TH# 1 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH1 to CH3)

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Rasika29

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Posted: 11 years ago

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@Smirna, anabella, sonai, Khushboo and taani thanks for your comments.

Chapter 1 is coming soon...😛

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Rasika29

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: khushbooparmar
Wow wonderful prologue. ..
jalal is shenshah right??his brother denied for marriage...waiting for update pls pm me

There is twist in the tale dear...😉 you will get your answers in 1st chapter.

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RSlovesJA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Interesting... awaiting for the chapi

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Rasika29

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Updated chapter 1 part one...

will send PMs in evening...😊

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RSlovesJA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

great start.. continue soon & do pm dear

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Pba123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Nice ff...waiting d story unfold..

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Barnali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

nd don't forget to pm me...

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Sweetshruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Hi rasika, congrats for the new ff, interesting chapter brilliantly written brought back the memories from initial episodes of JA serial. continue soon. pls do pm me.

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R. Styles.. :-P

@Zayn_1Dholic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Res!!let me read at 1st...then i will unres...

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abhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Rashika wonderful update... First chapter was so good, so Jalaal is younger brother who is ruthless warrior while his elder brother is Shahansha, So already Ameer is under Mugal rule, so Jalaal is ready to check the new happening in Ameer ..😎

Felt like watching JA another time, you bring back my memories.. Looks like Jalaal will disguise and roam around Ameer with his men.. Waiting for JJ face off..

Your writing is excellent and story is proceeding very well.👏

Waiting next to read more.👍🏼..Keep writing dear 🤗