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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kesha_H.

Jalal is like the Prince before he was turned into a beast and Jodha is as agressive as the beast... plus they both have ego so major ego clash "war of the beasts" its really great how u tied both characters' personality like that... and belive me I know... btw do you know the famous writer Thomas Hardy he was the most bitter man i have ever read about in my entire life

I had to really. Can't have a goody goody tied up with a dark character again and again. The concept wears everyone, including me, out. Its been overdone. I feel its not always opposites which attract but pieces of us we see in the other that brings two people together. Its not always differences but also similarities that should be glorified. Ofcourse, I can't play with the characters too much because this is a FF and no one can imagine a docile Jalal. Plus, that's boring. Who wants to read about anyone less than an alpha male in romance? Thanks btw, its a first time effort of mine. I re read my own pathetically written previous FFs and SS to know the mistakes in my writing. Trust me - that was torture.
Ah, I am not a classics fan. It has an awful tendency to put me to sleep. Its mostly the language which tires me out. I can't make head or tail of it. Thomas Hardy, I have heard about. A book was written on the writer himself?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kesha_H.

haha true but honestly I don't really think Rajat and Shrishti are bothered by it either I eman shrishti already has the man and we can see Rajat loves here snicerely so what other people think shouldn't bother neither us or them I am happy that they are happy and that's all that matters had u really been a true fan of Rajat u would be happy for him in whatever decision he makes and I mean its not like Rajat is ever gonna leave Shrishti for some common fan of his either so be happy for the couple and end it there

I think so too. If I was really a fan of someone, I would be happy for them. As there is noway in hell I can ever get him 😆 Constantly harping about a girl's looks just because you are anonymous is a very low act, according to me. Looks are criticized all the time in the entertainment industry and thats what those people signed up for! But she has nothing to do with this industry, so I find some of the comments very mean. Not that it matters to Rajat 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

I had to really. Can't have a goody goody tied up with a dark character again and again. The concept wears everyone, including me, out. Its been overdone. I feel its not always opposites which attract but pieces of us we see in the other that brings two people together. Its not always differences but also similarities that should be glorified. Ofcourse, I can't play with the characters too much because this is a FF and no one can imagine a docile Jalal. Plus, that's boring. Who wants to read about anyone less than an alpha male in romance? Thanks btw, its a first time effort of mine. I re read my own pathetically written previous FFs and SS to know the mistakes in my writing. Trust me - that was torture.

Ah, I am not a classics fan. It has an awful tendency to put me to sleep. Its mostly the language which tires me out. I can't make head or tail of it. Thomas Hardy, I have heard about. A book was written on the writer himself?

actually no it wasn't a book but we had to research his autobiography wen I was doing CAPE Lit. n the man is pessimistic I swear after reading his poems u wud become all bitter n depressed like him all his scenarios ever depicted was deat n gloom its sad that's true I belive every couple or every person has some similiarity and a couple that's totally opposite drom each other it would never work out because there would always be arguments btwn the couple so i dnt believe in dat whatsoever
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

I think so too. If I was really a fan of someone, I would be happy for them. As there is noway in hell I can ever get him 😆 Constantly harping about a girl's looks just because you are anonymous is a very low act, according to me. Looks are criticized all the time in the entertainment industry and thats what those people signed up for! But she has nothing to do with this industry, so I find some of the comments very mean. Not that it matters to Rajat 😆

exactly why should it affect u if ur fav. actor or actress is married to someone lower or uglier than them and I'll tell u sumthing actors or even actresses marry some one lower than them in the industry so they can have full control over them... I never said rajat is like tht I was speakin in general. Honestly he can marry the troll underneath the bridge it doesn't matter to me because maybe he saw something in that troll that none of us cud see
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kesha_H.

actually no it wasn't a book but we had to research his autobiography wen I was doing CAPE Lit. n the man is pessimistic I swear after reading his poems u wud become all bitter n depressed like him all his scenarios ever depicted was deat n gloom its sad that's true I belive every couple or every person has some similiarity and a couple that's totally opposite drom each other it would never work out because there would always be arguments btwn the couple so i dnt believe in dat whatsoever

Ah, sounds like the writers of those times. They were either half crazed genuises or really bitter men. I don't mind sad depressing poems generally because it has its own kind of beauty. There are some poems with profound meaning behind those sad words. I haven't read his work. Can you recommend some?
Yep, But thats TV formula for you. Its like so done to death! I hate the way female leads are ALWAYS saints! 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kesha_H.

exactly why should it affect u if ur fav. actor or actress is married to someone lower or uglier than them and I'll tell u sumthing actors or even actresses marry some one lower than them in the industry so they can have full control over them... I never said rajat is like tht I was speakin in general. Honestly he can marry the troll underneath the bridge it doesn't matter to me because maybe he saw something in that troll that none of us cud see

Hahaha, way to put it 😆😆 Indeed yes, its his business, after all. Its not like he made some promise that he would emulate Akbar with all his fans and then ditched them for Srishty. Funny really. He was really upset on his site though. Rambled on and on and blasted his fans left and right 😆 I am glad he has learnt to ignore them.There is a price for fame, after all.
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Posted: 11 years ago
what took u soo long pratiksha ... damn this story is getting tooo addictive ... you nailed it luv !!!! finally my jalal get's to know the kitten in his arms is jodha ...😉 , so much passion in every sentence spoken by jalal ... gosh !!! pratiksha m going mad !! can't wait any further ... give me the next chapter ASAP ... i command 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

Ah, sounds like the writers of those times. They were either half crazed genuises or really bitter men. I don't mind sad depressing poems generally because it has its own kind of beauty. There are some poems with profound meaning behind those sad words. I haven't read his work. Can you recommend some?

Yep, But thats TV formula for you. Its like so done to death! I hate the way female leads are ALWAYS saints! 😡

ACTUALLY I have eight poems of his my fav. would have to be... neutral tones, broken appointment (that was heartbreaking) and the darkling thrush. And IKR because that is sooo not the case I have never met a girl in real life who would sacrifice everything for her family or man, nor hve I met one who wakes before 5 everyday to pra and do household chores, nor have i met a grl who is quiet when her bf or hubby is insulting her infront of other ppl
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

Hahaha, way to put it 😆😆 Indeed yes, its his business, after all. Its not like he made some promise that he would emulate Akbar with all his fans and then ditched them for Srishty. Funny really. He was really upset on his site though. Rambled on and on and blasted his fans left and right 😆 I am glad he has learnt to ignore them.There is a price for fame, after all.

yea sadly there is and I'm glad he blasted them too because they need to be pit in their place as I said before I don't know them personally but they seem happy with each other and that's what should matter... shrishti should say something too but then they'll say she's disrespectful and whatever
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg, this was AMAZING and superbly written chapter. I love this witty jalal and jodha. I found Jodha's inner thoughts funny too when she siad how graceful etc. The way Jalal was holding Jodha and not letting her go and the way her face was revealed was perfect. LOVED this chapter. thx for pm. plzzz update soon.

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