SEVEN Shots~Laal Ishq~*HOLI SPCL* ESP UPDATE*SR* ON PAGE 38(COMPLETED)

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onaisa

@onaisa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

it ws really nyc👍🏼 plz do PM me d nxt chapter 😊

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ash

@ashpat

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

this was lovely os. i really liked how jalal took care of each detail of holi and they way he woke her up.i hope to c this in show. plzzz update soon.thx for pm.

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

beautifully written dear...loved the 1st part😊u explained so beautifully about each and every action of jalal to make jodha's day spl and colorful

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Wow...lovely start Pallavi!! Loved Jalal's plan and the surprise planned so much in detail!! Jalal waking Jo up was so sweet..cute scene!

Continue soon!!!🤗

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meghajj

@meghajj

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Pallavi di it was so amazing 👏

Full of love and care wali holi...by this u made holi so romantic☺️

Plz update soon both 3 shot and my most lovable ff ishaqzade

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Awesome and beautiful..
Loved it,Pallu di...
Jalal made preparations to surprise Jodha on Holi.
Maan Singh and Mirza to become the cupids.
Aww...
Sooo cutieee...
Continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm..

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

👏omg😃😃😃!!!! awesome⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️... I will update my comment tonight... love u jaan 🤗🤗🤗

Pallu... Holi ke rang me rang dala tune... vow...dil bagbag ho gya... sachi me UR superb se bhi upar... mene ek hi saas me poori os padhi... tooo good... Love it so much...

Yaar it's been a year... Last holi ka panga me bhool gayi thi... poor Jo suppressing herself and not playing holi... then Maan and Mirza... I can't wait for bhang part...Yaar mene pehle bhi kaha hai... aur phir se... tu kuch bhi likh aur kisi ke liye bhi likh... amazing... Then Moti help Jalal ...so sweet... I love that part Jalal gets help from Moti to impress Jo...

In the room... My sleeping beauty... Hi Jo ke kya nakhre hai... Poor Jallu kese bachaye apne appko...

Mera dil pink hogya... I love the part he gift her dress... white and pink ...I love that combination... I have imagine every scene of this os... Jo looks so pretty in pink and white... Entire part was full of romance and their mithi nok jok... Yaar tu kese kar leti hai... U mold story amazingly... I love how she gets ready and impatient Jalal walks in and poor Jallu gone case... I don't blame him... yaar wo aese tyar hogi to usme Jallu ka kya dosh...Jalal suddenly tell her she looks good in open hair... she leave her hair open... and Jalal smile...awww... I pictured Rajat smiling so cute... Finally surprise time... she opens her eyes and awww...

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT👏👏... YAAR YE SUPER SE UPAR HAI... TERI WRITING PE MAR JAVA...YAAR U ARE SUPERB... AWESOME... AMAZING WRITER...I AM SO BLESSED U LOVE ME AND I LOVE U... SWEETU JALDI UPDATE KARNA... ME WATING...😃😃😃🤗🤗🤗

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago