FF: Desert Rose (Chapter 7, Pg 35) 11/07 - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow so the warrior and the junglee billi have it out... and the next chapter I'm scared and excited 😕😆 great chapter tho cont. soon 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: agun

lovely chapter...and your are an amazing writer👏. Are you a professional writer??

I was holding my breath for Jalal to come in and figure out it was a woman...he got it in an instant. Now why cannot the serial Cvs show something like this??? They have ruined Jalal and Jodha to such an extent that I stopped watching the show...I am sure the real Jalal and Jodha would have been very close to your description of them. Thanks for thinking about writing this story. Now I cannot wait for the next chapter..please update faster than the last time...

Thanks so much! Omg, no, I am not a professional writer. But I am honoured that you actually thought I was 😳 Haha, yeah, Jalal is a smarty in this one and Jodha isn't really a spoilt kid. I swear! The CVs are totally playing with the characters! Annoys me to no end! 😡 FFs are the BEST way to take the frustration out from the show.
Take a read, and lemme know if you like this chapter too 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pkdhot

My eyes were just glued to my iPad screen. You are just an amazing writer. I'm eagerly waiting for next chapter so pls update soon. I wanna know Jo's reaction. Pls pls update soon.

WOW, so happy to know that! Thanks so much! Hope I didn't disappoint you in the next one 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

Wow lovely chapter!! Finally they come face to face!! Awesome yaar cant wait for next chapter!!
Thx for sending the pm!!
Please continue soon!!

Your welcome yaar. So happy you liked it!! AkDha are so beautiful na? CVs are so stupid 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Arieltabi

Oh dear u r a brilliant writer. The chapter was so beautifully written. Their first meeting was awesome. I felt goosebumps while reading it. 😆 U described everything so beautifully. It felt real. Pls pls pls update soon dear.

OMG, really? How awesome! I love giving goosebumps (good ones!) and other unexplainable feelings 😛 Hope you feel even more in later chapters! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashpat

this was superb. I am so glad Akdha finally met.plzzz update soon. thx for pm.

Thanks so much! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 3
awesome...
poor Jodha...
whose hut is that?
is that Jalal?
cont soon dear...

Ofcourse its Jalal. Who else would dare to get so close to her? 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: smithasrk

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Me dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Don't die yet! I need your comments for later chapters too 😆😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kesha_H.

awesome the people of Rajputana reminded me of the people in England in Shakespeare days I knew they couldn't have gone directly to the queen with their complaints or they would have their heads cut off so Shakespeare wrote plays pertaining to the problems in society. That was clever of them nut nothing really couldn't have been done since the royal people would've known... but anyway I always loved that idea maybe they should bring it back into society giving people a chance to express themselves cuz its not like telling the politicians directly abt ur concerns in society is really doing anything🤓... When jodha went in the cottage n helped herself by cooking and cleaning reminded of snow white and the seven dwarfs instead there was a mean man possibly prince charming🤓... why did jodha's father send his soldiers after her and why does jodha seem to hate her father😕... was the mean man jalal? 😕

Yes, that sounds like a brilliant idea. However, in this case, it would mean more suffering for the people as the Kings in Rajputana do not tolerate dissent of any sort. Jodha is someone who can make a difference, in a unique way but that will be revealed later. But yes, in today's political scenario, it is a valid idea because one can express so much through drama!
Haha, it did, didn't it? Mostly Jodha is self sufficient. She has been raised that way. And ofcourse, the mean guy is Jalal! That's why the scenes in Jalal's POV overlap with Jodha's in Chapter Three. There are a lot of clues in Chapter Three regarding that. Well, Chapter Four just made it clear, so I guess that's immaterial now 😆
And your last two questions will be answered in chapters 😉

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