SEVEN Shots~Laal Ishq~*HOLI SPCL* ESP UPDATE*SR* ON PAGE 38(COMPLETED) - Page 5

so i m back with the third and last part of this TS...😉

plz forgive the writing mistakes if any

(Jodha's head was spinning a bit...her vision has turned blurry so she was not able to open her eyes completely...she shook her head to get rid of this unusual effect but all in vain...she again tumbled after walking few steps and this time was about to fall...when Jalal caught her in time...wrapped his one hand around her belly so that she doesn't land on the floor...till now everyone present their had surrounded them and all were way too flabbergasted seeing Jodha like that...Mirza smirked mischievously as he found his plan moving in right direction...while Maan singh worried now...seeing his bua saa's condition...the way she was swinging made him feel that she consumed the drug more than it was needed...he mumbled to Mirza..."HUMNE KAHA THA NA...LEKIN TUMHE TO APNE AAGE KISI KI BAAT SUNNI HI NAHI THI...AB YAHA JO HOGA USKE ZIMMEDAAR SIRF TUM HOGE MIRZA..."...and he moved his head sideways in disappointment...Maan's gesture made Mirza a bit worried too...he was about to say something when Jodha spoke out at once...and everyone's attention again shifted towards her...)

PS: - from now onwards whatever Jodha will speak...it will be in all drunken tone...ok so I m not writing it with every dialogue...😆

Jalal: -(still holding her with his arm) samhaal ke Jodha begum...aap theek to hai na...

Jodha: -(instead of answering him...She smiled trickily and innocently...looking at him with her half open...half closed eyes...spoke out in a drunk tone) hmmm...hmmm...

(Jalal was clueless...he said all confused..."Kya hmmm...?"...)

Jodha: - hmmm...hume sab pata hai...kitne chalak hai na aap shenshah...koi mauka nahi chorte...paristhiti ka laabh uthana to koi aap se sikhe...hmmm...

(Jodha's words made Jalal conscious that he was touching her bare belly...and suddenly he felt his hand burning due to the touch...being way too embarrassed he immediately withdrew his hand...and helped her to stand by holding her arm...but Jodha jerked it off...and again moved away...Jalal tried to stop her..."Jodha begum...aap apne hosh me nahi hai...chaliye...apne hojre me chaliye..."...but she pushed him away...)

Jodha: - bhitar chale?...paagal ho gaye hai kya aap shenshah?...are abhi to Holi shuru hui hai... (She moved towards a nearby table and took gulal in both of her hands and threw it towards the sky and screamed out loud)...HOLI...HAIII... (Now she looked upon the people surrounding her...all were standing there...looking at her...all confused and clueless...)...are kya hua...aap log ruk kyu gaye??...kheliye na...Holi hai...Holi ke din dil khil jaate hai rango me rang mil jaate hai...hmm... (and she started singing and swinging...and again moved towards the drink stall...and picked another glass and started drinking...but Jalal snatched it from her hand...saying..."pehle hi bahut pi chuki hai aap Jodha begum...khuda ke liye...bus kariye ab..."...but she was adamant...she kept on struggling with him to get the glass back...but in the process the glass fell down on the ground...seeing her thandaai all scattered over the floor...she started crying loudly...pushed jalal...."aapki himmat kaise hui??...humari thandaai niche gira di...uhhu...uhhu..." ...she was all crying when her eyes caught hamida and she moved towards her...complaining about what happened..."dekhiye na ammi jaan...aapke jallad bte ne humari thandaai gira di...khadoos shenshah... jallad kahin ke..."...Jalal's eyes widened in shock like anything and so as everyone...he was like...what the...she called me Jallad...but before he could reply her remark...Hamida hugged her and spoke out consoling her...she had understood very well till now that Jodha has got drunk..."KOI BAAT NAHI BETA...HUM DUSRI DILA DEGE AAPKO...JAANE DIJIYE...AAP ROYIYE NAHI..."...and wiped out her lone tear...Jodha smiled back at her and said...cupping her face..."AAP KITNI ACHI HAI AMMI JAAN...PATA HAI JAB HUMNE PEHLI BAAR AAGRA ME KADAM RAKHA THA NA...HUME LAGA THA JAISE HUM KISI PAAGAL KHAANE ME AA GAYE HO...JISKO DEKHO BINA BAAT GHURTA REHTA THA...KUCH PUCHO TO ESE DEKHTA THA MAANO HUMNE USKI AANKHEN MAANG LI HO...MAGAR AAP..."...hugging her..."AAP AKELI ESI THI JINHONE HUME SAMJHA... HUMESHA HUMARA SAATH DIYA...AAP BAHUT ACHI HAI AMMI JAAN...AAP HUME BAHUT ACHI LAGTI HAI..."...and with it she kissed on her cheek...Hamida was pleasantly surprised...she dint know what to say...she just smiled back amazingly at her...Jodha was all falling over Hamida...when Salima tried to support her..."ARE ARE JODHA BEGUM...SAMHALIYE APNE AAPKO"...Jodha looked at Salima at once...and exclaimed out at once in a loud tone..."SALIMA BEGUM..."...stretching her arms...hugged her tightly...almost squeezing her...Salima too smiled surprisingly..."AAP...AAP BHI BAHUT ACHI HAI...PATA HAI HUM APNI SAARI BEHNO ME SABSE BADE THE...HUMESHA EK BADI BEHEN KI KAMI KHALTI THI HUME...AAPNE HUMARE JIVAN ME WO KAMI PURI KAR DI...UMMAAHHH..."...and another kiss...seeing water going above head...Jalal again tried to stop her..."JODHA BEGUM AAP...??"...but Jodha shushed him up abruptly...and said putting her index finger over her lips..."SHHH...JAB DO BEGUMEN AAPAS ME BAAT KAR RAHI HO...TO SHENSHAH KO BEECH ME NAHI BOLNA CHAHIYE...ITNA BHI NAHI PATA KYA AAPKO...?"...Jalal looked at her helplessly...put hand over his head...all troubled...not getting how to handle his drunken angel...)

