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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 6-revenge
Jodha had returned to her room.she was happy with what she had done but also sad.this was not how she was. she could never hurt someone's feeling to get her own way.she never wanted her sister to marry in the Mughal family and now too she could not see that.but she could not go to such extremes.

Jodha-kanha humne shehanshah ke maan ko pida pahuchayi hain.hum jaante hain ki humne jo kiya woh galat kiya parantu yahi eklauta rasta hain.aap hume zaroor shama kardenge.iske baad hum kisi ko takleef nahi denge.
Hume yakeen hai ke itne apmaan ke baad shehanshah jalal ye vivaah zaroor tod denge.

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Maham had worked out a plan to give jodha a taste of her own medicine.she was happy with what she'd thought.she had already executed it and knew that nobody could save jodha now.

Maham(wicked smile)- aaj ki raat rajkumari jodha ko bezzat dekh hume beintehaa sukoon milega.

Resham-zaroor wazir-e-aliya.lekin aapke chehre ki khushi ka karan kya hain.

Maham-rajkumari jodha ko kya laga mughal saltanat mein aakar unki hi bezzati karengi.jalal ke diye tohfe ko aag mein dalkaar bahut badi bhul kar di unhone.aaj sham jab wo apne kapde pehnegi to kya izzat reh jayegi unki

Resham-hum kuch samjhe nahi.

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Shivani and sukanya were sitting in a room,admiring the beautiful presents they had received.

Shivani-jiji kitna sundar tohfa diya hain shehanshah ne.

Sukanya-haan shivani.aaj raat to mirza hakim tumko hi dekhte rah jayenge.

Shivani-jiji aisa kuch nahi hain

Sukanya-acha to tum iske siway koi aur rang kyun nahi pehna chahti thi. Isiliye na kyunki ye mirza hakim ka manpasandeeda rang hai

Shivani-jiji tum bhi na

Sukanya-humse tum kuch nahi chipa sakte.
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Maham-agar samajhti to humari jagah nahi hoti(laughs).hum ye keh rahe the ki

FLASHBACK
Mahamanga was busy thinking about what to do when an idea striked her mind.

She exited her room and went to the room where jodha was staying.luckily jodha was not in her room.her clothes-which she had decided to wear for the jashn were kept on her bed.

Mahamanga ensured that nobody was looking at her and tore jodha's outfit from the back(I know it's weird but think she did it in a way that would have an impact but go unnoticed by jodha)

PRESENT
Resham-kehna padega ki aap bahut shatir hain

Mahamanga-tabhi to hum wazir-e-aliya hain

Both of them laughed evilly.




Edited by gvsmu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
nahiii...jodha bechari...yeh mm koi aag main kyun nahi faik deta!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
loed the update dear...hpe poor jodhas modesty is saved !!!
by jalal ofcourse !! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Hayye bechari Jodha! Can't wait for the next update.. It's beautiful..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Awesome update poor jodha plz plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
nice update.
Dress ko chod ke maham ko aag mein fenk na chahiye tha.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Chapter 7-the saviour
Part1

Jodha was sitting in her room thinking why shehanshah had yet not called her dad to talk .she pondered over this decision of his and completely lost track of time.soon after ,rani mainavati entered jodha's room and saw her sitting on her bed.

Rani mainavati -hey bhagwan.jodha tumne ab tak vastr kyun nahi badle.jashn ka samay ho gaya hain.sabhi log taiyaar hain.tum Amer ki nak katwa dogi

Listening to this ,jodha got up from her bed and advanced towards her mother.

Jodha-hume maaf kar dijiye maasa hume samay ka dhyan hi nahi raha.

Rani mainavati - jodha tum ye bhul kaise kar sakti ho.ye Amer nahi hain.

Jodha-maasa aap baki sab ke saath prasthan kijiye hum bas vastr badalkar aate hain.
Mainavati glared at the clothes kept on her bed and noticed that they were not the ones given by jalal.

Mainavati-jodha yeh to mughal tohfa nahi hain

Jodha-wo (stammering) tohfa sahi banavat ka nahi tha.aap chinta na kare aur jashn ke liye jaiye.hum aate hain.

Jodha did not give mainavati any chance to speak and sent her for the jashn.

Jodha-(to herself)hume maaf kar dijiye maasa par hum aapko sach nahi bata sakte.

She went back to her bed and picked up the clothes she was supposed to wear.

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Jalal could not believe how jodha had talked to her.at that instant ,he wanted to break off the marriage but could not do so.he could not make shivani and mirza suffer because of jodha.

Jalal-rajkumari jodha ki wajah se hum mirza ko takleef nahi denge.lekin rajkumari jodha ko hum muaff nahi karenge.humari bezzatti ki saza to unhe milegi.agar is samay yahan rukaiya begum hoti to hume kuch madat mil jaati.(I know that I have not talked about rukaiya in any of my previous chapters but she exists.right know she is not required in the current story but would be coming in later chapters.right now she is at her birth place for some important work)

A few moments later a servant came in.

Servant-shehanshah jashn ke liye sabhi log ikhate ho Gaye hain

Jalal-theek hain.hum kuch samay me aate hain.
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Jodha had changed her clothes and was ready to go.in a hurry she did not notice the cut in her blouse at the back.she rushed out and started walking towards the court.

Jalal too left his room and started walking towards the court.

Jodha was crossing the garden when jalal saw her.he walked faster and was only a few feet behind her when he saw jodha's blouse torn from the back.it was a huge cut which revealed a lot more than what it should be.her entire back was visible to jalal.fearing what jodha would go through if anybody saw her in such a state he acted quickly.

Jodha was just about to enter the court when jalal pulled her from her shoulders pushing her into the adjacent room.he pulled her so quickly that she lost her balance and fell over him making him fall on the floor.

Both of them looked into each other's eyes with jalals hands on jodha's back.


Edited by gvsmu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
awsme!
Thnk god jalal saw jodha otherwise she would have been in trouble.
Update soon.
Thnx for pm.

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Add those people in ur buddy list who want pms . Then u can send joined pm to all except giving indivisual pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
awesome update..now waiting for next..plz pm me..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Hayye! My Jalal ❤️
Really nice update!

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