Akdha FF - A spontaneous desire Chapter 20 TZR updated pg 159 June 24

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harsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#701

its fabulous... I can't define in words dear ...awesome...

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Raksha Gupta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#702

Amazing update waiting to knw what will happen to jo when ja say her about d babies. ...

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swetiii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#703

feeling vry bad for jalal
suprb dr
emotional chappi
update sooon

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mamtasingla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#704

awesome and long update too
done a fantastic job👏👏👏
jodha comes out of unconcious state
poor jalal has to lie to jodha
hope jodha recover soon
continue soon
u didn't pm me 😭😭

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Avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

#705

Nice update prema
very emotional
poor jo she dont know anything about her kids
update soon
thanks for pm

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surabhi chandgothia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#706

Very well written dear...

Loved the way jalal took care of jodha...was srsly damn emotional...wonder wat shall happen to her wen she learns about her babies...

Loved every bit of it...

Keep going like dis...

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harshal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#707

awsum chappy it ws really gd spcly der flashbks were awsum...awww hw sad d twins were dead...poor joja...update soon...

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crystalwings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#708

Originally posted by: mamtasingla
awesome and long update too
done a fantastic job👏👏👏
jodha comes out of unconcious state
poor jalal has to lie to jodha
hope jodha recover soon
continue soon
u didn't pm me 😭😭

My dear your inbox has exceed the maximum number of PMs you are allowed to receive 😭 so it kicked it back 😆

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mamtasingla

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: rexniko

My dear your inbox has exceed the maximum number of PMs you are allowed to receive 😭 so it kicked it back 😆

sorry prema...i've just checked it
once again i m really sorry and do update soon

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2thless

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Posted: 10 years ago

#710

Great update!!!

the past with JoJa resolving their issues and misunderstandings between them --- loved that Jalal had Jodhas pics removed - not caring about self -- he had to answer a lot of questions from family - his and hers... not that he wasn't at fault totally -- he shudnt have accepted the challenge... 😉

Jodha finally knows that she is preganant and then the flashback is over to the scene where she is lying on hospital bed... Did they find out who was behind all this? Was Adhma caught for causing the fiasco -- also, makes me think probably he caused the accident.. 😕

Jalal hides the truth from Jodha -- which I think was right at that point -- she would nt have been able to take the news about the death of her twins... it would have made her miserable and she would have lost the zest for life... now she is recovering because she wants to be able to feed the twins -- she feels they cannot feed off the bottles... that part is heart wrenching...😭 she doesn't even take pain killers so she can nurse the babies soon --- she will be devastated to know the truth -- Jalal would have to handle that tactically... wonder how he would do that...