(Jodha was encountering each and everyone...one by one...now it was Maan's turn...she noticed Maan's scared expressions..."ARE MAAN SINGH..."...Maan got even more tensed..."OH NO...DID SHE COME TO KNOW ANYTHING...?"...Jodha moved towards Maan all swinging and tumbling...and hugged her one sided putting hand around his shoulder..."KYA HUA BETA??...AAP ITNE DARE HUE KYU HAI?...KISI NE KUCH KAHA KYA AAPSE??...APNI BUA SAA KO BATAYIYE...HMMM??..."...Maan nodded in a no...indicating nothing happened...he couldn't dare to speak anything at that time...Jodha glared at him..."ARE AAP DAR KYU RAHE HAI...AAPKI BUA SAA HAI NA AAPKE SAATH..."...now looking around at everyone..."KAAN KHOLKE SUN LO SAB...AGAR KISI NE BHI HUMARE BHATIJE KO KUCH KAHA TO HUMSE BURA KOI NAHI HOGA...YE JODHA BEGUM KA AADESH HAI...HUM APNI TALWAR SE USKA SAR KALAM KAR DEGE..."...now looked back at Maan Singh...."HUMNE DAANT DIYA HAI HAAN...AB KOI KUCH NAHI KAHEGA HUMARE BHATIJE KO..."...and she pulled his cheek like he is any teddy bear...Mirza couldn't stop himself and giggled out loud at this...it caused Jodha's gaze to shift towards him...."AAPKO BADI HANSI AA RAHI HAI DEVAR JI...HMMM??"...and his smile got vanished in a flick of second..."WAISE EK BAAT KAHEN...KYA THANDAAI PILAYI AAPNE HUME...??...AGAR AAP YAAD NA DILATE TO HUM TO BHUL HI GAYE THE KE HUMNE THANDAAI CHAKHI HI NAHI..."...Mirza was shocked...he dint expect that Jodha will reveal his truth like this...in front of everyone...Jalal glared at Mirza really angrily...Mirza nodded his head in a no..."BHAI JAAN..HUMNE TO SIRF THANDAAI DI THI BHABHI JAAN KO...HUME KYA PATA THA KE USME BHAANG HOGI...HUMNE KUCH NAHI KIYA..."...but seeing Jalal not getting conviced and still staring with threatening look...he lowered his sight...)

