Akdha SS : FeeLingS!!!!! thread 2 link on page 1

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What happens when two souls are forcefully tied together in an age of having fun ?
This ss is full of innocence
Will they ever fall in love with each other?
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chapter 1- below
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CHAPTER-1
the whole singh mansion was decorated like a bride...all around was hussle bussle...but a little soul was sitting with a grumpy face "i will not marry him mama" said a 16 year old girl.."beta it was your uncle's last wish to see u nd jalal happily married...now itz been 2 years since he died nd jalal is turned 20...so we decided to marry u both" said her mother...suddenly some voice came from outside indicating groom's arrival "mama us jalad ko vaapis bhaga do" said the little bride checking her make-up "yo girlfriend!!!! whatz up" said the newly groom urf jalal entering the room "chal badmaash" said girl's mother slapping his shoulder softly "aaah!!! boooth" said jalal luking at the little girl dressed in a heavy lehnga "mama dekho...he is again teasing me nd u r marrying me to him." cribbed the lil girl adorning her jewellery "nor am interested in marrying u, wo to dad ki wish thi isliye...nd u should be grateful to me ...nhi toh kaun tumse shaadi karega...nd coz of me u r wearing these expensive jewelleries"said jalal "bass bohut ho gya...aaj tumhaari shaadi hai...jodha jalal no more fighting...or jodha ab u r going to mumbai, nd dont irritate anyone there" said jodha;s mother "mama but this marriage is illegal...m not 18 yet nd this dog is only 20 not 21" said jodha to cancel this marriage"jodha...dont call him a dog...he is your future husband nd u will be married officially to him again when u will turn 18 " said mainawati...before jodha could say anything a girl came nd informed them that panditji is calling the bride nd the groom...they both descended the stairs giving angry glares to each other "arre meri best friend ab meri bhabhi ban ne waali hai" said a 17 yr old boy giving jodha nd jalal his toothy smile "mirza dont show yr teeth...verna i will break them" said jodha stomping her heel on mirza's feet...soon the marriage rituals took place one by one... now it was time to fill jodha's forehead but the drama queen showed many tantrums "jalal plz ache se karna...dare to spoil my make up...thiik hai" said jodha in jalal's ear in return jalal rolled his eyes...while filling her forehead...some sindoor fell on her nose to which jodha got angry...nd jalal smirked evilly "itz a shagun jodha...jalal will luv u a lot" said hamida to which jodha make a weird face "yes jodha i will luv a lot but in my dictionary luv means hate which means i will hate u much more than present" whispered jalal "i hate u too" said jodha...soon all the rituals finished (short cut😆) now it was the time for bidaai...jodha cried a lot..."beta dont cry...we will come to meet u every month" said mr. nd mrs singh "aap mjhse milne delhi se mumbai aayenge...isse acha mjhe mat bhejo jalal ko idher rakh lo" said jodha in a teary voice making every one laugh "mom letz leave her...bohut time waste ker rhi hai"said jalal getting irritated "jalal chup raho" said hamida...soon every one bid jodha...jodha nd jalal were made to sit togther in the car...jodha was continuosly sobbing nd jalal was mentally slapping himself "chup ho jaa meri maa" said jalal slapping her forehead..."gadhe pagal ullu k pathe maara kyu mjhe" said jodha nd punched him on his stomach "you are becoming moti"said jalal "tumne mjhe moti kaha...i m filing a divorce against u" said jodha...before jalal could say anything...they reached airport...after 2 hours they reached their mansion...hamida done all the rituals...it was the last one...finding the ring "am going to my room" said jalal "beta this is the last one" said hamida nd jalal unwantedly sat down "jalal yeh wala naa merko jeetne de" said jodha "huh" said jalal nd dipped his hand in the milk to find the ring...jodha luked at him "ab tum mera haath pakdoge naa" said jodha with excitement "why>.." asked jalal knowing her childish mind is upto something "arre movies mei hota hai naa hero heroine ka haath pakadta hai" said jodha flaunting her filmy knowledge "grow up" said jalal, jodha's mouth shaped in 'O'...after that jodha started running behind him like mad..."jodha or jalal dono room mei jaao...kal tumhara admission bhi krwana hai or jalal tumhara bhi toh collage hai naa" said hamida "mom she will not stay in my room" said jalal "nhi mai toh udhar he rahungi" said jodha knowing it will irritate him...nd ran to his room while jalal was running behind her "jodha dare to go inside my room" screamed jalal "i m in yr room jallad" screamed jodha jumping on the bed "get lost from my bed" said jalal throwing cushions on her...meanwhile mirza came with a grumpy face "arre kya hua mere devar "said jodha and laughed "yaar bohut badi galti ho gyi" said mirza in a sad voice "hua kya" asked jodha "aankhon mein nami thi, or vitamin ki kami thi, jis se raat bhar chatting ki wo girlfriend ki mummy thi" said mirza nd laughed with jodha "dono jaao idher se" said jalal nd pushed them out of the room "tumhe pata hai jodha...bhai ki naa ek girl friend hai...kya naam hai uska...haan ruqaiya...suna hai bohut hot hai" said mirza "sach bata...yeh toh acha hai...ek baar humme koi proof mil jaaye naa fir toh divorce pakka hai...kal se he hum iska picha krenge" said jodha nd grinned widely...mirza wished gud ni8 to jodha nd walked to his room while jodha was banging the door "open the door jalal...khol naa...oh kutte so gya kya" screamed jodha...suddenly jalal opened the door nd jodha unknown to the sudden act fell on the floor..jalal .laughed while jodha was rubbing her back "ruk tu...i will change my clothes nd will beat u" said jodha nd changed into a vest nd shorts...she came back nd sat on the bed"u will not wear these types of clothes in my room" said jalal nd pushed her in the washroom while jodha was cursing him under her breath as she knows that he doesn't like her to wear such clothes...she came back wearing a fully covered night suit nd sat on the bed "u will not sleep here." said jalal laying on the other side of the bed "then where i will sleep on your head" said jodha angrily "couch" said jalal turning off the light "forget about it" said jodha nd layed on the bed making a partition of pillow in the middle...soon they slept nd at midnight jodha kicked jalal out off the bed "JODHA!!!!" screamed jalal sitting on the floor
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hope u all liked it...if not no prob...i will stop it
PRECAP: JODHA FOLLOWING JALAL
Edited by aisha.....11110 - 10 years ago
hemakeerti thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Waiting Aisha..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kis baat ka?😕😆
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Aisha.. I love your Jodha yaar.. donon FFs mein, she is too chirpy, jovial.. I just love your Jodha's portrayal.. and your shayaris.. ouffo so funny.. 😆

I like this story as much as I love unpredictable love.. please keep updating regulary
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG Aisha .. ☺️

What was that ??

each after every line i was getting goosebumps 😳 i was like ab kya hoga .. ab kya hoga 🤣

This is something i totally love to read . update kab milegi ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 1 ka.. after I posted that, you added chap 1 😉
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oye Aisha..teri PM aane se pehle hi padh li...so funny......yaar ye dono16-20 ki hai 8-10 ki...


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superb start.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..
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Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Aisha.. I love your Jodha yaar.. donon FFs mein, she is too chirpy, jovial.. I just love your Jodha's portrayal.. and your shayaris.. ouffo so funny.. 😆

I like this story as much as I love unpredictable love.. please keep updating regulary

thnx a lottt dear🤗...lekin update shayad regularly naa de paau😕

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