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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: SARA4444
really nice 👏
loved it 😃
plzz reunite akdha soon 😊
poor akdha 😭

update soon 😃

Thankyou and ya i will unite them soon..don't worry 😉
Sure thanks!

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni
Amazing story ... very good 👏 ... Thank u so much for the PM surbhi 😃 lekin Kya yaar beech mein latka diya ... 😡 kya decision liya hai jodha ne ... batao na ... kitna interesting chal raha tha ... ab agla update jaldi do ... raha nahi jaa raha hai ...

Thanks alot for the comment! Haha sorry 😆 you will get it in the coming updates!
Thankyou again!

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: hemakeerti
nice update Surbhi.. ur Jodha is truly in love with Jalal unlike our serial Jodha who is still confused 😊

Thanks Jahanvi Di 🤗
I am glad you liked this jodha..hope you will continue to like her 😛

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: hemakeerti
Thanks for updating so fast.. will be waiting for next chappy😊

Thanks di..ya sure! Me updatingg! 😊

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa
Wonderful.. Superb... Mind-blowing update tks for the PM...

Will wait for ur next Pm

Thankyou for your valuable feedback and for loving this 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha
wonderful... continue soon

Thankyou 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: spvd
part 3
nice...
Jodha saved him...
and now Jalal is safe...
cont soon...

Thankyou for liking and commenting! 😃

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: indudolai
Wonderful awesome...thanx for d pm!!

Thankyou so much! 😊

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
I am again saying same words... I am speechless👏👏👏 ... U R amazing writer⭐️⭐️⭐️
Bhavini thanks alot! Hearing from such an amazing writer is a ahievement i feel! 😳

You write so beautifully that straight strike in my heart... Jodha's state of mind... The way she got shocked... and felt guilty... Her realization of his pure soul... Vow ..."Humei aapse mohabbat ho gyi thi jodha begum...hum aap mei ek mohabbat ki roshni dekhne lage the par aapne uss roshni ko naapaak kar diya...apni iss naakari se" loved those line she recalls ... vow... So much in on para... My heart moist with Jodha's pain... She could feel his inner and outer both wounds... She could sense how badly he is in guilt... Entire night she took care of him... and Jalal doesn't know who he is looking for her she is taking care of him... While reading I was couldn't wait for Jalal to wake up... but like her dream... Jalal disappear before she comes back with water for him... But at least he is in safe hand... Jalal is feeling warmth her... His soul sense her closeness... his mind is still thinking who took care of him...
I am glad you liked all these things!

The way you molding story vow I salute to your writing... U writing is very sharp... One sentence impact likes twenty... I feel depth of their emotion... Jodha's heart is melting hearing his words...
ThankYou so very much! I am so overwhelmned!
Can't wait for more... Please update soon!👏
Ya sure i will!