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Originally posted by: ahaana00

ash!! babez when u r going to update...i promise u i want the update in 30 mins...😡😡

CHAPTER-3

mirza noticed that jalal was coming back...he took jodha back to their seat nd hide themselves under the table"what happened ruqs why r u smiling like this" asked jalal "nothing aaj kal ke skool students are just unbelievable" said ruqs and laughed while jalal was confused...he thought to call mirza...he dialled his no. nd was about to call him but was interrupted by ruqaiya "ohh...jalal...am sry but i have to go...mom is calling...will meet u at college" said ruqs nd hugged jalal...jalal also hugged her like a friend "mirza photo khiich" said jodha who witnessed them hugging "haan ruk...per tujhe nhi lagta that this hug is missing that passion?" said mirza while clicking their photos from different angles "chup ker...or jab hum yeh sab photos hamida maa ko dikhayenge naa...tab dekhiyo kaise iss jalal ki band bajti hai" said jodha grinning widely...on the other side jalal bid bye to ruqaiya nd called mirza...mirza's phone ranged with the loud voice as his caller tune was of something like dog's bark...jodha nd mirza got tensed while jalal heard that voice nd was damn sure that mirza was near him "khud kutta hai samajh skti hu per apni jaisi caller tunes kyu rakhta hai" cried jodha in frustration "yrr...kya kiya maine..i like dogs..see how beautifully they are barking"said mirza while jodha snatched his phone and disconnected the call...while jalal was luking here nd there to find him but how can he? they were under the table...jalal was confused so he again thought of calling mirza while on the other hand mirza kept his phone in silent mode...but suddenly his eyes caught the sight of shivani who was entering in the cafe with a boy nearly around 4 or 5 year old ..."jodha!!! shivani ka bacha" said mirza luking at the boy shockingly...jodha was confused and luked at the direction he was staring..."pagal hai...kya pata bhai ho?" said jodha "jodha...yrr plz pata ker ke aa naa or tune promise kiya tha that u will do something about me nd shivani...usse bhi yaad rakhna" pleaded mirza to which jodha agreed nd went to shivani and at the same time mirza sat up on the chair...jalal saw mirza getting up from the floor "mirza what r u doing here?" asked jalal "arre bhai, m...mai yahan kya ker raha hu ...ptani😕 ...arre haan ...jodha ki ek friend usse milna chahti thi toh bus...hehehe" said mirza whatever came to his mind on the other side jodha went towards shivani "hii shivani...remember me...joined school today only" asked jodha in a chirpy voice...shivani smiled at her "yaa!! u sat with mirza naa" asked shivani to which jodha smirked "yea!!! he is my bff...we r best friendz...nd family friends too" said jodha "tabhi!! he was not flirting with u" said shivani with an uncomfortable smile "oh!! such a cute boy...who is he" asked jodha to change the topic "ohh!! he is rahim...my sister salima's son...my nephew!...actually salima di is not here for 2-3 days...so i m taking care of him" said shivani with a cute smile "so!! where is her husband than?"asked jodha "she is a single mother" said shivani...an awkward silence got spread in the atmosphere "so come in my place naa...i m sure u will like it" said jodha to avoid the awkwardness...shivani was confused as she hardly knows jodha "yrr come on...if we will not know each other then how we will become friends" said jodha to which shivani nodded smilingly "so cutie pie !! will u come in my house" asked jodha luking at rahim "mai cutie nhi hu...i am a smath (smart) boy" said lil rahim to which jodha luked at him with an amazed expression "ohk...so letz go" said shivani...jodha nodded her head...on the other hand, jalal was showering his questions on mirza to which mirza only laughed like a fool "where is jodha...u said she is with u" asked jalal in anger nd frustration...as how much he dislikes jodha but he cannot neglect the fact that jodha is his responsibility now "hehehe" "MIRZA...I WANT THE ANSWER" asked jalal in a loud voice as