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aisha.....11110 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: alapi

wow dear luvly update😃read both chaps-5 nd 6 nw...u r a fabulous writer👏👏i luv u more dan jo dear...kyki uss luvly,fun luving jo ko to tune hi banaya h na...jst luved it a lot...nd dat Santaram u r a CHUDAIL part😆🤣luv u fr dat...plz update kr na...srry fr late reply yar actually i ws out of town...nd nw m waiting fr de nxt part eagerly...plz jldi se update de de na😊


thanks a lot
this is the best comment i ever had
nd update may be tomorrow
ab se i will be waiting for yr comments
to late mat krna
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update Plzz... My comment updated on page 29. Thank U
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Originally posted by: shahbhavini

<font color="#9900FF"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Vow what a superb update... I am so happy it was long...really satisfying...
I love their casual talk... Jalal has loss in business😲 poor chap...his dad make him angry and his father had two time heart attack... omg... I can feel what he probably gone through...and now his sis is better in business... uska ego kitna hurt hota hoga... I love their shopping and their nok jok... their chemeistry is lively... I feel bad for actors and their life... they don't get peace anywhere... Journalist and Fans... seriorusly...Jallu ki bend baja di hai... superb going... Story is getting more and more interesting. U are amazing writer...

Love it 👏👏👏 update soon... sorry for late comment</font>
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thank u sooo very much
i dont know how to handle this much love from all of u
THANK U is a very small word for yr luv
so i can only say that i will try my best to reach yr expectations
nd agains thanks bhavini
u r really very sweet
nd haan plz update yr ff as soon as possible
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Posted: 11 years ago
hello freinds
RECAP
jalal -what u want i will do but plz tell them to stop
jodha-ohk i want to go to yr place to meet yr family
jalal-but why no no no
jodha-girls rape him
jalal -ohhhkkk
jodha-girls dont disturb him nd security come
girls there is mirza nd maan in the pizza corner
(girls were now out nd jalal nd jodha was in the car cleaning his face with tissue (lipstic marks))
jalal-driver khan mansion le chalo
or tum i will see u
jodhA-u can see me now too

