotionl too I luved it
How beautiful u describe jalal's feelings 👏
Jalal is such a darlo he olways stood there for jo helped her in crucial phase of life
Now what will hppn to jo when she will come to knoe about the bitter truth of life tht her twins r no more 😭
How jalal will hndle jo...
Now plz updt soon can't wait to read nxt
& tnks for d pm...!! 😉