CVs, please bring my Jodha back! - Page 17

Originally posted by: rpeez

I would be kicked out withing a month. Imagine this.

Me - Here's the script for the next track. *It has 3 pages*

JA team - This is it?

Me - Yeah, I mean the track's only for 2 days or rather episodes.

JA team - Ok, lemme read it. *Reads, after 5 minutes*

Me - So what do you think

JA - It's disastrous.

Me - Why?

JA - What do you mean why? Maham doesn't do anything, Ruqaiyya doesn't do anything. Jodha doesn't say anything?

Me - Um, ya... But, the track is how Adham got caught with financial embezzlement by Atgah Khan, got the boot from Jalaal. Killed Atgah vengefully, and got killed BY Jalaal in the process.

JA - What did Maham do?

Me - What can she do. Even historically, she just said "You did good", to Akbar, and went toes up 40 days later.

JA - What about Jodha?

Me - She consoled Akbar after the incident, and maybe I could add a scene about her convincing him to break the news of Adham's death to MA.

JA - That's better. Let the convincing part be a bhashan of 5 minutes.

Me - Why? Can't Jalaal understand plain Hindi?

JA - Do as you're told. Add a Javeda scene.

Me - Ok, I'll show her mourning her husband's death.

JA - Make it funny.

Me - I wanna say something.

JA - What?

Me - I quit.

😆

Originally posted by: divyavm

u know the replies to all ur questions is in one line...while accusing her of infidelity , Jalal has broken all ties with her... remember he said, he frees her of their relationship... for her that was end of her life, coz later when she is alone , she says to herself, that when he finished their relationship, she parted herself with her life...

and divya, when a person detaches himself with his own life, nothing else matters... and now for her when there is no relation btw them, then thinking that she would blame him, or apologize to him or whatever do with him, absolutely no chance stands for it...

last time when he had freed her like this she has tried to commit suicide, coz her parents refused to be with her... this time again she was at same point, so she made decision herself...

and see her one decision, made for herself, and everybody else r now trying to find her, trying to apologize... why? if they r right , why they need her forgiveness?

u know why? coz till date, everybody had taken her for granted... just once she stood up for herself, and everybody is on backfoot...

Edited by sweet_diksha - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

It may answer all of them ... Except one, Why was she silent before he made even one single accusation and directly asked her who that man was?

And if the answer is , he would not have believed her anyways? Then I would say Jodha lacked in the same blind trust

Will be back later - but if Jalal has the humility to ask forgiveness ... It is not because he thinks he is only wrong... He is broad minded enough and strong enough to own up to his mistakes.

Originally posted by: happygolucky099

awesome

plz add some Hamida bano part too🤣

Originally posted by: rpeez

I would be kicked out withing a month. Imagine this.

Me - Here's the script for the next track. *It has 3 pages*

JA team - This is it?

Me - Yeah, I mean the track's only for 2 days or rather episodes.

JA team - Ok, lemme read it. *Reads, after 5 minutes*

Me - So what do you think

JA - It's disastrous.

Me - Why?

JA - What do you mean why? Maham doesn't do anything, Ruqaiyya doesn't do anything. Jodha doesn't say anything?

Me - Um, ya... But, the track is how Adham got caught with financial embezzlement by Atgah Khan, got the boot from Jalaal. Killed Atgah vengefully, and got killed BY Jalaal in the process.

JA - What did Maham do?

Me - What can she do. Even historically, she just said "You did good", to Akbar, and went toes up 40 days later.

JA - What what about Hamida and Salima?

Me - Last time, you asked me to write dialogues for them only if Jodha was involved.

JA - Oh Ok, Why is there a sword fight between Jalaal and Adham for 7 minutes?

Me - Audience will like it. (or rather I'll like it)😉

JA - What about Jodha?

Me - She consoled Akbar after the incident, and maybe I could add a scene about her convincing him to break the news of Adham's death to MA.

JA - That's better. Let the convincing part be a bhashan of 5 minutes.

Me - Why? Can't Jalaal understand plain Hindi?

JA - Do as you're told. Add a Javeda scene.

Me - Ok, I'll show her mourning her husband's death.

JA - Make it funny.

Me - I wanna say something.

JA - What?

Me - I quit.

😆

Originally posted by: rpeez

I updated it in Pg#21 😆

Originally posted by: divyavm

Raksha, this is hilarious ... I laughed for 10 minutes . Sorry to the other posters, will need to recover before I can respond to your posts 😆

Originally posted by: divyavm

i never said, Jalal is wrong here... i said i won't blame Jo... and now it's upto him , to win her trust back... coz she is not going to help him... all wrongs she did, (yes she was wrong in hiding) , still he knows she did only for him... that was her own way, but it was for him...

and abt Jalal being wrong, then many mistakes he has done before... and Jo has suffered it's consequenses very badly... so let others also suffer... and trust me, till the time he is trusting MA and Ruku , blindly, he will keep suffering..

abt Jo judging ppl, then she trusted SD only coz it helped her in saving Jalal... and while freeing SD from jail, she just paid his 'Ehsaan'... that doesn't mean, she has forgotten what he has done in past... and she forgiving them, then she does it all the time... she has even forgiven Jalal for his mistakes...

and that's why, this time when she did something different, all have broken to pieces...

Originally posted by: happygolucky099

u have great sense of humor raksha👏

it is hillarious😆

Originally posted by: divyavm

That makes two of us!