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aisha

@aisha.....11110

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: rima4ever
excellent update😊

😊

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aisha

@aisha.....11110

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: rishbala3018
Wow lovely update yaar!! Did her parents die on her birthday??? Is that y she panicked and was getting depressed?? I m just guessing😊 Anyway update the next chapter soon!!

Thx for the pm!!

yup
this is also a reason
btw thanx for yr lovely comment

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sara

@SARA4444

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

🤗superrb update👏⭐️

jalal and jodha 😆😆

but,

why is jodha taking depression pills????

why is jalal not close to his father?

really excited to read the next update

update soon😊😊

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aisha

@aisha.....11110

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: SARA4444
🤗superrb update👏⭐️
jalal and jodha😆😆
but,
why is jodha taking depression pills????
why is jalal not close to his father?
really excited to read the next update
update soon😊😊

jalal thinks himself responsible for his father' heart attacks
jodha's mystry... guess it
btw thannnk youu

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sree1413

@sree1413

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

Awesome update ...👍🏼
I can't control my laugh, its was so fun to read...😆

continue soon...😊

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

unres... Vow wonderful interesting update... I love Jalal's family... and Jo and Ja's nok jok... such a cute lovely couple they are...fight each other all the time..😆 Jodha got surpise by JMK... and rishika is so sweet sister... she tease his brother all the time... I love Jo's shayri... and Hamida such a sweet humble lady... Jalal is cold with his father... probably he is guilty inside for his health...
OMG... YEH kya Jo in depression medication?😕😲 hope she is fine... LOVE LOVE LOVE this update... U know I love your writing because it's very simple but effective... U R really Awesome writer... Update soon

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aasiya49

@aasiya49

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Wow fantastic !!!! Update will unres soon...!!!

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unisha

@unishaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

superb.. Like it.. Thanks for pm

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

Nice update continue soon & pm me tks👏

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Radz

@...Radhika...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#200

chapter7
jalal-did u inform yr bro
jodha-yup i texted him
jalal-gud
jodha thought to have some fun so she mimiced him
jodha-gud
jalal-what r u doing
.jodha-what r u doing
jalal-jodha
jodha-jodha
jalal-stop it nhi to u will regret it
jodha-stop it nhi toh will regret it
jalal-fine
jodha-fine

jalal-kiss me 😉
jodha-kiss me HeHe Jodha apne hi jaal me phas gayi! AWESOME

(then she realised what she said)
jalal -jodha u want me to kiss u
jodha-u..u...t..trapped...(ineruptted)
jalal-i cant say no to yr wish
(after saying this he came near to her lips...jodha was lost in his eyes ...jodha can feel his breadth on her face she closed her eyes...
jalal from his lips came to her ears )
jalal-dont dare to mess with me,
jodha opened her eyes nd saw jalal laughing
jodha-idiot.duffer.dirty dog .pagal
jalal-i heard it
jodha-haan toh sunane k liye he kaha tha pagal nhi hu jo khud se baat krungi
(they reached mansion with their sweet fights)
jalal-lets go
jodha-haan haan (she was excited)
jalal-ohk plz behave nicely
jodha-i do behave nicely
jalal-ohk dont take much time we will only be here for half n hour

Instruction aise ki shadi ke liye patane jaa raha ho!

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE!!
CONTINUE SOON!! THANKS FOR PM!👏

Edited by PupCat - 11 years ago

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