he was frustrated by mirza's unwanted laughs "bhai jodha is with a friend of hers" said mirza with the same answer that he was telling jalal from the last 15 mins...as how can he tell his brother that his wife had gone to shivani to coax her to be his (mirza) girlfriend...jalal was again about to burst on mirza but fortunately a call from an unknown no. helped mirza...without delaying mirza picked up the call "hello..mai jodha bol rhi hu" said jodha from shivani's phone without taking specifically mirza's name as if shivani learned that jodha nd mirza r living in same house it will create a problem in the luv story of mirza nd shivani which is not started yet..."jodha!!! bhai see uska phone...oye per yeh kiska phone hai...tere paas toh koi phone eh nhi hai" asked mirza while jalal was also curious to know "arre haan yrr mere paas toh abhi tak koi phone he nhi hai...oh shit..your nonsense brother didn't allowed me to bring mine phone here... nd shit..i also didn't opened my facebook account too from 1 day...i will surely talk to him about this at ni8" said jodha as she cant live without his mobile nd without surfing net...she is addicted to facebook nd other social networking sites ...but jalal never liked this "tujhe fb ki padi hai yeh bata whose phone is this?" asked mirza seeing jalal's raged eyes knowing he is concerned about jodha "shivani ka hai...nd listen i m coming with her to our home...so be ready nd dare to come in front of her...when i will give u green signal then only u have to come...understood?"asked jodha "ohk!!! pakka" said an over excited mirza as he cant believe that shivani is really coming to his house...but jalal was going more angry by each passing second as he was not able to find out what they were talking"mirza...can u tell me...what jodha is saying" asked jalal in a super angry voice which made jodha jump in fear as she never thought that jalal would be near mirza "bhai..jodha is coming home with one of her friend"said mirza to cool down jalal's anger but it didnt worked "jodha...where the hell are u? u r coming with me...not with anyone else...come here right now" said jalal snatching the phone from mirza's hand but soon realization hit jalal nd he discovered that jodha had disconnected the phone long back when she heard jalal's voice "she...she disconnected mine phone...mirza call her back" said jalal in anger as he was here tensed for her nd there she was enjoying "bhai!! she will come...naa trust me...aap chalo" said mirza to make jalal understand but jalal was no where to listen...after much telling nd listening jalal agreed to go back home...on the other hand...jodha disconnected the call then only when she listened jalal scolding mirza to let her go like this "phew...aaj to baat daant padegi uss dirty dog se...ptani what he thinks about himself...i just hate him...jab dekho mjhe pagal kerta rehta hai" muttered jodha under her breath "did u say something?" asked shivani to which jodha shooked her head immediately to which shivani smiled...jodha luked at her nd was happy that mirza likes shivani as till now jodha had learned that shivani is a sweet nd kind hearted girl nd more importantly simple nd grounded also...the trio(jodha,shivani nd rahim) sat in the car nd soon reached khan mansion...shivani was confused luking at such an extravagant house as she had seen this house somewhere...while lil rahim was very excited "is it a palace of yours...in which u nd yr prince lives" asked rahim "yes itz a palce but no prince lives here...but haan two useless dogs nd a queen and a princess like me lives here" said jodha imagining jalal nd mirza as dogs "this place is familiar" said shivani as she had forgotten that she had watched khan mansion in news as she is a very big admirer of jalal nd the mughal empire "hehehe!!! abhi kahan vo toh baad mei family mei aaogi" said jodha thinking something else to which shivani luked at her with a confused expression "kuch nhi letz go to mine room" said jodha to change the topic...they reached jodha's room..oh sry!!! jodha nd jalal's room...shivani nd rahim was admiring her room...