(On the other side...Jodha...till now had overhauled almost every individual present there...and only one was left now...she turned at once to look at the person...smiled playfully...and spoke out loud at once..."SHENSHAAHHH...!!!!"😆...almost singing out his name...For the first time in life...Jalal was terribly scared from someone...he made a really horrible face...not being able to guess what would she be doing with him now...??...Jodha slowly but steadily made her way towards Jalal...staring at him with her intoxicating gaze...Jalal felt really uncomfortable...he adjusted his robe looking partially at her...Jodha reached by his side...and almost fell over him due to tumbling...Jalal quickly held her arm for support...she gazed at him from head to toe..Like Examining him...and said all drunk..."AAP SAMAJHTE KYA HAI APNE AAPKO HAAN??...BADE AAYE...HINDUSTAN KE SHENSHAH...MANA KE DIKHNE ME THIK THAK LAGTE HAI AAP...MAGAR ISKA MATLAB YE THODI HAI KE APNI SUNDARTA PE GHAMAND KARNE LAGE AAP..."...Jalal was more than shocked...is she really Jodha??...he stared at her angrily...but Jodha was in her own world...This dint affect her much...she continued..."GHUR KYA RAHE HAI...HAAN??...GHURNA HUME BHI AATA HAI...HUM AAPSE NAHI DARTE...SAMJHE AAP...AGAR AAP SHENSHAH JALALUDDIN MOHAMMAD HAI TO HUMARA NAAME BHI JODHA BAAI HAI"...with it she held his choler and glared at him with double intensity...Jalal understood that there is no use talking to her right now...so he preferred ignoring her for the moment...and looked at others and instructed in stern voice..."AAJ KA JASHAN YEHI KHATAM HOTA HAI...AB AAP SAB APNE APNE HOJRE ME JAA SAKTE HAI...TAQLIYA..."...everyone understood the situation and left from there...Jodha tried to stop them..."ARE AAP LOG KAHA JAA RAHE HAI...HUME ABHI AUR KHELNA HAI...RUKIYE...WAPAS AAYIYE.."...but they left leaving Jodha and Jalal...all alone...Jodha turned back at Jalal with fiery looks...."YE KYA KIYA AAPNE...??...HUM..."...but before she could comprehend further...Jalal suddenly put his one hand under her knees and lifted her up...hanging her over his shoulder...with her belly against his shoulder...and started moving hastily out from there...Jodha kept on shouting and hitting his back meanwhile...asking stubbornly to leave her...but it was enough for Jalal...he dint respond to any of her tactics and kept moving...They were about to cross the pond area when suddenly Jodha punched on his back very hard that made his grip to get loose on her knees...and she jumped out from his hold and ran towards the pond...Jalal followed her...begging her to plz stop...but she dint listen and kept on running towards pond...teasing him...showing her tongue..That he won't be able to catch her ever...As she reached near the bank of the lake...suddenly her leg slipped and she fell down in the pond...Jalal shouted out loud...worried..."JODHA BEGUM..."...he quickly approached towards the bank and looked around in the pond for Jodha...but she was nowhere to be found...Jalal has just started panicking...when Jodha raised her head out from the water at once...pushing her long hairs back at once...caressing them literally...all drenched and her clothes clinging to her body like a second skin...Jalal felt like something hit his chest really hard...as his heart skipped a beat...he felt his body almost numb for the moment...his eyes at once got filled with passion for her...but he somehow controlled his emotions and forwarded his hand towards Jodha...requesting her to come out...but Jodha was in a naughty mood...she first denied throwing tantrums...but after much requests from his side...she held his hand...but instead of coming out...she pulled him inside the lake...and Jalal fell into the pond with a huge splashing sound...he elevated his head up...and coughed loudly...due to the water stuck in his throat...looked at her with an extremely annoyed look..."YE KYA KIYA AAPNE JODHA BEGUM??...PURA BHIGA DIYA HUME...??...HUMNE AAPKO BAHAR NIKALNE KE LIYE HAATH BADHAYA THA AUR AAPNE HUME HI ANDER KHINCH LIYE...AB BAHUT JYADA HO RAHA HAI..."...Jodha replied with a mischievous smile..."ABHI TO HUMNE KUCH KIYA HI NAHI SHENSHAH...KAREGE TO AB..."...and she took a hand full of water and threw it towards him...and in no time..she started splashing water on him continuously...Jalal tried to cover his face with his hands...but all in vain...he couldn't escape from her attacks...so in response...he too started throwing water at her...and they kept on playing in the pond with water like two naughty children...finding Jodha winning over him...he suddenly held her hand and pulled her towards him...Jodha landed on his chest with a thud...with her hairs embracing his neck...Jalal lost his control a bit...and slid his hand around her wet, smooth and bare waist...and with other freed his neck from the grip of her locks...Jodha looked at him all smiling innocently while Jalal looked at her with desire full eyes...Jodha was over drunk so she was not in her senses...she dint know what was happening...she slowly put her head over his chest...with other hand placed on his heart...and spoke out in a swinging yet soft voice..."PATA HAI SHENSHAH...JAB HUMARA VIVAH HUA THA..US SAMAY HUM AAPKO BILKUL BHI PASAND NAHI KARTE THE...HUME LAGA THA KE HUMARE BAAPU SAAA NE RAJYA KE LIYE HUMARA SAUDA KAR DIYA HAI...AUR WO BHI EK ESE VYAKTI KE SAATH JISSE HUM ASIMIT GHRINA KARTE HAI...KINTU PARISTHITIYA*conditions* IS TARAH BADAL JAYEGI HUMNE KABHI SOCHA BHI NAHI THA...HUM AAP PER BHAROSA KARTE HAI AB SHENSHAH...HUME VISHWAAS HAI KE CHAHE JO HO JAAYE...KINTU JAB TAK AAP HUMARE SAATH HAI...HUME KUCH NAHI HO SAKTA...AAP BAHUT ACHE HAI SHENSHAH...AAP BAHUT ACHE HAI..." )

