Akdha FF - A spontaneous desire Chapter 20 TZR updated pg 159 June 24

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crystalwings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: geeta.M
Wow wat an update.👏.it is a power pack.. It had romance, love, care, emotions.
Enjoyed a lot reading this update.. Last part is little sad.Jo had miscarriage.. it is emotional... Hope they cope up in next update..thank for the pm..and update soon.

Thanks Geeta...comments appreciated 😊😊

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arushi

@...Arushi...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#302

Ur update was a treat of mixed emotions... Very well written👏

First part was awesome😊

Jo had mis carriage😭 i hope jalal will take her best care...

Thanks for the pm

Update soon ...

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crystalwings

@crystalwings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#303

Ur update was a treat of mixed emotions... Very well written👏

First part was awesome😊

Jo had mis carriage😭 i hope jalal will take her best care...

Thanks for the pm

Update soon ...

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Thanks ...I actually read the comments and try and incorporate the views of the readers when I jot the twists and turns of the story

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Deeksha Rao

@paridhiloveu

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#304

Yeepiii u posted soo soon thanku i though it wiuld take time but posted so soon but next time pm me plzzz

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Krina

@cuty1997

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Posted: 10 years ago

#305

awesome chappy 👏

i totally loved it.😳

this incident help them to come more close to each other.😊

it's emotional chappy😭

update soon 😉

pm me.😊

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Savindi Abhisheka

@Savi.23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#306

awesome dr...but its a short chapter...😭 update update update soon dr...next time a looong chapter..ok..and tks for the pm dr...

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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#307

Amazing chapter prema 👏
Jo was pregnant and now miscarriage
They lost their first child.
Poor couple
Loved the way they supported each other.
Thanks a lot dear for updating so early .
Update asap and thanks for pm.

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#308

Good chapter but felt bad reading last part. ...

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crystalwings

@crystalwings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: savindi.db
awesome dr...but its a short chapter...😭 update update update soon dr...next time a looong chapter..ok..and tks for the pm dr...

A lot of readers were disappointed as chapter 8 ended with the tzr hence decided to jot a quick short chapter 9 ...

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meera

@meeramiss18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#310

OMG!!! that was a gr8 update 1st part was hot😉 and 2nd part was sad😭 but overall i liked jalal's concern 4 jo he is so caring i liked the last part hugging and consoling each othr. And prema thnks 4 ur quick update dear love it a lot👏