"wow!!" gasped shivani "do u liked this boring aatma" asked jodha "whatz boring aatma?" asked shivani "this house...come on see...such a dull colour"said jodha "i luved it" said shivani in a voice filled in excitement to which jodha made a weird face "where is hamida maa?" asked jodha to a servant...shivani was now more confused as she had heard this name too but where? "mam!! madam is not in home...she said that she will be back by 7 in evening" said the servant to which jodha nodded "jodha who is hamida...i have heard this name somewhere"asked shivani but jodha was confused by now as jodha never saw news or read newspapers s o she doesn't know that khan mansion is world famous nd jalal has got the best youngest businessman reward...before jodha could say anything jalal's voice came "JODHA!!" screamed jalal from living room who just entered the mansion while mirza behind him trying to stop him as he wants to capture a good impression in front of shivani while on the other hand jodha was pacing from each end of the room to the other murmuring something "jodha beta tu toh gyi...ab that dirty dog will come nd shower his beautiful taunts on me...matlab 45 mins waste on his lecture" muttered jodha while shivani nd rahim was luking at her like she was an alien "jodha where the hell were u..i told u naa to inform me before going anywhere...but why u will listen to me...itz not for me." "haan haan itz for me...if something happened to me what will u say to mine mom dad...kabhi toh tumhaari baat maana keru...thatz all u wanted to say naa...i remember " said jodha cutting jalal in between while shivani was hell shocked to see THE JALALUDDIN MUHAMMAD,the business tycoon in front of her "aap!!!" said shivani pointing towards jalal not actually believing that he was standing in front of her...shivani's voice realised jalal that there were other people also on the room...jalal saw rahim who was luking at him with his mouth opened widely and why not rahim had only seen him in tv..."aap toh" said shivani but was interrupted by jodha "yeh koi nhi hai...yeh toh faltu hai" said jodha knowing that jalal will not say anything to her in front of others...jalal glared at jodha to shut her mouth "u are jalal..i..i mean the jalaluddin mohammad...oh god!! u r the most eligible bachelor on the town" said shivani to which jalal smirked and shaked hand with shivani...now it was a dream for shivani...while jodha was not liking it...whatever it is...how much she hates jalal but at the end of the day she is a wife...nd jealousy is in the blood of a woman "he is not a bachelor" said jodha with a loud voice "what??" asked shivani...jalal held jodha's hand to shut her up...while jodha got irritated "haan he is married to" before jodha could complete her sentence...jalal speaked "she is just joking" said jalal pressing jodha's hand a lil harder to make her understand not to say anything else but jodha was again about to open her mouth "try to say something...i promise u after that i will cancel all your outings for a whole year" whispered jalal to which jodha shutted her mouth with a pout...after that jalal left the room "OH MINE GOD!!! u r living with the bestest businessman of the year...i cant believe it" exclaimed an excited shivani to add more rahim also started going gaga on jalal which made jodha irritated...all the attention was going to jalal "just shut up u both!!! nd u little bandar what u want to shut your mouth" said jodha luking at rahim "tell me a stoly...i luv to listen them" demanded rahim "acha!! story pehle bolna toh seekh" said jodha "i knew it...melko pata tha that u dont know stolies" said rahim...now it was a challenge for jodha "ek baar ek ladka hota hai,ek ladki hoti hai,dono milte hain...shaadi hoti hai...dono mer jaate hai firr khatam kahani" said jodha to which rahim made 'O' shaped mouth "ye kya ta? aisi konsi stoly hoti hai" asked rahim in annoyance "aise he hoti hai...saari stories bass baaki sab thoda expand ker dete hai" said jodha to which rahim pouted before rahim could say anything else shivani told jodha about their departure..."arre aise kaise...wait for 2 mins" said jodha and ran to mirza's room without listening anything from shivani "mirza mirza ab terko shivani ko impress kerna hai...toh mai jaisa kehti hu vaisa ker" said jodha to which mirza nodded...jodha whispered something in mirza's ear making mirza excited "oh teri!!! luv guru" said mirza to which jodha patted herself in appreciation and left to her room "jodha kahaan chali gyi thi tum?" said shivani "arre vo mirza ke room tak gyi thi" said jodha...it took a moment for shivani to realise that mirza was a part of mughals nd the brother of jalal...she was shocked nd confused at the same time "hi shivani...u here?" asked mirza in fake surpriseness to which shivani nodded her head slightly "u know..shivani there are 20 angels in the world..11 are playing 8 are sleeping and 1 of them is standing in front of me" said mirza to which shivani smiled...mirza luked at jodha with amazement as never before shivani smiled at any of his comments...jodha winked at him and signalled him by her eyes to talk further "did the sun come up or did u just smiled at me?" asked mirza "i just smiled at u" said shivani for the first time...to mirza "ohkk!! jodha...itz time to go...chalo rahim...byr jodha" said shivani to which jodha nodded smilingly...shivani reached the door but turned back nd mouthed bye to mirza nd ran from there with rahim...here, mirza was super happy..he hugged jodha tightly...he cant believe that shivani talked to him... "oye mirza...mjhe aaj ata chala ki aaj raat shivani kisi club mei jaane waali hai..how about i f we too go there then?? nd vaise bhi i have never gone there" said jodha to which mirza agreed but after a moment jodha nd mirza said at the same time "bhai" "jalal" "he will never allow me to go there" said jodha "kuch bhi kerke we have to make him agree" said mirza to which jodha nodded nd they both again to sing loudly nd jumping ...then only jalal entered the room luking at both of them who was jumping while hugging each other in the bed...but wait they were jumping on his bed "jodha mirza get out of my bed now" screamed jalal...to which both jodha nd mirza shivered...they both came down nd stood in front of him "what were u both doing...u know how much work i have...nd wait...did u both completed your homework...nd u jodha...u have joined school late...u would have lotz of pending work...nd your class teacher called me up that u both disturbs the class...i m telling u for the last time i dont want any complaints now" said jalal nd was going on with his non-stop lecture... "i m really sorry jalal..mai bhi na...pagal hu...aap jaise mahaan manushya(great human) ko mai aaj tak samjh he nhi paayi...mai toh dhanya(bliss) ho gyi aap jaisa pati paaker" said jodha while jalal was shocked...he cant believe his own ears "jodha are u fine?" asked jalal in still shock "nhi swaami...mai theek kaise ho sekti hu...kitna dukh diya maine aapko...per aap itne...umm mirza how to say greatness in hindi" asked jodha as she didnt knew the meaning..now this made jalal sure that jodha is upto something...while jodha nd mirza was finding the exact word of pure hindi of greatness "what u want?" asked jalal "nothing" said jodha "what u want" jalal again asked the same question "jalal voh actually...i thought...matlab maine socha ki...means i didnt thought anything...our school friends arranged a party in a club" "u r not going" said jalal before jodha could complete "per jalal" "no means no" "jalal plzz...jalal..i will be back by 12" said jodha "what?? u mean midnight???never..." said jalal nd left the place while jodha nd mirza luked at each other helplessly