chapter7
jalal-did u inform yr bro
jodha-yup i texted him
jalal-gud
jodha thought to have some fun so she mimiced him
jodha-gud
jalal-what r u doing
.jodha-what r u doing
jalal-jodha
jodha-jodha
jalal-stop it nhi to u will regret it
jodha-stop it nhi toh will regret it
jalal-fine
jodha-fine
jalal-kiss me 😉
jodha-kiss me
(then she realised what she said)
jalal -jodha u want me to kiss u
jodha-u..u...t..trapped...(ineruptted)
jalal-i cant say no to yr wish
(after saying this he came near to her lips...jodha was lost in his eyes ...jodha can feel his breadth on her face she closed her eyes...
jalal from his lips came to her ears )
jalal-dont dare to mess with me,
jodha opened her eyes nd saw jalal laughing
jodha-idiot.duffer.dirty dog .pagal
jalal-i heard it
jodha-haan toh sunane k liye he kaha tha pagal nhi hu jo khud se baat krungi
(they reached mansion with their sweet fights)
jalal-lets go
jodha-haan haan (she was excited)
jalal-ohk plz behave nicely
jodha-i do behave nicely
jalal-ohk dont take much time we will only be here for half n hour
jodha-only half n hour
jalal-yeees
(they reached the entrance nd saw that the all three were busy in seeing tv with their mouth opened)
jodha said in a whisper-oye yeh to rishika hai naa
jalal also in whisper-tum kaise jaanti ho isse
jodha-arre u know she only gave me the award for paris fashion week nd u know she and his father runs the top fashion industry ...pehle his brother ..wat was his name...yes JMK used to run khan industry but ptani why he left ...vaise what she is doing in yr home?
jalal-she is my sister
jodha-ohhh...ek minute (shocked) that means u r JMK matlab u r not an actor matlab yrr tum hooo kaun?
jalal -tum chup kro maime tumhe btaya tha naa nd my full name is jalaluddin mohammad khan which implies to JMK
jodha-OYE MUJHE LAGA TU TO KISI CHOTTI MOTI COMPANY KI BAAT KR RHA HOGA BUT U R THE JMK OH MY GOD...
jalal-dont scream
lets go nd see in which thing they r tangle
(jodha and jalal go behind them nd saw that all news channels were telling their fake luv
all the news channels were covered with different types of headings some were like"did jalal khan lost his heart to santrams darling sis " "the superstar was single nd now ready to mingle with fashionista" "is jodha singh has stolen the heart of the hot khan"
there many pics of jalal nd jodha too in which jalal had hold jodha's hand...jalal was helping jodha in shopping...
nd there was a bold headline in the top of all
"the beautiful girl had changed the boy ... who never talked to his fans was happy with his gf nd was not angry")
jodha -OMG YE KYA HO GYA JALAL,...THIS IS BECAUSE OF U
jalal-stop screaming like hell...itz normal media always does things like this only i told u naaa
yr brother also understands it
nd just shut yr mouth
(the three of then now luking at both of them )
jalal-ammi(they hugged)
hamida-beta how r u
jalal -ammi i m fine
rishika jumped over jalal-bhai jaan
jalal-rishi kaisi hai
rishi -gud bhaiya
humayun-beta
jalal-dad i m gud(said coldly)
hamida-beta ye news
jalal-ammi itz all fake actually santram sir told me to take her for shopping nd after that she wanted to meet u all so i..
rishika-acha kiya bhaiya i am meeting her after 6 months u know she had won...
jalal-rishi i know
hamida-beta introduce her
jalal-jodha say hi
jodha-nodded positively
jalal-u wanted to meet them naa
jodha-again nodded
jalal-why r u not speaking speak
jodha -arre u said me to shut my mouth naa
nd u told me too behave nicely too so i m behaving nicely naa... eat almonds...u forget things very fast
jalal-ptani kyu mai tum se mila
jodha- zindagi kisi ki mohataaj nhi hoti
dosti sirf ehsaas nhi hoti
kuch toh socha hoga
us khuda ne
vrna hamari aapse is tarah mulaqaat nhi hoti
jalal-ptani kya socha hai
hamida-beta u r really a very gud shayar
jodha-kya krun aunty ji bachpan ki aadat hai naa it cant go easily
humayun-beta but itz true from where u got these shyaris
jalal-arre yeh toh truck ke piche nhi likhi hoti ...she learn that ones nd tell everyone that it is her creation
jodha-haaaww jhooth(shocked eyes widened)
this time jalal mimiced her
jalal-haaaW jooth
😆
jodhA-dirty dog ...every time teases me
jalal-haaaw jhooth 😆
jodha-aunty mjhe bhook lag rahi hai 😡
jalal-abhi toh humne khaya tha
jodha-haaw when did we ate
yr dumbo fans came nd started kissing u
usse yr stomach would have full but not mine
jalal-ohk we will go out nd eat something
jodha-i will eat here only
hamida-haan beta come bohut time ho gya u havent ate with us
jalal-hmmm

DINING TABLE
humayun-beta what r u doing ?(related work)
jodha-uncle ji abhi toh i m eating lile u only
jalal-hahahahagahaha oh god jodha u r such a dumbo
jodha-hawww.im not
jalal-acha
jodha-hmmm(with puppy eyes)
jalal-rishi see her hmmm
rishika-hmmm jodha
both laughed
jodha-ahan ahan ahan aunty they both r laughing on me scold them
ahan ahan
😭
hamida-beta aap chup ho jaao
or jalal chup raho
jalal-per ammi maine kya kiya
hamida-hmmm kaun kr raha tha
jalal nd rishika- 😆
jodha-now u r also teasing me
with this jallad nd this rishi kapoor
rishika -i m not rishi kapoor
jodha-but he always calls u rishi so i just thought
jalal-oh god jodha tum sochna band kr do 😆
jodha-yello (she put a green chilli on his mouth)
jalal drank a lot of water-ye kya kiya
why dont u think before doing things
jodha-u only told me to dont think naa
jalal-acha chalo ab
Jodha-cant we stay here
jalal-no
rishika -plz bhaiya
jalal-hmmm thiik hai
hamida- beta aapko kuch chahiye toh nhi naa
jodha-umm no ummm yes i mean no
jalal-ye lo(he gave her a chocolate)
jodha-tumhe kaise pata
jalal-nhi khana mat khao
jodha-arre ab tum ne laa he dia hai toh i cant break yr heart naa
jalal-ager thats the problem toh dont take tension coz i dont have heart
jodha-oh really
u know jalal that whenever u see a child begging yr heart melts but aunty he is still a heartless person... haina jalal? u wants to enjoy ...u wants to feel yr life but u r just hiding yr feelings becoz u still think yrself for yr father's condition but what u think jalal .. this behaviour of yours makes him proud ..? the answer is no jalal nd you too knows it very well but u dont want to express it ... jalal yr father is dieing every minute cursing himself for yr cruel behaviour...jalal i just want to say that very few people are blessed with their parents nd u too r one of them ... i dont have any right to say like this to u but still enjoy yr life ...jalal u r really very lucky
(jalal was dumbstruck ... he doesnt except this maturety from her but he cant deny that she was true ...he was with her but as his ego was again came in front of him so after 2 mins he just let thos out)
jalal-again that jodha baba came in u
jodha-tumm naa(interuptted)
jalal-eat yr chocolate it is melting
u go into rishika's room nd fresh ho jaao
jodha-oh yes now its too melty ... arre jalal plz bring my night suit from the car
jalal-arre how could i?
jodha-arre u were also with me naa ...plllzzz bring that pink one naa
jalal-all yr dresses r mostly pink
rishika-arre waah bhaiya kya baat hai u noticed her dresses colour too
jalal-RISHIII.
jodha-yrr plz naa..
jalal-thiik hai fir baad me mat kehna

