TH# 1 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH1 to CH3)

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khushboo

@khushbooparmar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Superb update...Totally different...I thought Jalal is king...His brother denied to marry Jodha n he will marry her..but he is not..he is ruthless warrior...waiting for JJ encounter...update soon..thanks for PM

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SMIRNA R JACOB

@Smirna.vava

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

awsme update dear.thanks 4 the pm.unique concept.and ur writing is so good and i lik it

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.GreekPrincess.

@.GreekPrincess.

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

awesome starting..
it seems different story liked it
jalal is shaehzada..not shehenha good
jodha is princess😛
jodha ka naam sun k jalal ka ye haal h jb dekhega toh kya hoga😆
loved dt part whr jalal repeats jo's name😳😳
looking forward for next chappy
update ASAP😳

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Uma

@Kutty58

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Wow.. Awesome first chapter... 👏

Your story really made me visual the whole scene.. Right from the entry of shehensha..

I was captivated from the start... Now I am going to bug you for a update everyday..😆

How I wish the ekta hired you as their writer.. 😭 The current JA has gone to the dogs...

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Very very interesting Rasika 👍🏼 Looking forward for more!😃

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Ambidextrous

@Ambidextrous

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

awesome loved it, continue soon and pm me

Edited by akdhaswara - 10 years ago

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Sofia Liverpool

@._.Bubbles._.

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

awesome part cant wait for the next part great 😊

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irene

@sangreal

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

well done
sounds very interesting, jalal not being shenshah and
jodha sounds firery and grounded
i like that your story is not predictable
have you written chapters in advance?
dont let us hangin here for to long ;) :)