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that's all for this update...i know itz boring but plz bare it

sry if any mistakes...didnt read it

nd if u really liked it then plz dont forget to like nd comment too...as it encourages me a lot...

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precap- "jodha do u think itz fine matlab ghar se bhaagna?" asked mirza "mirza..hum bhaag nhi rhe...we r just going for 2 hours...nd itz only for u..or vaise bhi the club is only 15 mins away" said jodha.."per bhai...ko pata chala toh?asked mirza "yrr...dont say like this...he will eat me alive...chup chaap chal"

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Wow Aisha what a update 👏 👏
Totally hilarious 😆 😆
Specially Jodha's dialogue about Mirza's dog barking ringtone 🤣
Jodha is just too good...she completed Jallu daant 😆
Jodha kya makkhan laga rahi hai Jallu ko club jaane ke liye 😆 par woh phor bhi nahin maana
Waiting excitedly for next update...Jallu will go totally beserk on finding out Jodha abd Mirza went to club!

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

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Thanx aishooo milgaya PM Yipeee

Reserved Aisha.. but I'm sure I'm gonna love this 😉

Originally posted by: onaisa

Thanx aishooo milgaya PM Yipeee

BTW awwsum chapter

Feeelingss hayee 😳

thanx fr d PM finally mere Inbox work karra🥳

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Reserved Aisha.. but I'm sure I'm gonna love this 😉