TH# 1 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH1 to CH3) - Page 4

Originally posted by: prathi025

Nice ff...waiting d story unfold..

Originally posted by: Sweet_sonai

New concept!!!!!
lovely chappy...
update soon...

Awesome start... very interesting... Please pm me when you update... thank U...

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Hi rasika, congrats for the new ff, interesting chapter brilliantly written
Thanks dear...😛

brought back the memories from initial episodes of JA serial.
Me too miss old JA...

continue soon. pls do pm me.
Will do...

Originally posted by: ...prithibi...

Res!!let me read at 1st...then i will unres...

Originally posted by: abhi786

Rashika wonderful update...
Thanks Abhi...🤗

First chapter was so good, so Jalaal is younger brother who is ruthless warrior while his elder brother is Shahansha,
Yes, thought of bringing something new...😛 Shehenshah has so many responsibilities, I wanted this Jalal to be a carefree youth...for sometime atleast...😉

So already Ameer is under Mugal rule, so Jalaal is ready to check the new happening in Ameer ..😎
Amer is a free state they have done a peace treaty with Mughals.

Felt like watching JA another time, you bring back my memories..
Is it? Thanks yaar.

Looks like Jalaal will disguise and roam around Ameer with his men..
Well here we have a surprise...This time someone else will be in disguise...guess who...😉

Waiting for JJ face off..
😆 It will come..but I need to set up the situation before that...

Your writing is excellent and story is proceeding very well.👏
Waiting next to read more.👍🏼..Keep writing dear 🤗
Thanks for reading and for your comment Abhi...it means a lot...🤗

Originally posted by: khushbooparmar

Superb update...Totally different...
Thanks..😊

I thought Jalal is king...His brother denied to marry Jodha n he will marry her..but he is not..he is ruthless warrior...
I told you there is twist..😉

waiting for JJ encounter...
😆 everyone is. But Jodha ko pehle aane to do ishtory me...😆

update soon..thanks for PM
Will try to update next part today...😛

Originally posted by: Smirna.vava

awsme update dear.thanks 4 the pm.unique concept.and ur writing is so good and i lik it

Originally posted by: hely

awesome starting..
Thanks hely...😛

it seems different story liked it
Yes...different it is...😳

jalal is shaehzada..not shehenha good
jodha is princess😛
jodha ka naam sun k jalal ka ye haal h jb dekhega toh kya hoga😆
Jab dekhega toh...😉

loved dt part whr jalal repeats jo's name😳😳
😆 Dil ki ghanti baji...

looking forward for next chappy
update ASAP😳

Will try to update re...Thanks for beautiful comment...😃