FF: Desert Rose (Chapter 7, Pg 35) 11/07

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Tahniat Ahmad

@Sexylicious.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted
Sorry babe. This one had more length😛

Unres on page 16 😛

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BlackWitch

@BlackWitch

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..
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wowww!!!!! It was brilliant.. So finally Ja Jo meet.. So gripping! Poor Jo!
Nothing can be hidden from Jalal's eyes! He finally knows that she is a woman not a boy 😆
The last line was brilliantly written.. Ur ff seems more like a novel to Me. I suggest you to write one! Trust me girl, you will get good response..

Hahaha thankx for posting the clarification 😆
Yippe I'm the first one to post!

P.S do continue to post Chapters this size.

Ah, the words of Tahni, how they melt my heart! 😛 I think I am having an old world hangover. Or maybe this is the result of reading too many Judith McNaught novels 😆 Seriously, I recommend you to read her novels. She is absolutely brilliant! And my inspiration Ofcourse, my writing is even more ancient than hers cuz I am basically supposed to be transported into Medieval India 😆

But seriously, you totally thrill me with your comments! ❤️

Haha, Jalal knew all along that she was a woman 😉 Thankfully, this is not a Kekta serial where Akbar keeps running to solve harem matters, and does not ever doubt Maham. I think this story is turning out to be more my fantasy than an FF based on a show 😃

OMG! You think I can write a novel? 😲 I think about it at times but I wanted to do a test run as an FF writer before even planning something so big. But if I write one some day, you would be given the task of dissecting it and putting up with it first 😆 Soch le!

I still sent you a PM to confirm that you are on the list! 😛

I will definitely try to post chapters this size. However, I don't think you would be okay to wait more days for the next chapter 😛

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BlackWitch

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni
awe awe awe ... i am so much enchanted with this premire rencontre of jo & ja ... i mean i literally had butterflies in my stomach while reading this chapter ... gosh ... i am just waiting when both will melt in each other's arms ... aaahhh !!! it would be just out of the world feeling in my body to read ur SR's ...
i am completely mesmerized pratiksha ... u r too good yaar 🤗

Riiiggghhht.

Action One : google unfamiliar word, fishing for compliments 😛

Action Two: Copy it so everyone knows I am a little ignoramus 😛

Results
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Action Three: Squeal ecstatically at the response, scaring her dog.

Yayyy!! So happy you felt the chemistry! I couldn't put in anything more cuz its just the beginning 😳 Haha, I really would have to adjust the temperature setting to "scalding" when I get to the SR 😆 When the body reacts to mere words is when the author can really heave a sigh of relief!

Awww, thank you so much!! Its so amazing to read about how much people actually liked the work. Never stop reading my stuff, even if I suck someday 😛🤗

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BlackWitch

@BlackWitch

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: sw123
superb

Thanks 😊

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Delphi

@Delphi-03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Such a lovely chapter!!! The way you write always leaves me wanting more!! Very gripping... and that last line was cherry on the cake...!!!

Edited by AkDha_Fan - 11 years ago

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agun

@agun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

lovely chapter...and your are an amazing writer👏. Are you a professional writer??

I was holding my breath for Jalal to come in and figure out it was a woman...he got it in an instant. Now why cannot the serial Cvs show something like this??? They have ruined Jalal and Jodha to such an extent that I stopped watching the show...I am sure the real Jalal and Jodha would have been very close to your description of them. Thanks for thinking about writing this story. Now I cannot wait for the next chapter..please update faster than the last time...

Edited by agun - 11 years ago

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pkdhot

@pkdhot

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

My eyes were just glued to my iPad screen. You are just an amazing writer. I'm eagerly waiting for next chapter so pls update soon. I wanna know Jo's reaction. Pls pls update soon.

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Preet

@rishbala3018

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Wow lovely chapter!! Finally they come face to face!! Awesome yaar cant wait for next chapter!!
Thx for sending the pm!!
Please continue soon!!

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Tabassum

@Arieltabi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Oh dear u r a brilliant writer. The chapter was so beautifully written. Their first meeting was awesome. I felt goosebumps while reading it. 😆 U described everything so beautifully. It felt real. Pls pls pls update soon dear.