(Jodha's words cause Jalal's grip on her waist to lose a bit...he opened his eyes with a startle...and thought to himself..."NO JALAL...YOU CAN'T DO THIS...JUST LOOK AT HER...SHE TRUSTS YOU SO MUCH...RIGHTNOW SHE IS NOT IN HER SENSES...SHE IS DRUNK...YOU CAN'T TAKE ADVANTAGE OF HER SITUATION...THOUGH SHE WILL NOT STOP YOU AT THIS STAGE BUT YET...SHE TRUSTS YOU FROM HER HEART...YOU CAN'T BREAK HER TRUST..."...and with it he moved her head aside...and cupped her face...and said affectionately...looking in her eyes with immense love for her in them..."HUM AAPKA BHAROSA TUTNE NAHI DENGE JODHA BEGUM...HUM TO EK SANGDIL...PATHAR DIL INSAAN THE...AGAR AAJ AAP HUME NEK MANTI HAI TO ISKI WAJAH BHI SIRF AAP HAI...AAP HUMARI ZINDAGI ME WO SUBAH BANKAR AAYI HAI...JISNE HUMARE MUSTAKBIL KE SAARE ANDHERO KO DOOR KAR DIYA...AAP HUMARE LIYE BAHUT KHAAS HAI...AUR HUM APNI KHAAS BEGUM KE YAKIN KO KABHI TUTNE NAHI DEGE..."..."AB HUMARI AAPSE ILTEJA HAI...AAP APNE HOJRE ME CHALIYE...PLZZ..."...Jodha finally accepted his request and nodded her head but said in a childish voice..."THEEK HAI...LEKIN HUM JAAYE KAISE...HUMARE PAIR ME TO BAHUT DARD HO RAHA HAI...HUMSE CHALA NAHI JAYEGA..."...Jalal looked at her with an awww expression...and said all smiling innocently...."YOU ARE JUST IMPOSSIBLE...I NEVER FELT THIS HELPLESS IN FRONT OF ANYONE...BUT YOU ALWAYS GET SUCESSFUL IN MAKING ME RUN AFTER YOU...OK MY BAAGHIN...I WILL TAKE YOU TO YOUR ROOM...YOU STUBBORN BABY..."...and with it he lifted her up in his arms still looking at her...came out from the lake...and made his way towards Jodha's room...meanwhile Jodha encircled his neck with her arms...and rested her head on his shoulder...Jalal smiled widely at his princess...and felt a bit proud too...having her in his life...and that she belonged to him only...)

