Akdha FF - A spontaneous desire Chapter 20 TZR updated pg 159 June 24

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Pba123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#711

Nice chapter

How will jo react when she gets to know abt twins death

Pls update soon

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Rani1965

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Posted: 10 years ago

#712

Beautiful update. Full of emotion.
I really feel bad for Jalal. As for Jodha, I really don't know
how she is going to react after hearing about the twins.
Eagerly waiting for your next update. Thank you.

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Krina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#713

awesome update prema

finally jodha get consciousness

but i hope jalal manage situation when jodha know about twins death

thanks to pm me

update soon

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paasta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#714

That was a beautifull piece...all the emotions were pened so neatly...and how she reacted after hearing abt her children👏...bt all her dreams will be crashed...hope she survives this shock!!

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Savindi Abhisheka

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Posted: 10 years ago

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atoshi chanda

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I was eagerly waiting for ur update. when it came I am overwhelmed. so much events happened in that particular piece. emotion were beautifully executed.
after teaser I thought Jo is dying which is never possible.
though I knew twins will die, BT I thought they are alive. one question I am still doubtful about jalal feeling toward Jo? I mean his I love u came so suddenly and yet he says he wants her body for himself only. i dont understand it thats why want to clear it, hope i am not hurting you.
BTW thanks for pm and update next soon.

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Savindi Abhisheka

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Posted: 10 years ago

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mama17

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Awesome chapter dear

Plz include me in your PM list

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Savindi Abhisheka

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crystalwings

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Chapter 16 Teaser

Sunny embraces her in a light hug as her body shivers involuntarily ...deep down in the pit of her stomach she felt unknown pain, a feeling she never experienced, her brain was completely knotted up with anxiety her thoughts were a tangled mess... Jo gasps when she hears Jalal's voice...she looks up, her beady eyes narrowed with shock as she sees Jalal walk in...opened his mouth clearly at loss of what to say...quickly snaps it shut and looks around self consciously ..."for heaven's sake Sunny what in hell is going on here, why is she crying" he muttered angrily...walks over sitting next to Jo, puts his arms around her tugging her away from Sunny as he gets up and leaves...she quickly turns to him... "Jalal I need to know the truth about our twins, I want to hear it from you...please don't lie to me" her voice shaky there was hardly any volume to her voice... She looks at Jalal...his features were twisted in fury his movement exhibiting desperation, he huffs out a breath and looks Jo in her eye as he spoke to her "Jo, I would never hurt you...not ever... I would die first ..." he breaks away...sitting on the bed, his head bowed, his hands tangled in his hair, he was a perfect picture of misery as he begins to breathe erratically...his shoulder shudders as he begins to sob bitterly...he was at loss of words...Jo reaches and hugs him "is it true our twins are no more? Jalal, answer me, please don't hide anything from me" she cried... Jalal looks at her tearfully, "what do you want me to say Jo?" his voice pleading...

Edited by rexniko - 10 years ago