(jalal brought the pink night suit after half n hour as it was difficult to search in between a huge mountain of clothes...jodha nd rishika were sitting in jalal's room)

jodha -yrr tere bhai ka room is so dull.. full of black nd grey chiii
rishika-so tumhe kaise colours pasand hai
jodha-ohh i luv pink ...blue ...golden ..matlab all bright colours not like black or grey like yr bro's room
jalal -so what u want ... ki my room should also like yr girly room
jodha-u r such a(interuptted)
jalal-i know ..i know ..i m meany
jodha-u dirty dog give my dress to me
jalal-haan haan yello kaunsa i will wear it
jodha- vaise bhi it willl not fit u...or bahar jaao i have to change
rishika-jodha dont change here come with me
nhi to bhai will have wild dreams...haina bhaiya 😉
jalal-rishiii 😡
jodha -matlab
jalal nd rishika -KUCH NI
jodha-why r u screaming
rishika-chodo naa jodha... ye btaoo tumhara birth day kab aata hai
jodha-mera vo ...umm m...vo...i want to drink water i just come
(she carried her hand bag nd was about to go)
rishika-jodha give me this bag i will pick it
jodha-n.nhi m.mai ...kr.lungi
(she ran to kitchen leaving confused jalal nd rishi)
jodha to herself-it happened because of me ...i am ..un..unlucky...m..my head...is..p..paining ...i ...i waant ...my pills ...but ...but i had promised moti ...but ...i...want it
(she took her bag nd picked a cylindrical container full of medicines...she took five pills and have it)
now it is gud... i am not panicing now ... sry moti but whenever i remember that day i start going into depression ... i know it could be dangerous but sry i will not do it again promise,...
(when she was lost in herself ...jalal saw her having pills...she was sweating)
jalal -these medicines...kya hua tumhe?
jodha'-m.medicines...nhi...nhi toh...itz n...nothing...d..dont take it seriously
letz go
jalal-per jodha ...i think...
jodha -dont think chalo bye i m going to rishika 's room bbye
(she ran to rishika 's room ...she changed her dress...talked to her nd soon rishika slept...jodha slowly took her hand bag from table nd put it beside her pillow nd slept promising herself that she will not take pills again)
(here jalal was thinking about jodha's different behaviour but soon slept thinking it as her childishness)




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Edited by aisha.....11110 - 11 years ago
yurimehta11 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow aisha you wrote beautifully this ss all chapters are good but this one is awesome
i am eagerly waiting for next part update soon
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aisha.....11110 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: yurimehta11

wow aisha you wrote beautifully this ss all chapters are good but this one is awesome
i am eagerly waiting for next part update soon


thaaank youu so very much
it means a lot too meee 😃
aisha.....11110 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful Update!! 👍🏼 👍🏼
It was so fun to read. Please update soon, you write so well. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow lovely update yaar!! Did her parents die on her birthday??? Is that y she panicked and was getting depressed?? I m just guessing😊 Anyway update the next chapter soon!!

Thx for the pm!!

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