TH# 1 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH1 to CH3) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Kutty58

Wow.. Awesome first chapter... 👏
Thanks...😃

Your story really made me visual the whole scene.. Right from the entry of shehensha..

I was captivated from the start...
Aww..I am blushing now...😳

Now I am going to bug you for a update everyday..😆

Everyday...😲 Bachhi ki jaan logi kya...😆

How I wish the ekta hired you as their writer.. 😭
Nahi re I am not that good...😆

The current JA has gone to the dogs...
Agree, how I miss good old days...

Originally posted by: rima4ever

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict

Very very interesting Rasika 👍🏼 Looking forward for more!😃

Originally posted by: akdhaswara

awesome loved it, continue soon and pm me

Originally posted by: Rasika29

@bold

Originally posted by: Rasika29

@Blue

Originally posted by: Sofia3000

awesome part cant wait for the next part great 😊

Originally posted by: sangreal

well done
sounds very interesting, jalal not being shenshah and
jodha sounds firery and grounded
i like that your story is not predictable
have you written chapters in advance?
dont let us hangin here for to long ;) :)

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Awesome start... very interesting... Please pm me when you update... thank U...