(while walking towards the room...she pleaded Jalal that she want to climb on his back...as his Baapu saa used to do when she was child...Jalal got surprised with her request...he looked at her all amazed..."YOU ARE NOT A KID NOW JODHA BEGUM...DON'T YOU HAVE ANY IDEA...HOW HEAVY YOU ARE NOW??...EVEN YOUR BAAPU SA WONT BE ABLE TO LIFT YOU NOW..."...but Jodha is Jodha...the most stubborn girl in the whole universe...she kept on insisting him...she troubled him so much that he was not able to even walk further...as she kept on shaking him...finally giving up in front of his baaghin's wish he agreed and put her down...and bend down so that she can easily climb over his back...Jodha quickly encircled his neck from behind and signaled him to lift her up...Jalal put his hand around her thighs and stood up with Jodha resting on his back...she became so much delighted that she started singing...almost mumbling in his ear..."ANG SE ANG LAGANA...SAJAN HUME ESE RANG LAGANA...HO...ANG SE ANG LAGANA SAJAN HUME ESE RANG LAGANA..."...and finally like this they reached to Jodha's room...Jalal kept on grinning at her all the while...shook his head at his destiny..."kya kya karna pad raha hai ya khuda??")

(As they reached to Jodha's room...Jalal tends to put her down...but she shouted out loud at once...that scared him and he stopped...)

Jodha: -(clutching his shoulders tight) nahi hume niche mat utariyega...hum doob jayege...

Jalal: -(confused) doob jayege...?? Magar yaha paani kha hai Jodha begum...??

Jodha: - (looked around and found that he was right...)...haan paani to nahi hai...lekin phir bhi hum doob jayege...

(Seeing Jodha not getting convinced...he moved towards the bed and said..."ACHA THEEK HAI...DEKHIYE YAHA THODA UNCHA HAI NA...YAHA UTAREGE TO NAHI DOOBEGI AAP...AUR AGAR PHIR BHI KUCH HUA TO HUM HAI NA...HUM BACHA LEGE AAPKO..."...and she got convinced finally and Jalal put her down on the bed...and looked at her all smiling..."DEKHA...NAHI DOOBI NA AAP...ACHA AB AAP AARAM FARMAYIYE...HUM CHALTE HAI..."...and he tends to move but Jodha held his hand...he looked back with shock..."AB KYA HUA...??"...she stared at him with an innocent face and said..."HUME AAPSE KUCH BAAT KARNI HAI..."..."NAHI JODHA BEGUM...ABHI AAP APNE HOSH ME NAHI HAI...AAP SO JAYIYE...HUM SHAM KO BAAT KAR LEGE...THEEK HAI...")

Jodha: - (in a protesting voice) nahi...hume abhi baat karni hai...abhi aur isi samay...

(Jalal gave up and sat in front of her on his knees on the bed...and said..."ACHA BABA...BOLIYE KYA BAAT KARNI HAI...")

Jodha: -(in a sad voice) aap hume itna pareshan kyu karte hai...??

Jalal: - (amazed) humne kab pareshan kiya aapko Jodha begum...

Jodha: - kyu...?? Jab dekho humare piche pade rehte hai...puchte rehte hai ke humne aapki jaan kyu bachayi...jab humne ek baar keh diya ke aap humare pati hai...aur aapki jaan bachana humara kartavya tha...phir aap humari baat kyu nahi mante...kyu hume tang karte rehte hai phir??

Jalal: -(smiled blushingly) haan...kyuki hume lagta hai ke ye pura sach nahi hai...humara dil ye manne ko taiyar nahi hota ke aapne hume sirf farz ke liye bachaya tha...kyuki hume lagta hai ke iske piche koi aur wajah hai...

Jodha: - (in a scolding voice)...haan...pata hai hume ke aap kya kehlvana chahte hai humse...yehi na ke hum aapse prem karte hai...to karte hai na prem...usme kaun si badi baat hai...

(Jalal's mouth and eyes got wide open in shock...he looked at Jodha all flabbergasted...it took a minute for him to understand what she just said...did she say...that she loves him...or his ears are at any fault...he held her shoulders tightly and pulled her towards him...and asked in a trembling voice..."kya...kya kaha aapne...??...aap...aap humse kya...?")

Jodha: - (in a casual tone) ek baar me sunai nahi deta kya aapko...bola na prem karte hai aapse...aur thoda nahi...balki...bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut(stretching her arms...indicating the amount of love that she had for him...) jyada prem karte hai...hum aapke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai...kuch bhi...because I LOVE YOU...(shouted more loudly than ever...)

