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PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Amazing story ... very good 👏 ... Thank u so much for the PM surbhi 😃 lekin Kya yaar beech mein latka diya ... 😡 kya decision liya hai jodha ne ... batao na ... kitna interesting chal raha tha ... ab agla update jaldi do ... raha nahi jaa raha hai ...

Edited by varshaakulkarni - 11 years ago

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

nice update Surbhi.. ur Jodha is truly in love with Jalal unlike our serial Jodha who is still confused 😊

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Thanks for updating so fast.. will be waiting for next chappy😊

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RSlovesJA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Wonderful.. Superb... Mind-blowing update tks for the PM...

Will wait for ur next Pm

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

part 3
nice...
Jodha saved him...
and now Jalal is safe...
cont soon...

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INDU

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Wonderful awesome...thanx for d pm!!

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

I am again saying same words... I am speechless👏👏👏 ... U R amazing writer⭐️⭐️⭐️ You write so beautifully that straight strike in my heart... Jodha's state of mind... The way she got shocked... and felt guilty... Her realization of his pure soul... Vow ..."Humei aapse mohabbat ho gyi thi jodha begum...hum aap mei ek mohabbat ki roshni dekhne lage the par aapne uss roshni ko naapaak kar diya...apni iss naakari se" loved those line she recalls ... vow... So much in on para... My heart moist with Jodha's pain... She could feel his inner and outer both wounds... She could sense how badly he is in guilt... Entire night she took care of him... and Jalal doesn't know who he is looking for her she is taking care of him... While reading I was couldn't wait for Jalal to wake up... but like her dream... Jalal disappear before she comes back with water for him... But at least he is in safe hand... Jalal is feeling warmth her... His soul sense her closeness... his mind is still thinking who took care of him... The way you molding story vow I salute to your writing... U writing is very sharp... One sentence impact likes twenty... I feel depth of their emotion... Jodha's heart is melting hearing his words... Can't wait for more... Please update soon!👏

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khandelwalsonal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Loved it...awesme start <3
plzz continue :D

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: _Deepika_
Hey baby..🤗
Such an amazing part😊

WOW Baby...that was written so so so beautifully...

Loved Jodha's love and concern ...her confusions and pain over his allegations...still she cant let him suffer even in her dream...

The way she took care of him...it reminded me of post tiger fight sequence ...Jodha will be always there when Jalal will need her..fighting the whole world for him...situations were similar but feelings are so different ...that time she was just Jodha..Hindu begum Jodha ..now she is Jalal's Jodha 😳😳

Loved the twist..she left to get water and mughal soldiers took jalal...

Shehshah adamant on searching for Jodha even in this wounded condition...awww...

Loved loved loved her reaction when he whispered kahan hai aap jodha begum...

Cant wait for the confession...loving the pace of the story 😳😳😳

Keep writing baby🤗