(Jalal couldn't be able to hold his tears any longer...his eyes flooded with tears and started flowing down his cheeks involuntarily...only he knew...how much he waited for this moment...his happiness couldn't be expressed in words...he kept on gazing at her with his tears flowing like anything...he just pulled her towards him and hugged her really tight...)

Jalal:- (crying and laughing simultaneously) aap nahi janti ke aapne kya kaha hai aaj humse...sirf hum jante hai Jodha begum...ke aapki zubaan se ye lafz sunne ke liye kitni shiddat se intezaar kiya hai humne...hum bhi aapse beintehaan mohabbat karte hai Jodha begum...hum bhi aapke chehre per ek muskan lane ke liye apni jaan tak de sakte hai...aap andaaza bhi nahi laga sakti ke hum kitne khush hai...zindagi me itni khushi aaj tak kabhi mehsus nahi ki humne...hum walid banne wale the tab bhi nahi Jodha begum...humara man kar raha hai ke baar baar aapki zubaan se izhar e mohabbat sunte hi jaaye...aur ye silsila kabhi khatam naa ho...hum bhale hi hindustaan per raaz karte ho...magar humare dil ki mallika sirf aap hai...sirf aap....(and he hugged her more tightly)...hume to ab bhi yakin nahi ho raha...ek baar aur kahiye na...ke aap bhi humse mohabbat karti hai...khuda ke liye sirf ek baar aur...(but she dint respond...his voice turned a bit more impatient)...boliye na Jodha begum...chup kyu hai aap...kahiye na ek baar phir...(still no response...Jalal turned a bit sad now...he slightly moved back to look at her...but she had already fallen asleep due to over effect of bhang...and there she was sleeping peacefully in his arms...Jalal smiled but with little disappointment...he wanted to hear those words once again...but nevertheless at least she said that...he caressed her cheek with his hand...whispering..."meri pyari massom si shehzaadi...massom bhi aur khatarnaak bhi...bilkul baaghin ki tarah..."...and he laughed out lightly...placed a soft kiss on both of her eyes one after another...then bend forward to kiss on her lips...but stopped thinking something..."NO MY PRINCESS...I WONT TOUCH YOU LIKE THIS...I WILL WAIT FOR YOU UNTIL YOU CONFESS YOUR FEELINGS TO ME IN FULL CONSCIOUSNESS...TILL THEN YOU CAN HAPPILY LIVE IN MY HEART FOREVER... I LOVE YOU SO MUCH JODHA BEGUM...AND I PROMISE WE WILL BE ONE SOON..."...and with it he made her lie on the bed comfortably...and carefully...put blanket over her...and kissed on her forehead with the enormous love that was beyond words...and left from there...before moving out of the room...he turned back and looked at her all blushing..."YOU MADE MY DAY JODHA BEGUM...I WILL NEVER FORGET THIS HOLI EVER IN MY LIFE...THANK YOU SO MUCH..."...and he left from there with content and satisfied feeling inside his heart...)

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I really loved the fact that Jalal went out of his way to make Jodha happy on Holi. I think you did a very good thing keeping Maham and Ruqs out of this Holi Special!😃. Itne shubh avsar par unka hona, tyohar aur logon ke swasth ke liye hanikarak hai!😆. Mirza was the best! Seriously putting bhang in Jodha's thandai! His naughty and playful side was easily brought out by you! And Maan Singh was equally scared by his plan to drug Jodha!😆. But they made a good combo, even though only Mirza carried out the deed!😆. I also loved the part where he called Sukanya to celebrate Holi with her!😳. I was going all 'Aww...' over it!😳. Also, the scene in the war practice room was beautiful! He did not want to even kiss her till he knew that she loved him! Very sweet and loving of Jalal!😳. It proved that he did love a her a lot and did not want to force anything on her!😳. So romantic!. And what do I say about Part 3! OMG I was totally🤣. Jodha's nautanki was the best!😆. She kept saying rubbish under the influence of bhang!😆. But she also admitted to Jalal that she loved him!. But still Jalal vowed not to touch her till she confessed when she was in her senses!😳. I just loved that about Jalal!

Your characterisations were too good! Jalal was totally in love!. And Jodha for herself knows but she doesn't know how to tell him!😳. But I just loved it!😳😃. Keep up the good work!😳😃

Regards,

Samanika😊

Beautiful yaar.. will comment in detail later...

I am so lost in the chapter..

will read it again..!